Hirday ji aur Shireen Hakani ji ki guftgoo bahut achhee lagee aur mera man hai ki aap sab bhi dobara parhen. Umeed hai bahut achha lagega. Maine bhi in dono ke liye Khuda se iltaja ki hai. Arz hai
Title: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 11:29:14 AM
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hum milte nahi usse is dar se ki mohabbat naa ho jaaye,
par tanhaayi me yaad jo aati hai, wo uusi ki hoti hai,
nazar nahi milaate usse ki kho na jaayen un aankhon me,
par khwaab raat ko mere aankhon me bas uusi ki hoti hai,
wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,
maloom hai humein ki mohabbat thik nahi, dil dukhta hai,
par jaane kyun har baar usse milne ki chaahat hoti hai,
ajaaye wo hamaare saamne to hum hi nazar churaate hain,
koi bataa de mujhe ki dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai?
*****HRIDAY*****
Title: Re: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 22, 2012, 01:55:56 PM
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Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....
Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!
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Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 02:27:52 PM
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Thank you soooooooooo much Shireen ji.....!!! aapne bahut bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai... jiske jawaab me maine ek chhoti si koshish ki hai....!!!
chehraa bas tumhaaraa hi hai aankhon me shaam aur sawere,
kya karun, kya naa karun kuch samajh me aataa nahi mere,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ki sab kuch keh du tumse, magar
dekh lun tumhe to baaki kuch bhi samajh me aataa nahi mere...
Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 23, 2012, 07:26:37 AM
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee
Subah Shaam Aap Ka Basera Rehta Hai Meri Aankho Mein,
Puchta Dil Kaisa Hai Sama Us Paar Sajan Teri Aankho Mein,
Pyar Ke Jadu Se Lagti Hai Duniya Rangeen Khawabo Jaisi,
Intezar Mein Hoti Hai Bin Mausam Barsaat Meri Aankho Mein..!!
Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 25, 2012, 09:15:43 AM
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Bahut bahut khoob Title likha hai aapne Shireen ji...!!!
in aankhon se tum motiyon ko yun zaayaa naa karo,
meri mohabbat ko is tarha tum aazmaayaa naa karo,
hum to hamesha yahi chaahte hain ki tum khush raho,
bahaake apne aansoo meri mohabbat ko tadpaayaa naa karo...
Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 26, 2012, 01:52:10 AM
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HIRDAY JI JO APNE JAN NA CHAHA USKE LIYE MAIN TO KAHITA HOON
SAMNE ANE PE NAZEREN CHURATE HAIN TAB
APNI YA UNKI MOHABAT PE SHAQ HOTA HAI JAB
Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 09, 2012, 11:47:05 AM
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Hirdayu ji aur Sheeren Hakini ji
Dono ki guftugoo parh kar Maza aa gaya
Parhte parhte khayalon men kho gaya
Sochne laga kis ke liye kiya likhoon
Samajh nahin aa raha likhoon to kiya likhoon
Hazir jawaabi dono ki taarif-e-kabil hai
Kiso ko pahle kisko doosre number pe rakhoon
Bas iltja dono ke liye Khuda se karta hoon
Aap dono likhte rahen aur main parhta rahoon
na cheez bansi