HAQEER,ky

by kameeney on June 10, 2010, 07:51:49 PM
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           Meri Ghurbat Ne Mujhe Ko  Haqeer Kar Diya,
           Warna Ashiqee Mein Hum Bhi Moqaam Rakhte Hain! icon_king

       
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2010, 08:18:46 PM »
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           Meri Ghurbat Ne Mujhe Ko  Haqeer Kar Diya,
           Warna Ashiqee Mein Hum Bhi Moqaam Rakhte Hain! icon_king
   

Waah Sahab, bahot khoob...

Teri shohbat ne mujhko faqeer kar diya,
Mai bhi tha baadshah teri Ashiqee se pahley!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2010, 12:21:58 AM »
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Bohat Achche KY Ji,.
Aur Dr Pandey Ji,.

Aapke In Ashaaron Ne Kuch Bayaan Karne Ki Himmat Di,.

Ek Koshihs Apni Bhi,.


The Mufleesi Mein Giraft Hum Zindagi Bhar "Doston,.
Jahan Bhi Rahe Pyaar Ka Khazaana Lutaate Rahe,.

Maana Ke Manzil Hamaare Haq Mein Na Thi "Azeem,.
Raaste Pe Khardke Sabko Raahein Dikhaate Rahe,.

Kya Hua Jo Samander Ne Hume Thukraa Diya,.
Hum To Khatron Se Bhi Apni Pyaas Bujhaate Rahe,.

Meri Gurbat Meri Pehchaan Hai,.
Kya Hua Jo Sab Mujhse Haath Churdaate Rahe,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2010, 12:26:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kameeney ji.lovely creation,Pandey ji and Azeem bhai great lines.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2010, 08:15:07 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on June 10, 2010, 08:18:46 PM
Waah Sahab, bahot khoob...

Teri shohbat ne mujhko faqeer kar diya,
Mai bhi tha baadshah teri Ashiqee se pahley!!

badhiya likha hai dr pandey
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2010, 06:13:39 PM »
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Quote from: kameeney on June 13, 2010, 08:15:07 PM
badhiya likha hai dr pandey
Bahot bahot shukriya jabab...
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2010, 08:29:29 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 11, 2010, 12:21:58 AM
Bohat Achche KY Ji,.
Aur Dr Pandey Ji,.

Aapke In Ashaaron Ne Kuch Bayaan Karne Ki Himmat Di,.

Ek Koshihs Apni Bhi,.


The Mufleesi Mein Giraft Hum Zindagi Bhar "Doston,.
Jahan Bhi Rahe Pyaar Ka Khazaana Lutaate Rahe,.

Maana Ke Manzil Hamaare Haq Mein Na Thi "Azeem,.
Raaste Pe Khardke Sabko Raahein Dikhaate Rahe,.

Kya Hua Jo Samander Ne Hume Thukraa Diya,.
Hum To Khatron Se Bhi Apni Pyaas Bujhaate Rahe,.

Meri Gurbat Meri Pehchaan Hai,.
Kya Hua Jo Sab Mujhse Haath Churdaate Rahe,.

-Azeem-

very nice azeem bhai
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2010, 09:59:45 PM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai sabhi ne...Bahaut gehrai se likha hai...maza agaya padkar...
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2010, 11:09:35 PM »
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MAI NADI THI TOONE MUJHKO LAKEER KAR DIYA
PURAAB KHELTI THI DAAMAN ME MAA(DHARTI) KE PAHLE
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2010, 03:52:59 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 11, 2010, 12:21:58 AM
Bohat Achche KY Ji,.
Aur Dr Pandey Ji,.

Aapke In Ashaaron Ne Kuch Bayaan Karne Ki Himmat Di,.

Ek Koshihs Apni Bhi,.


The Mufleesi Mein Giraft Hum Zindagi Bhar "Doston,.
Jahan Bhi Rahe Pyaar Ka Khazaana Lutaate Rahe,.

Maana Ke Manzil Hamaare Haq Mein Na Thi "Azeem,.
Raaste Pe Khardke Sabko Raahein Dikhaate Rahe,.

Kya Hua Jo Samander Ne Hume Thukraa Diya,.
Hum To Khatron Se Bhi Apni Pyaas Bujhaate Rahe,.

Meri Gurbat Meri Pehchaan Hai,.
Kya Hua Jo Sab Mujhse Haath Churdaate Rahe,.

-Azeem-
Bahot khoob Azeem bhai...
Kisne puchha 'Adab' jo waqt ke saanchey mein dhal gaye,
Wo bhi kya loog they jo waqt ke saanchey badal gaye!
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2010, 11:44:02 PM »
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SUPARB !!! AZEEMJI! HAMESHA KI TARAH AAP KA QALAAM SEEDHA DIL KE PAAR GAYA. BAHUT KHOOB!
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2010, 11:47:11 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB DR SABHEB!!! AISE INSPIRETIONAL SHAIR MUSHKIL SE PADHNE KO MILTE HAIN.WAAH KYA BAAT HAI........
WO BHI KYA LOG THE WAQT KE SAANCHE BADAL GAYE...
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2010, 08:22:44 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 16, 2010, 09:59:45 PM
Bahaut acha likha hai sabhi ne...Bahaut gehrai se likha hai...maza agaya padkar...

thank you rahim ji
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