hello

by aneela on October 11, 2013, 07:25:03 PM

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aneela

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Ajeeb hai dard dene ka tareeka bhi

kuch log haathon se nahi lafzon se zakhm dete hain..


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Ssaagar

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Re: hello

«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2013, 08:59:38 PM »

bahut khoob... par mujhe lagta hai ki aapne ye galat section me post kiya hai... plz admin check this....


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Dineshkumarjonty

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Re: hello

«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2013, 10:37:30 PM »

Lafzo ko ilzaam bas mat dena ye dono dard mita sakte hai

Kya baat hai achha likha aapne bas tital hello kyu rakh samaj nahi aaya vase mai to lafz rakhta bura mat manna


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Dineshkumarjonty

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Re: hello

«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2013, 10:40:20 PM »

Acha aap ki pahli post hai tabhi hello kah rahe ho sorry
Welcome jee notworthy


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: hello

«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2013, 12:06:57 AM »

Bahut Umda.!!


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Re: hello

«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2013, 12:30:34 AM »

Bahut hi umda likha hai. Bahut Pasand aya.


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aneela

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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2013, 03:07:45 AM »

thank u friends for ur advise wave


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Re: hello

«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2013, 03:11:43 AM »

Quote from: aneela on October 11, 2013, 07:25:03 PM

Ajeeb hai dard dene ka tareeka bhi

kuch log haathon se nahi lafzon se zakhm dete hain..


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Saman Firdaus

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Re: hello

«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2013, 03:13:46 AM »

Quote from: aneela on October 11, 2013, 07:25:03 PM

Ajeeb hai dard dene ka tareeka bhi

kuch log haathon se nahi lafzon se zakhm dete hain..

First of all a very warm welcome in yo india.. Welcome Banner

Hope you will share and write more nd more poetries and shayaries of urs..
I would like to tell you that as i think u have posted it in wrong section. This is ur first time nd first post so its ok from next time be careful before posting ur shayaries. I don't get why u gave the title "hello" to ur shayari..?? Is it SO!