Hasan sir aapke liye.............. Soudagar

by soudagar on July 24, 2012, 05:21:13 AM
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hum sab hain nadan hamari galti ko maaf kijiye
aur kuch nahi to saza dekar insaf kijiye

bahut din ho gaye suna sa lagta hai yoindia
ab to apni gazal kehkar dil ko kuch khas dijiye

aapki gazalon se badhti hai mehfil mein ronaqein
yun chup rehkar na hamare dil ko nirash kijiye

aapko dil mein rakhte hain nahi pyar jhutha hamara
ab yu mehfil se duri bnakar humein na  hrash kijiye

aapki khamoshi dil ko bahut baichan karti hai hamare
HASAN sir veenti hai sir par hamare apna hath kijiye

galti kisi ki bhi ho khud ko doshi samjhne lage hain hum
HASAN SIR NA HUMEIN AB AISA NAAPAAK EHSAS DIJIYE
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 05:28:50 AM »
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bahut sunder soudagar betaa main bhee aapke saath hoon vaise shaayad ramzaan ke kaaran vo naheen aa rahe nain lekin vo aayenge zaroor
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 05:50:58 AM »
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hum sab hain nadan hamari galti ko maaf kijiye
aur kuch nahi to saza dekar insaf kijiye

bahut din ho gaye suna sa lagta hai yoindia
ab to apni gazal kehkar dil ko kuch khas dijiye

aapki gazalon se badhti hai mehfil mein ronaqein
yun chup rehkar na hamare dil ko nirash kijiye

aapko dil mein rakhte hain nahi pyar jhutha hamara
ab yu mehfil se duri bnakar humein na  hrash kijiye

aapki khamoshi dil ko bahut baichan karti hai hamare
HASAN sir veenti hai sir par hamare apna hath kijiye

galti kisi ki bhi ho khud ko doshi samjhne lage hain hum
HASAN SIR NA HUMEIN AB AISA NAAPAAK EHSAS DIJIYE


Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 05:53:02 AM »
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hum sab hain nadan hamari galti ko maaf kijiye
aur kuch nahi to saza dekar insaf kijiye

bahut din ho gaye suna sa lagta hai yoindia
ab to apni gazal kehkar dil ko kuch khas dijiye

aapki gazalon se badhti hai mehfil mein ronaqein
yun chup rehkar na hamare dil ko nirash kijiye

aapko dil mein rakhte hain nahi pyar jhutha hamara
ab yu mehfil se duri bnakar humein na  hrash kijiye

aapki khamoshi dil ko bahut baichan karti hai hamare
HASAN sir veenti hai sir par hamare apna hath kijiye

galti kisi ki bhi ho khud ko doshi samjhne lage hain hum
HASAN SIR NA HUMEIN AB AISA NAAPAAK EHSAS DIJIYE

Nahut umda Qalam likha hai aapne soudagar ji Hasan Sir ke bina mefil adhuri lagti hai.. Sacch hai.
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 05:58:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob saudagar jee

aapki bhaavnaao ko salaam karta hun.

mai to bas itna jaanta hun 'Kohinoor' hai vo is mahfil ke..jo sirf apni chamak bikherta hai..chupchaap.
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 08:50:51 AM »
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hum sab hain nadan hamari galti ko maaf kijiye
aur kuch nahi to saza dekar insaf kijiye

bahut din ho gaye suna sa lagta hai yoindia
ab to apni gazal kehkar dil ko kuch khas dijiye

aapki gazalon se badhti hai mehfil mein ronaqein
yun chup rehkar na hamare dil ko nirash kijiye

aapko dil mein rakhte hain nahi pyar jhutha hamara
ab yu mehfil se duri bnakar humein na  hrash kijiye

aapki khamoshi dil ko bahut baichan karti hai hamare
HASAN sir veenti hai sir par hamare apna hath kijiye

galti kisi ki bhi ho khud ko doshi samjhne lage hain hum
HASAN SIR NA HUMEIN AB AISA NAAPAAK EHSAS DIJIYE


naaaaaaaaaaaaaice request
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 09:08:42 AM »
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Souagar ji. Aapki is mohabat bhari nazm ke liye bahut bahut duaaein,aur sabhi doston ka skukriya.Yoindia Shayariadab ke mukhlis doston ki mahfil se door rahne ka koi irada nahin.Ramzan mein bhi Nafs per qaaboo ( self-restraint),buri baaton se parhez , achhi baaton ki targheeb aur zarooratmandon ki chariy (zakaat) se madad ka hukm hai.Na shairy buri hai na Yoindia Shayariadab. Is liye Ramzan bhi koi rok nahin hai.Albatta zahni tour pe aap ke beech aane ke liye abhi apne ko tayyar kar raha thha .Doston ki is mohabat ke aage ab koi wajah ma'ane(deterrent)nahi .Soudagar ji, Saini ji, Raqeeb ji,Pankaj ji,Mukesh ji aur sabhi doston ka unke khuloos ke liye bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 11:54:56 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 03:43:19 PM »
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Bahut acchhe kalam se nawaaza aapne Hasan Saheb ko. Bahut bahut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 04:39:35 PM »
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saini sir bahut bahut shukrya ......aur hasan sir ki wapsi bhi mubarak
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2012, 05:42:09 PM »
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shukriya raqeeb ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2012, 02:16:22 AM »
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Bohut khoob saudagr jee is koshish ko mera salam
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2012, 02:53:39 AM »
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shukriya pankaj ji.....
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2012, 03:13:56 AM »
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bohut khub saudagar bhai
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2012, 03:46:04 AM »
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hum sab hain nadan hamari galti ko maaf kijiye
aur kuch nahi to saza dekar insaf kijiye

bahut din ho gaye suna sa lagta hai yoindia
ab to apni gazal kehkar dil ko kuch khas dijiye

aapki gazalon se badhti hai mehfil mein ronaqein
yun chup rehkar na hamare dil ko nirash kijiye

aapko dil mein rakhte hain nahi pyar jhutha hamara
ab yu mehfil se duri bnakar humein na  hrash kijiye

aapki khamoshi dil ko bahut baichan karti hai hamare
HASAN sir veenti hai sir par hamare apna hath kijiye

galti kisi ki bhi ho khud ko doshi samjhne lage hain hum
HASAN SIR NA HUMEIN AB AISA NAAPAAK EHSAS DIJIYE


wah wah

bahut khoob beta
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