Hansta Hoon To Log Rooth Jate Hai...........Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on May 11, 2012, 10:26:08 AM
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Mai Jab Bhi Tez Chalta Hoon Nazare Chhoot Jate Hai.,
Koi Jab Roop Gadhta Hoon To Saanche Toot Jate Hai...

Mai Rota Hoon To Aakar Log Kandha Thapthapate Hai.,
Mai Hansta Hoon To Aksar Log Mujhse Rooth Jate Hai...
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2012, 10:31:00 AM »
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Touhid bhaai is ghazal ko pooraa karo badee achhee bahr hai in 4 lines men hee mazaa aa gayaa main maantaa hoon qaafiye kam padenge pat foot loot aur qafiyon ko repet bheee kar sakte ho rau maine de diya hai ek aur tab doongaa jab kal ise muqammal ghazal kahoge
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2012, 10:50:18 AM »
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Touhid bhaai is ghazal ko pooraa karo badee achhee bahr hai in 4 lines men hee mazaa aa gayaa main maantaa hoon qaafiye kam padenge pat foot loot aur qafiyon ko repet bheee kar sakte ho rau maine de diya hai ek aur tab doongaa jab kal ise muqammal ghazal kahoge

bahut bahut shukriya saini sahab...

insha allah bahut jald ise poori karne ki kosis karunga... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2012, 11:00:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2012, 11:04:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank u... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2012, 11:17:17 AM »
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Bahut Badhiya lines........ Tohid ji. ! rau meri taraf se in lines ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2012, 11:34:44 AM »
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Bahut Badhiya lines........ Tohid ji. ! rau meri taraf se in lines ke liye

Thank u so much Pramod ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 01:30:15 PM »
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Tauhid sahab--
jahan tak mujhe pata hai ye lines mashhoor kavi Dr. Kumar Biswas ji ki hain.
maine 1 saal pehle apne freshers me iss kavita ke saare gaano ko gaa kar sunai thi coz ye meri fav. kavitaon me se ek hai.

aap agr share kar rahe kisi ki poetry to plzz NM likha karen--

aur agar ye aapki poetry h to fir shayd meri khwledge baht kam hai shayri/kavitaon par.

sukriya
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2012, 10:21:26 AM »
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truly said...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2012, 06:24:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause khoob kaha.touhid sahab. Ghazal ka intezar rahega.
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2012, 06:26:19 PM »
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Kya sarfira ji ki baat sahi hai. .?
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