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banayi to thee haveli ek humne iss shahar mein..!
daraati rahi umr bhar wo khandhar bann kar...!!

MAIN JANAB SHIHAB SAHAB KA SHUKRGUZAAR HOON KI UNHONE ISE PADHA AUR MERI GHALTI PE DHYAA DILAYAA...KI BANAYA TO THA EK HAVELI NAHIN BANAYI TO THEE EK HAVELI HOGA.

MAINE SUDHAR LIYA.


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2011, 10:24:30 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on June 16, 2011, 09:55:15 AM

banayaa to thaa haveli ek humne iss shahar mein..!
daraata rahaa umr bhar wo khandhar bann kar...!!


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2011, 10:28:32 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on June 16, 2011, 09:55:15 AM

banayaa to thaa haveli ek humne iss shahar mein..!
daraata rahaa umr bhar wo khandhar bann kar...!!

bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Adil Bhai..

Iss Sher Ki gehrai Wohi samjhega Jo kabhi iss Daur se Guzra Ho..

bahut Gehra Sher hai yeh.


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2011, 07:00:50 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on June 16, 2011, 09:55:15 AM

banayaa to thaa haveli ek humne iss shahar mein..!
daraata rahaa umr bhar wo khandhar bann kar...!!

tera to mai fan hun yar…
aise aala darje ka sher likhte ho…
bht khub


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2011, 08:18:20 AM »

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 16, 2011, 10:24:30 AM

thank you manoj ji


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2011, 05:31:25 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 16, 2011, 10:28:32 AM

bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Adil Bhai..

Iss Sher Ki gehrai Wohi samjhega Jo kabhi iss Daur se Guzra Ho..

bahut Gehra Sher hai yeh.

thank you khawish ji


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2011, 06:45:16 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on June 20, 2011, 08:04:20 PM

Janab Adil Sahab Aadab...
Sabse Pahle To Aapki Sada Dili Ko Mera Salaam
Aur Rahi Baat Galti Ki To Janaab Maine Aapki
Galti Nahi Nikali Thi.Maine To Bas Khudke Ilm
Ke Izafe Ke Liye Aapko PM Kiya Tha Kyon Ki
Na Main Aap Jitna Achha Likhta Hun Aur Na Aap
Jitna Ilm Rakkhta Hoon Aur Na Aap Jitni Samajh Rakhta Hun
Bas Maine To Khudke Ilm Ke Izafe Ke Liye Kaha Tha Phir B
Gar Aapka Dil Dukha Ho To Maafi Chahta Hun

ALLAH Pak Aapko Chust, Mast, Aur Swast Rakhe

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

Talib e Ilm

~Shihab~

jo jitna taraqqi aafta hota hai wo utna hi khaqsaar hota hai apni baato.N mein. aap bhi wahi hain janab shihab sahab Usual Smile

khush -o khurram rahein abaad rahein


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Re: haveli........A.B

«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2011, 11:32:50 AM »

Adil bhai
Adab
kitna khoobsurat ehsaas hai. kya kahe is bemurauat jamne ko. ab to bas KAYAMAT ka intejar hai.
Apne meri hausal afjai ki. Shukriya janab.
mkv