Har sitam mujhko gawaaraa hotaa...........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 07, 2010, 04:55:53 PM
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har sitam humko gawaaraa hotaa
gar sitamgar tu humaaraa hotaa

paar ho jaatee ye kashtee ab tak
gar muqaabil jo kinaaraa hotaa

garq hotaa naheeN ummeed kaa suraj ye kabhee
saamne tu jo kabhee meraa sahaaraa hotaa

maangooN khairaat me khushiyaaN tumse
mere dil ko na gawaaraa hotaa

jhooth ke parde me jo sach ko chhupaayaa hotaa
meri gardan pe naa vaar tumhaaraa hotaa

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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2010, 05:06:32 PM »
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buhat khoob mamta bajpai jee!

kabhi kabhi aap ka kalaam nazron say guzarta hay... buhat khoob likhti hain... is ghazal ka 1st, 2nd and 4th sher hamen buhat pasand aaya... hamaaray naa-qas ilm k mutabiq ye teenon sher meanings main gehrai and wazan main bilkul poooray hain..

pehlay sher k first misray main agar 'mujhko' ki jaga 'hum ko' hota tu shaayad hamen aur bhe achha lagta... 'cause second misray main... 'hamara' use huva hay... 'mera' nahi...

achha laga aap ka likh parh kar...
buhat khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2010, 05:20:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa VBJee!aap kee nek salaah ko hum binaa waqt gaNwaaye amal me le aaye...aap ne jo bhee farmaayaa bilkul theek...bahut bahut shukriyaa saaheb....
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2010, 09:49:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2010, 04:56:55 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Mamta Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2010, 05:50:11 AM »
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mamta jii aapka likha padhkar itna kuch sikhne milta hai..sach me aapke khyaal aapna style..its too gud....
bht hi khubsurat likhti hain aap.yunhi likhte rahiye ...
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2010, 06:59:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 01:50:48 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Rajesh jee!
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2010, 01:51:34 PM »
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Shukriyaa Sajid jee!
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«Reply #9 on: December 09, 2010, 01:53:17 PM »
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Kasak jee ye aap kee mohabbat hai jo aap hume is qaabil samajhtee hain.......bahut bahut shukriyaa......
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«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2010, 01:54:23 PM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Raajaindra jee!
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2010, 08:59:20 AM »
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mamta di sorry for being late ...

bahut khoob likha he apne..

sabse badhiya jo laga wo pehla ashar or forth wala..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2010, 01:41:10 PM »
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Shukriyaa Abhi!der se hee sahee humaare thread par aane ke liye behad shukriyaa...
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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2010, 01:46:42 PM »
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wowwwwwwwww mast mast mahamast......

mamta ji me yo pe kam hi aa pata hu aur muje shayri ka jyada knowledge bhi nahi he......but aaj ek baat kahna chahunga ki apka likha padne me maja ata he aur bht maja ata he....aacha lagta he....shayad ab tak apki sari post mene padi he chahe sab pe reply kiya ya nahi par ha read jarur ki he ek se bad kar ek he sab.....aap likhna kabhi band mat kijiyega...hamara niksan hoga....
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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2010, 01:51:12 PM »
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sorry me wrong id se ogin ho gaya matrix ki jagah matris likh diya tha ...well written mamta ji
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