Har kashtii ko ....kinara....-Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on February 07, 2011, 07:40:44 AM

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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 07, 2011, 12:49:28 PM

Abhi mere dost,
apka intro hi mere dil kay jazbaat kehgaya..
haan kabhi aagey nahin barra jata na hi
peeche murra jata hai..
wah kya nazm likhi hai apne..
woh 'Tez chalti hai' wala shaer bahaut acha hai..
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Dil se daad mere dost..!

bahut bahut shukriya dost...
aap sab se hi himmat milti hai kuchh toota foota sa likhne ki~
yunhi sath rahiye~

Quote from: fatima anam on February 07, 2011, 01:03:54 PM

wow......too good
aapne bhaut accha likha hai.. Applause

shukriya fatima ji...
apne is chooti si koshish ko saraha..
yunhi sath rahiye..

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 07, 2011, 02:14:34 PM

BAhut Khub Abhi Ji

shukriya rishi bhai
yunhi sath rahiye..

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 08, 2011, 06:03:57 AM

bahut khoob Abhi ji,lajawab peshkash.Matrix ji ne bhi khoob saath diya.hats off icon_thumleft

apka bahut shukriya madhu ji..
yunhi sath dete rahiye..

Quote from: khwaish on February 08, 2011, 07:36:13 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Abhiji..Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Khoobsurat

bahut bahut Khoob Uthkarshji

shukriya khwaish bhai..

sath deta rahiye..hosla milta hai~

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 08, 2011, 09:13:21 AM

shayad ab aapki narazgi kuch durr hogi na humse abhi ji....
ek behtareen ehsaas jagati kavita hai ye aapki ......
bas padhte hi likhe bina raha na gaya ..
janti hun achhca nahin likh pai..but i tried....

Lafz nikla rahe hain bht mere dil se
Lekin inko jod de aisa ehsaas nahin milta

Kehna chahti hun bht kuch tumse har baar
Keh dein dil ki baat aisa koi shabd nahin milta

Rangon se bahri padi hai duniya yun to saari
Jo mere chehre ko khilaye aisa koi rang nahin milta

Suron saazon se saji hai mehfil meri fir bhi dost
Dil ko de sukuuun aisa koi manohar geet nahin milta

“Abhi” kya kahun k kya baat hai teri iss kavita me
Na likhun main iska jawab aisa koi kaaran nahin milta…!!!

aji jo ham gussa na hote to dosti ka maja kaise ata anu ji..
aapne bahut achha likha hai..
yunhi sath rahiye.

Quote from: Radhika_2 on February 08, 2011, 09:27:34 AM

ji khoobsoorat ehsaah.....................

shukriya radhika ji...apne waqt diya or saraha yahi bahut hai..

yunhi sath dete rahiye~

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