Har akshar ko kavita ki talaash hai~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on December 10, 2010, 09:55:52 AM
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Dosto kabhi kabhi ham likhne wale likhte likhte bhool jate hain ki ham bhi kabhi naye the ham bhi bahut bura likha karte the fir dheere dheere kuchh theek thak likhna seekha..or bhoolkar ham logo ko padhte waqt unki rachna ko kavita>sher>shayari se compare karne lagte hain jabki hame khud hi pata nnahi hota ki asal me iske or bhi kitne roop hain..eise me ham kuchh logo ka jaane anjaane dil tod diya karte hain..
Bas eise hi kisi waqyat ko padhkar maine ye chhoti si kavita likhi hai, nahi janta ye sahi he ya nahi kisi lihaaj se par likhne chahta tha so likh di..



Har pal me he bat koi
Har shabda ek sansaar hai,
Har lamhe me ek zindagi beet jani he,
Har akshar ek kavita ka saar hai...

Har pustak kitni viraat hai,
Har panne par kitne raaz hai,
syahi har boond shabdon ko peechhe chhode,
Har akshar ko ek kavita ki talaash hai...

Har pankti sher naya ban jatii hai,
Har choupayi ne ek shayari chhupayi hai,
Dhoond rakhe he gazal ne sheron ke teer kai,
Har dil ke paas apni ek rubaai hai...

Har bar chehra jhuta nahi hota,
Har pankti ne yahi baat uthai hai,
kavita kya hai kisise puchhne kyun jaun,
Har shabd ne milkar ek tasveer banai hai~

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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2010, 10:33:41 AM »
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wahhhhwhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh abhi ji kya baat hai......maza aaya padhkar..aur kuch likhne ka dil bhi kiya kai din baad.... koshish karungi sare shabdon ko dhundhkar jodkar kuch achcha banane ki.....
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2010, 10:41:07 AM »
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Mast hai Abhi ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tera har shabd ek kavita hai
Har akshar ek sher hai.....
Akshar aur shabd bane Gazal
Kavita aur sher bane Najm....
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2010, 10:43:50 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Wah !
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2010, 12:46:00 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut khoob bhai..!
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2010, 01:29:23 PM »
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nice poetry with true feelings abhi....cute n sweet
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2010, 07:02:12 PM »
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Wah! kya peshkash hai Abhi Ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2010, 05:17:53 AM »
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wahhhhwhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh abhi ji kya baat hai......maza aaya padhkar..aur kuch likhne ka dil bhi kiya kai din baad.... koshish karungi sare shabdon ko dhundhkar jodkar kuch achcha banane ki.....

jai shri ram~
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2010, 05:18:26 AM »
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Mast hai Abhi ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tera har shabd ek kavita hai
Har akshar ek sher hai.....
Akshar aur shabd bane Gazal
Kavita aur sher bane Najm....

hmm achhi koshish he koyaliya..

no ji business~
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2010, 06:25:05 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Wah !

dhanyawad rishi ji~ yunhi sath dijiye~
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2010, 01:02:44 AM »
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I m agree with u ABHI !theek hee kah rahe ho...
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2010, 11:27:22 AM »
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abhi ji sabse pehle to is sundar rachhna ke liye daad kabool kijiye.ye humaare liye garv ka vishey hai ki itne bhavuk aur samvedansheel shayar is yoindia pariwar ka hissa hai.ishwar aapki kalam ko shohrat bakhshey.par is rachhna ke liye jo prashtbhumi aapne di hai usse me sehmat nahi hu.jis waqyat ka jikr aapne kiya wo maine bhi pada hai.par mujhe nahi lagta ki us baat ke liye hume unki saarvjanik aalochhna karni chahiye.likhte samay wo thoda rude jarur hui.agar unhone apni baat thodi mitaas se kahi hoti to hm sabhi ko jada khushi hoti.aur fir is manch ka sahi uddheshey hi yahi hai ki hum nishpakhsh ho kar comments de.aapki vyaktigat rai par tippadi karne ka muje koi aadhikar nahi hai par aapko chhota bhai mante hui ye sab likhna ka sahas kar rahi hu.dekhiye abhi bhai hum sab yaha apni uljhane bhul kar sukun ke liye aate hai bus is mauhaal me koi kisi ke liye gile shikwe na rakhe bus yehi ishwar se prathana karti hu.pls ise vyaktigat na le.khush rahiye likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2010, 07:35:19 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut khoob bhai..!

dhanyawad rahim bhai..yunhi sath rahiye...
apke copmments padhkar bada achha lagta he~
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2010, 07:37:09 AM »
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nice poetry with true feelings abhi....cute n sweet
jai ram ji ki ...

itna sookha reply dene se pehle tera keyboard jam kyu nhai gaya~
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2010, 07:37:43 AM »
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Wah! kya peshkash hai Abhi Ji

rajesh bhai..apne saraha wahi bahut he..

bahut bahut shukriya~
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