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by Sheba on December 11, 2011, 12:49:00 PM
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                           shahar mein kaisi ye bahaar aayi hai,
                           suki shakh pe hariyali si chaayi hai,


                           shikast ho na saki kabhi wajood ke mere,
                           dil ne magar aaj maat khaayi hai,

                           kahte hain bahut khuloos se apna sab ko,
                           hae cheez yahaan phir bhi paraayi hai,

                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,

                           muskurakar dard ko baant ne wale ye bata,
                           kahaan se tune ye hikmat paayi hai.

                           
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2011, 01:22:01 PM »
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                           shahar mein kaisi ye bahaar aayi hai,
                           suki shakh pe hariyali si chaayi hai,


                           shikast ho na saki kabhi wajood ke mere,
                           dil ne magar aaj maat khaayi hai,

                           kahte hain bahut khuloos se apna sab ko,
                           hae cheez yahaan phir bhi paraayi hai,

                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,

                           muskurakar dard ko baant ne wale ye bata,
                           kahaan se tune ye hikmat paayi hai.

                          


Lajwaab!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Shebaji..Waise To Poori ghazal Hi Daad ke Qabil hai Par khaas Taur Pe yeh As'haar bahut Khoooob hai..

"Pyaar Ko Khuda Kehne Wale Suun Zara
 Ghareebi Mein Mohabbat Bhi Ruswai hai"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shebaji, Aap se Guzaarish Hai Writing Frquency Badhaiye... icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2011, 02:59:41 PM »
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                           shahar mein kaisi ye bahaar aayi hai,
                           suki shakh pe hariyali si chaayi hai,


                           shikast ho na saki kabhi wajood ke mere,
                           dil ne magar aaj maat khaayi hai,

                           kahte hain bahut khuloos se apna sab ko,
                           hae cheez yahaan phir bhi paraayi hai,

                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,

                           muskurakar dard ko baant ne wale ye bata,
                           kahaan se tune ye hikmat paayi hai.

                           

wah wah__--
bahot umda peshkash aur behtareen khayaalat--

daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2011, 03:07:42 PM »
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Bahot khoob. Bahot khoobsurat!
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2011, 05:55:20 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Jnab achche ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiya hai ..
Sabhi khayaal khub rahe.. Usual Smile

Aik khub aur achchi kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye.. likhti rahiye.. aati rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         





                           shahar mein kaisi ye bahaar aayi hai,
                           suki shakh pe hariyali si chaayi hai,


Achcha matla hai janab.. par baat ki gehrai gayab hai ashar se Huh?
         


                           shikast ho na saki kabhi wajood ke mere,
                           dil ne magar aaj maat khaayi hai,

Bahut khoob bahut achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile         

                           kahte hain bahut khuloos se apna sab ko,
                           har cheez yahaan phir bhi paraayi hai,

Behad sahiN farmayaa daad ... Usual Smile         

                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,

Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad ... Usual Smile         

                           muskurakar dard ko baant ne wale ye bata,
                           kahaan se tune ye hikmat paayi hai.

Bahut khoob janab.. zarra hume bhi uska jawaab bataiyeNga.. achcha sher hai daad daad daad         

                           
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2011, 07:11:57 PM »
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                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,
                     

bahut acchhi baat kahi aapne
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2011, 03:56:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause sheba ji kyaa khoob kahaa hai aapne bahut achhaa lagaa padh kar dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2011, 05:17:43 AM »
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                           shahar mein kaisi ye bahaar aayi hai,
                           suki shakh pe hariyali si chaayi hai,


                         

                           pyaar ko khudaa kahne wale sunn zara,
                           gharibi mein mohabbat bhi ruswaayi hai,

                           

bahut pyari ghazal hai sheba ji.khas taur se iss sher per khususi daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2011, 09:09:36 AM »
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Lajwaab!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Shebaji..Waise To Poori ghazal Hi Daad ke Qabil hai Par khaas Taur Pe yeh As'haar bahut Khoooob hai..

"Pyaar Ko Khuda Kehne Wale Suun Zara
 Ghareebi Mein Mohabbat Bhi Ruswai hai"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shebaji, Aap se Guzaarish Hai Writing Frquency Badhaiye... icon_flower



THANK YOU KHAWAISH JI, RELATED TO WRITING FREQUENCY I MUST REQUEST TO PARWAAZ SAHAB, MAMTA JI, USHAJI, SOPHI JI, SHIHAB JI AUR DOOSRE DIGGAJ SHORA TO WRITE FREQUENTLY. SO THAT I CAN READ THEM AND LEARN.
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2011, 08:07:45 AM »
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THANK YOU KHAWAISH JI, RELATED TO WRITING FREQUENCY I MUST REQUEST TO PARWAAZ SAHAB, MAMTA JI, USHAJI, SOPHI JI, SHIHAB JI AUR DOOSRE DIGGAJ SHORA TO WRITE FREQUENTLY. SO THAT I CAN READ THEM AND LEARN.



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Hahahahah Shebaa Sahibaaa Aap bhi kamaal karti hai..
aray janab hume kuch likhne ka hunar nahi hai so hum
nahi likhate isliye hi abtak yahaaN humare kam post hai
aur jo haiN woH bhi aadhe se jyade puraane hi hai..
aik waqt guzar gaya hume koi nayaa kalaam likhe huye.. Usual Smile

KyuN ke humse likhna hi nahi hota... Usual Smile
Wel aap apni galti durust kar lijiye ke maiN koi shayar huN
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HaaN aapke baki ki list wale members waqai aapki shikayat ke
hisaab se behad sahiN hai.. unhone likhana chahiye.. jisse
hum bhi unki kalaamoN ka lutf le sake .. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2011, 12:04:05 PM »
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Sheba ji
Dher saari daad aapki is khoobsurat peshkash ke liye..
kahte hai bahut khuloos & muskarakar dard .dono ash'aar...very touching.
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2011, 12:48:08 PM »
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Buhat kh0ob sheba  buhat acha likhte hain ap..
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2011, 08:37:44 AM »
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Bahot khoob. Bahot khoobsurat!

thank you
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2011, 08:38:47 AM »
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wah wah__--
bahot umda peshkash aur behtareen khayaalat--

daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
Usual Smile

shukriya
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