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<>*Harpal duaon me hum naam tera lete hain*<> Dil ki hasrat ko ab saja k dekhte hain
Kisiki kahi baat pe yakeen kar lete hain
Dhuan aur nashe me beeti jiski zindagi
Use aaj hum apni aagosh me lete hain
Ladkhada rahe the jo kadam nashe me
Unhe apne haathon me thaam lete hain
Bahot umeed jagi hai aaj unki baaton se
Iss umeed pe jaan kurbaan kar lete hain
Na darna na ghabrana ee mere yaar tum
Harpal duaon me hum naam tera lete hain…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 07:22:00 AM » |
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very nice anu ji
larhkharhtey kadmon ko mere sambhal lena
jaam hai jo pilaaya ankhon se our na pilaana
hain nasha aisa teri shokh nigahon mein dilbar
ke jindago ko hi meri nasheman na bana dena
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 07:27:00 AM » |
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wah kya mast mast likha aapne K mam. mai bhi kuch arz karu kya  |
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 07:30:43 AM » |
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nice reply saahil ji...thnx ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 07:31:06 AM » |
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nirala ji waiting for ur reply ji.....jaldi sekuch sunaiye
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 07:33:04 AM » |
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bahot khoob anamika ji........
bahot dino ke baad apki koi post ayi he ...........aur ayi bhi esi ki bas bar bar padte hi jao...........its wonderful and mindblowing ji........
lijiye kuch lines meri taraf se bhi arj he...Nashe Me He Zindagi Ya Zindagi Me He Nasha
Hume To Subah Sham Ye Zahar Chahiye
So Jaye Tere Anchal Me Thak Ke Hum
Tere Hi Anchal Me Har Ab Sahar Chahiye
Tu Hi Na Sambhale Hume To Hum Kaha Jayenge
Hume To Harpal Tere Ishq Ki Lahar Chahiye
Jo He Agar Ishq Mout Ka Dusra Naam To
Khuda Kasam Hume To Ye Hi Kahar Chahiye[/size]
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 07:37:28 AM » |
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matrix ji ne itna achha reply dia ki bas maza aa gaya |
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 07:37:52 AM » |
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nice matrix ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 07:40:32 AM » |
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thx sahil ji.........
nirala ji i m also waiting for ur reply.....ese bach ke nikalne nahi denge apko........
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 07:45:44 AM » |
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"
iss ummeed par na rahe janaab
ke kuch kahenge hum
bethe hain abhi
paimaana leke maikhaane me
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K mam ke aage bolti band ho jaati
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 07:48:12 AM » |
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nahi kahte hue bhi bada solid jawab de diya he apne to hujur......
akele akle mahkhane ? galat baat he ....hume bhi bula liya hota ...ek guut se hamara bhi bhi gala tarr ho jata ji...
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 07:56:40 AM » |
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Kaun kambakhat gala tar karne ko peeta hai
hum peete hain dil behlaane ko
aap bhi aajao yaara
hame bhi saathi chahiye apne zakhmo ko sahlane ko
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peena achhi baat nahi hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 08:04:37 AM » |
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oyee hoyeeee kya bat hai rajaji mastam reply jiiiiiii...
Raat din hume to bas teri hi ek nazar chhaiye
Tu jisme khush ho wahi baat har pal chhaiye
Khyalon me to aate ho mere aap har raat sajan
Aajao kisi din yunhi saamne aisa ek pal chhaiye
Karwatein badal kar kat rahi meri har raat sanam
Bahon me aapke ek raat sukun ki nind chhaiye
Aapki saanson se mahek jaye saansein meri Janu
Mujhe bas aisi hi ek pyaar me duubi shaam chhaiye…!!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 08:10:19 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2011, 08:11:09 AM » |
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"
iss ummeed par na rahe janaab
ke kuch kahenge hum
bethe hain abhi
paimaana leke maikhaane me
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K mam ke aage bolti band ho jaati
waah kya baat hai mastane nirale ji.......
aapke kehne ka andaaz hi kuch aisa hai nirala ji
meykhane me jaam bhi jhum jate hain teri shayri se... |
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