HIRDAY JI AUR SHIREEN HAKANI KI GUFTUGOO...bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on August 09, 2012, 04:05:51 PM
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Hirday ji aur Shireen Hakani ji ki guftgoo bahut achhee lagee aur mera man hai ki aap sab bhi dobara parhen. Umeed hai bahut achha lagega. Maine bhi in dono ke liye Khuda se iltaja ki hai. Arz hai


Title: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 11:29:14 AM
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hum milte nahi usse is dar se ki mohabbat naa ho jaaye,
par tanhaayi me yaad jo aati hai, wo uusi ki hoti hai,
nazar nahi milaate usse ki kho na jaayen un aankhon me,
par khwaab raat ko mere aankhon me bas uusi ki hoti hai,

wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,

maloom hai humein ki mohabbat thik nahi, dil dukhta hai,
par jaane kyun har baar usse milne ki chaahat hoti hai,
ajaaye wo hamaare saamne to hum hi nazar churaate hain,
koi bataa de mujhe ki dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai?

*****HRIDAY*****


Title: Re: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 22, 2012, 01:55:56 PM
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Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....

Applause Applause Applause

Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!

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Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 02:27:52 PM
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Thank you soooooooooo much Shireen ji.....!!! aapne bahut bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai... jiske jawaab me maine ek chhoti si koshish ki hai....!!!
chehraa bas tumhaaraa hi hai aankhon me shaam aur sawere,
kya karun, kya naa karun kuch samajh me aataa nahi mere,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ki sab kuch keh du tumse, magar
dekh lun tumhe to baaki kuch bhi samajh me aataa nahi mere...



Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 23, 2012, 07:26:37 AM
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee Applause Applause Applause


Subah Shaam Aap Ka Basera Rehta Hai Meri Aankho Mein,
Puchta Dil Kaisa Hai Sama Us Paar Sajan Teri Aankho Mein,
Pyar Ke Jadu Se Lagti Hai Duniya Rangeen Khawabo Jaisi,
Intezar Mein Hoti Hai Bin Mausam Barsaat Meri Aankho Mein..!!





Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 25, 2012, 09:15:43 AM
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Bahut bahut khoob Title likha hai aapne Shireen ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause
in aankhon se tum motiyon ko yun zaayaa naa karo,
meri mohabbat ko is tarha tum aazmaayaa naa karo,
hum to hamesha yahi chaahte hain ki tum khush raho,
bahaake apne aansoo meri mohabbat ko tadpaayaa naa karo...



Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 26, 2012, 01:52:10 AM
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 Applause Applause HIRDAY JI JO APNE JAN NA CHAHA USKE LIYE MAIN TO KAHITA HOON
SAMNE ANE PE NAZEREN CHURATE HAIN TAB
APNI YA UNKI MOHABAT PE SHAQ HOTA HAI JAB
 
Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 09, 2012, 11:47:05 AM
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Hirdayu ji aur Sheeren Hakini  ji

Dono ki guftugoo parh kar Maza aa gaya
Parhte parhte khayalon men kho gaya

Sochne laga kis ke liye kiya likhoon
Samajh nahin aa raha likhoon to kiya likhoon

Hazir jawaabi dono ki taarif-e-kabil hai
Kiso ko pahle kisko doosre number pe rakhoon

Bas iltja dono ke liye Khuda se karta hoon
Aap dono  likhte rahen aur main parhta rahoon
na cheez bansi


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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2012, 04:17:01 PM »
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padhkar maja aa gaya sach me ......kya khoob converstion hai......ek dam mind blowing...
thanks for shrin ......aapne bhi bhut acha likha hai.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2012, 04:25:54 PM »
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shukriya bansi ji share karne ke liye.......


hriday ji  aur shirin ji... bahut hi khub raha aapka taalmel. lajawab

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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2012, 04:31:53 PM »
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pawan ji aur saudagar ji
aap dono ka shukriya adaa karta hoon main


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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2012, 05:30:37 PM »
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kya baat hai
kya tuk-bandi hai

bansi g apka bohot bohot shukriya is khubsorat conversation ko humare rubaroo kiya

or hriday g sheriin g - salute , behad khubsorat Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2012, 05:31:52 PM »
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kya baat hai
kya tuk-bandi hai

bansi g apka bohot bohot shukriya is khubsorat conversation ko humare rubaroo kiya

or hriday g sheriin g -  icon_salut , behad khubsorat Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2012, 06:27:07 PM »
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Awww Thanks a lot Bansi Jee!!! Aur Aap sabhi padne walo ka!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2012, 07:07:11 PM »
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Hirday ji aur Shireen Hakani ji ki guftgoo bahut achhee lagee aur mera man hai ki aap sab bhi dobara parhen. Umeed hai bahut achha lagega. Maine bhi in dono ke liye Khuda se iltaja ki hai. Arz hai


Title: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 11:29:14 AM
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hum milte nahi usse is dar se ki mohabbat naa ho jaaye,
par tanhaayi me yaad jo aati hai, wo uusi ki hoti hai,
nazar nahi milaate usse ki kho na jaayen un aankhon me,
par khwaab raat ko mere aankhon me bas uusi ki hoti hai,

wo sochti hai ki kya huwa wo rishta , kyun toot gayaa,
maanti hai humein bewafaa aur yaad me hamaari roti hai,
kabhi izhaar kiya nahi mohabbat ka usne humse, magar
seene se lagaake hamaari tasveer wo har raat soti hai,

maloom hai humein ki mohabbat thik nahi, dil dukhta hai,
par jaane kyun har baar usse milne ki chaahat hoti hai,
ajaaye wo hamaare saamne to hum hi nazar churaate hain,
koi bataa de mujhe ki dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai?

*****HRIDAY*****


Title: Re: -----/// Dil ki aisi kyun haalat hoti hai /// ----- Hriday
Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 22, 2012, 01:55:56 PM
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Bohat Khub, i really liked the last four lines....

Applause Applause Applause

Mohabbat Ko Dard Samaj Kar Khud Ko Na Tadpaya Kijiye,
Pyar Jab Bhi Kheeche Mere Aur Bas Chale Aaya Kijiye,
Aa Kar Samne Yun Nazron Ka Churana Thik Nahi Jaana,
Ishq Mein Hosh Luta Kar Aalam Madhoshi Ka Paya Kijiye..!!

________________________________________
Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2012, 02:27:52 PM
________________________________________
Thank you soooooooooo much Shireen ji.....!!! aapne bahut bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai... jiske jawaab me maine ek chhoti si koshish ki hai....!!!
chehraa bas tumhaaraa hi hai aankhon me shaam aur sawere,
kya karun, kya naa karun kuch samajh me aataa nahi mere,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi ki sab kuch keh du tumse, magar
dekh lun tumhe to baaki kuch bhi samajh me aataa nahi mere...



Post by: Shireen Hakani on June 23, 2012, 07:26:37 AM
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Bohat Khub Hriday Jee Applause Applause Applause


Subah Shaam Aap Ka Basera Rehta Hai Meri Aankho Mein,
Puchta Dil Kaisa Hai Sama Us Paar Sajan Teri Aankho Mein,
Pyar Ke Jadu Se Lagti Hai Duniya Rangeen Khawabo Jaisi,
Intezar Mein Hoti Hai Bin Mausam Barsaat Meri Aankho Mein..!!





Post by: ~Hriday~ on June 25, 2012, 09:15:43 AM
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Bahut bahut khoob Title likha hai aapne Shireen ji...!!! Applause Applause Applause
in aankhon se tum motiyon ko yun zaayaa naa karo,
meri mohabbat ko is tarha tum aazmaayaa naa karo,
hum to hamesha yahi chaahte hain ki tum khush raho,
bahaake apne aansoo meri mohabbat ko tadpaayaa naa karo...



Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 26, 2012, 01:52:10 AM
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 Applause Applause HIRDAY JI JO APNE JAN NA CHAHA USKE LIYE MAIN TO KAHITA HOON
SAMNE ANE PE NAZEREN CHURATE HAIN TAB
APNI YA UNKI MOHABAT PE SHAQ HOTA HAI JAB
 
Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 09, 2012, 11:47:05 AM
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Hirdayu ji aur Sheeren Hakini  ji

Dono ki guftugoo parh kar Maza aa gaya
Parhte parhte khayalon men kho gaya

Sochne laga kis ke liye kiya likhoon
Samajh nahin aa raha likhoon to kiya likhoon

Hazir jawaabi dono ki taarif-e-kabil hai
Kiso ko pahle kisko doosre number pe rakhoon

Bas iltja dono ke liye Khuda se karta hoon
Aap dono  likhte rahen aur main parhta rahoon
na cheez bansi




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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2012, 06:45:11 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Bansi ji is tahra se hamaari jugalbandi ko pesh karne ke liye.... aur sabhi doston ka main shukriya adaa karta hoon jinhone ise padha aur pasand kiya ....!!! Thanks again Bansi ji....!!!
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Nihsandeh aap badhaai ke paatra hai bansi jee.
Dono shayro ke comment padhne ke baad bahut khushi hui..
Par ise yun samjhe to behtar hoga..aap bhi poet ki post pe hi reply ke time...chand lines likhe to behtar hoga..aap aisa karte bhi hai..par jo nahi karte ..unke liye..khwaish jee to hamesha yahi kahte hai..aur ise hi sacchi tareef bhi maante hai.
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