Abhi mere dost,
apka intro hi mere dil kay jazbaat kehgaya..
haan kabhi aagey nahin barra jata na hi
peeche murra jata hai..
wah kya nazm likhi hai apne..
woh 'Tez chalti hai' wala shaer bahaut acha hai..
Dil se daad mere dost..!
bahut bahut shukriya dost...
aap sab se hi himmat milti hai kuchh toota foota sa likhne ki~
yunhi sath rahiye~
wow......too good
aapne bhaut accha likha hai..
shukriya fatima ji...
apne is chooti si koshish ko saraha..
yunhi sath rahiye..
BAhut Khub Abhi Ji
shukriya rishi bhai
yunhi sath rahiye..
apka bahut shukriya madhu ji..
yunhi sath dete rahiye..
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abhiji..Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Khoobsurat
bahut bahut Khoob Uthkarshji shukriya khwaish bhai..
sath deta rahiye..hosla milta hai~
shayad ab aapki narazgi kuch durr hogi na humse abhi ji....
ek behtareen ehsaas jagati kavita hai ye aapki ......
bas padhte hi likhe bina raha na gaya ..
janti hun achhca nahin likh pai..but i tried....
Lafz nikla rahe hain bht mere dil se
Lekin inko jod de aisa ehsaas nahin milta
Kehna chahti hun bht kuch tumse har baar
Keh dein dil ki baat aisa koi shabd nahin milta
Rangon se bahri padi hai duniya yun to saari
Jo mere chehre ko khilaye aisa koi rang nahin milta
Suron saazon se saji hai mehfil meri fir bhi dost
Dil ko de sukuuun aisa koi manohar geet nahin milta
“Abhi” kya kahun k kya baat hai teri iss kavita me
Na likhun main iska jawab aisa koi kaaran nahin milta…!!!
aji jo ham gussa na hote to dosti ka maja kaise ata anu ji..
aapne bahut achha likha hai..
yunhi sath rahiye.
ji khoobsoorat ehsaah.....................
shukriya radhika ji...apne waqt diya or saraha yahi bahut hai..
yunhi sath dete rahiye~