Haseen qitaab ........................................saru....................................81

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ज़मीं  पर  उतरने  की  फ़िराक़ देखे है
चाँद  आसमाँ   से  ये  ख्वाब   देखे है

ज़रा ज़रा  से  फेंककर पत्थर इक नादां
समंदर  में  तूफ़ां   के  उठान  देखे  है

ईश्क़  के  क़ायदों  से होने को वाक़िफ़
दिल  की  कोई  हसीन  क़िताब  देखे है

हां उम्र-ए-रवाँ के  तज़रबों  से ज़ालिम
संजीदा  कहानियों  में  मज़ाक़ देखे है

बहुत दिनो से सवालिया नज़र है उसकी
रिश्ता   तोड़ने   का   सुराग   देखे  है

समझे  है  लफ़्ज़ों की गहराई इसलिए
पढ़ने   से    पहले   उनवान   देखे  है

ख़ूबसूरत  सी  दिलरुबा  ग़ज़ल देखकर
वो 'सरु' की क़लम  के अंदाज़ देखे है





zameeN  par  utarne  ki  firaq  dekhe hai
Chand  aasmaaN  se  ye khwaab dekhe hai

Zara zara se fenk kar  patthar ik nadaaN
Samandar meiN toofaN ke uthaaN dekhe hai

Ishaq  ke  qayadoN  se  hone  ko  waqif
Dil  ki  koi  haseeN  qitaab  dekhe hai

HaaN umra-e-rawaN ke tazarboN se zaalim
Sanjeeda kahaniyon mein mazaaq dekhe hai

Bahut dino  se uski sawaliyaa  nazar hai
Rishta  todne  kaa   suraag  dekhe  hai

Samjhe  hai  lafzoN  ki gehraai  isliye
Padhne  se   pehle  unwaaN   dekhe  hai

Khoobsurat  si  dilrubaa  ghazal  dekhkar
Vo  ‘saru’ ki  kalam ke andaaz dekhe hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2014, 08:28:10 PM »
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हां उम्र-ए-रवाँ के  तज़रबों  से ज़ालिम
संजीदा  कहानियों  में  मज़ाक़ देखे है

उसकी बहुतदिनो से सवालिया नज़र है
रिश्ता   तोड़ने   का   सुराग   देखे  है

समझे  है  लफ़्ज़ों की गहराई इसलिए
पढ़ने   से    पहले   उनवान  देखे है

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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2014, 08:30:34 PM »
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thanks premdeep ji
Hausla afzahi karte rahen
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Quote from: premdeep on April 23, 2014, 08:28:10 PM
हां उम्र-ए-रवाँ के  तज़रबों  से ज़ालिम
संजीदा  कहानियों  में  मज़ाक़ देखे है

उसकी बहुतदिनो से सवालिया नज़र है
रिश्ता   तोड़ने   का   सुराग   देखे  है

समझे  है  लफ़्ज़ों की गहराई इसलिए
पढ़ने   से    पहले   उनवान  देखे है

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower :icon_flower:excellent mam pls accept ONE RAU
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2014, 08:40:00 PM »
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Just awesomeeeeeeeeeee saru ji....behad khooooooooob...sabhi ashaar bahut achche lage... hazaron hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kijiyega...
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thankewww sooooooooooo much aqsh ji
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Just awesomeeeeeeeeeee saru ji....behad khooooooooob...sabhi ashaar bahut achche lage... hazaron hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2014, 08:53:48 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 23, 2014, 08:23:39 PM


ज़मीं  पर  उतरने  की  फ़िराक़ देखे है
चाँद  आसमाँ   से  ये  ख्वाब   देखे है

ज़रा ज़रा  से  फेंककर पत्थर इक नादां
समंदर  में  तूफ़ां   के  उठान  देखे  है

ईश्क़  के  क़ायदों  से होने को वाक़िफ़
दिल  की  कोई  हसीन  क़िताब  देखे है

हां उम्र-ए-रवाँ के  तज़रबों  से ज़ालिम
संजीदा  कहानियों  में  मज़ाक़ देखे है

बहुत दिनो से सवालिया नज़र है उसकी
रिश्ता   तोड़ने   का   सुराग   देखे  है

समझे  है  लफ़्ज़ों की गहराई इसलिए
पढ़ने   से    पहले   उनवान   देखे  है

ख़ूबसूरत  सी  दिलरुबा  ग़ज़ल देखकर
वो 'सरु' की क़लम  के अंदाज़ देखे है





zameeN  par  utarne  ki  firaq  dekhe hai
Chand  aasmaaN  se  ye khwaab dekhe hai

Zara zara se fenk kar  patthar ik nadaaN
Samandar meiN toofaN ke uthaaN dekhe hai

Ishaq  ke  qayadoN  se  hone  ko  waqif
Dil  ki  koi  haseeN  qitaab  dekhe hai

HaaN umra-e-rawaN ke tazarboN se zaalim
Sanjeeda kahaniyon mein mazaaq dekhe hai

Bahut dino  se uski sawaliyaa  nazar hai
Rishta  todne  kaa   suraag  dekhe  hai

Samjhe  hai  lafzoN  ki gehraai  isliye
Padhne  se   pehle  unwaaN   dekhe  hai

Khoobsurat  si  dilrubaa  ghazal  dekhkar
Vo  ‘saru’ ki  kalam ke andaaz dekhe hai




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thanks sheba ji
aapko dekhte hee maine Roman meiN likha
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zameeN  par  utarne  ki  firaq  dekhe hai
Chand  aasmaaN  se  ye khwaab dekhe hai
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Zara zara se fenk kar  patthar ik nadaaN
Samandar meiN toofaN ke uthaaN dekhe hai
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Ishaq  ke  qayadoN  se  hone  ko  waqif
Dil  ki  koi  haseeN  qitaab  dekhe hai
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Sanjeeda kahaniyon mein mazaaq dekhe hai
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Rishta  todne  kaa   suraag  dekhe  hai
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Padhne  se   pehle  unwaaN   dekhe  hai
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Khoobsurat  si  dilrubaa  ghazal  dekhkar
Vo  ‘saru’ ki  kalam ke andaaz dekhe hai
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समंदर  में  तूफ़ां   के  उठान  देखे  है
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