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Aap kee jab talak enaayat hai
tab talak jism o jaaN salaamat hai
jale shammaa bhee aur pataNgaa bhee
ishq kee kyaa ajab ravaayat hai
chiNdee chiNdee huaa libaas e bharam
naa hee afsos naa nadaamat hai
meethee meethee chubhan qaraar naheeN
baad me jaanaa ye to chaahat hai
choR ke jism tu kahaaN chal dee
rooh kaisee teree baghaavat hai
har ta'alluq nibhaa liyaa humne
khud se khud kee badee adaavat hai
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2012, 01:26:53 AM » |
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waah waah mamta ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2012, 01:32:08 AM » |
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Bahooo bahoot bahoot khubsurat
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2012, 02:36:02 AM » |
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bahut khoob mamta ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2012, 03:00:04 AM » |
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Bahut umda ghajal ke saath vaapas lauti hai aap Mamta jee
chor ke jism tu kahaan chal dee...jindgee ke sach ko ujaagar karta hua ye sher..BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 04:14:50 AM » |
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bahut sunder peshkash ke saath waapsee mamtaa ji dili mubarakbaad qubooll farmaayen
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2012, 04:26:02 AM » |
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BAhut BAhut Khub
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2012, 08:14:32 AM » |
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the way and matter put in is wonderful do write like this very very nice
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2012, 01:20:38 PM » |
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Aap kee jab talak enaayat hai
tab talak jism o jaaN salaamat hai
jale shammaa bhee aur pataNgaa bhee
ishq kee kyaa ajab ravaayat hai
chiNdee chiNdee huaa libaas e bharam
naa hee afsos naa nadaamat hai
meethee meethee chubhan qaraar naheeN
baad me jaanaa ye to chaahat hai
choR ke jism tu kahaaN chal dee
rooh kaisee teree baghaavat hai
har ta'alluq nibhaa liyaa humne
khud se khud kee badee adaavat hai
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2012, 01:26:27 PM » |
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Bahut dinoN baad ghar waapasee hui ....kuchh to nazraanaa saath laanaa thaa....yo par meri ahmiyat aur vajood ko yaad me banaaye rakhne ke liye mai aap sabhee kee behad shukraguzaar hooN....yahee pyaar aur apnaapan mujhe tazindagee miltaa rahe .isee ummeed ke saath........Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2012, 01:29:16 PM » |
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shukriyah Saahill!
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2012, 01:29:56 PM » |
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housla afzai kaa behad shukriyah Maasoom jee!
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