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wo or hoNge jinheN manziloN ko paanaa hai
humeN to gardish e haalaat ne hee jaanaa hai
rut patjhaRh kee tere saath bitaanee to na thee
par muqaddar ne kahaaN mera kahaa maanaa hai
tu akelaa kyoN chale raah me toofaanoN kee
mai ne har haal me ye haath teraa thaamaa hai
kat hee jaayegee ye raat teree furkat kee
ho nayee subah humeN geet nayaa gaanaa hai
tu badaa hai teree har baat niraalee hai Khuda!
teree rahmat ya karam hum ne kahaaN jaanaa hai
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2010, 11:38:18 PM » |
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wo or hoNge jinheN manziloN ko paanaa hai
humeN to gardish e haalaat ne hee jaanaa hai
rut patjhaRh kee tere saath bitaanee to na thee
par muqaddar ne kahaaN mera kahaa maanaa hai
tu akelaa kyoN chale raah me toofaanoN kee
mai ne har haal me ye haath teraa thaamaa hai
kat hee jaayegee ye raat teree furkat kee
ho nayee subah humeN geet nayaa gaanaa hai
tu badaa hai teree har baat niraalee hai Khuda!
teree rahmat ya karam hum ne kahaaN jaanaa hai
Mamta Bajpai
Very Very Impressive... Mamta Ji ! Awesome ... !!! Very Touching ... Very nice Creation ... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen .... khush Rahen ... Duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 01:20:45 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Amar jee!  :clap:Bahot badaiya mamta ji  [/size] |
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 01:25:06 AM » |
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Naresh jee bahut bahut shukriya!
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 08:04:52 AM » |
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Aapke is Makhte ko Ghayel ka salam Mamta Jee...........kya aala baat keh di aapne.
tu badaa hai teree har baat niraalee hai Khuda!
teree rahmat ya karam hum ne kahaaN jaanaa hai
Waise meri hasiyat to nahi par chotiiiiiiiiiiiiii si guzarish thi..........par darta hu bawaal na ho jaye hahahahahaha.
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 08:13:53 AM » |
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Sajid jee kuch kahte kahte ruk kyoN gaye ?apnee baat kah bhee deN varnaa baat ka ye adhoorapan hume pareshan kartaa rahegaa...
maqta pasand farmaane ke liye behad shukriyaa........bawaal se darte haiN kyaa?aap ko naheeN lagtaa in hee tanqeedoN se yo me sargarmi hai or hum jaise kamilm logoN ke liye ye kisee class se kam naheeN...
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2010, 08:18:50 AM » |
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Shihab jee ! aap kaa bahut shukriyaa .dil se aap kee aabhaaree hooN...dil khol kar daad dete haiN or humare housale bhee usi ke saath baRh jaate haiN...aage bhee isee tarah saath nibhaate rahiye.....
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2010, 09:36:18 PM » |
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai aap ki Mamta Ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2010, 02:00:45 PM » |
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Parvez jee taakhir ke liye maazrat!bahut bahut shukriya...aap jis tarah se housla afzai karte haiN dil khushi se bhar jaataa hai...aisaa lagta hai ek ek shair kaa vazn toulaa gayaa ho...
aap ke kahe mutaabiq 2end shair kee wazaahat kuch is tarah hai
mai ne kabhee nahee sochaa thaa keh patjhad kee rut(dukh kaa waqt,khizaaN ka mousam)tumhare saath bitaani hogee. tumhare saath sirf harhaal me bahaar ke hee khwab dekhe the tumhaare saath sirf or sirf khushiyaaN hee khushiyaaN chaahee theeN lekin taqdeer ko ye kab manzoor thaa.hum jo sochte hain woh naheeN hota .muqaddar humaraa kahaa naheeN manta...gahraa dukh is baat kaa hai keh is dukh se mai tumheN naheeN bachaa sakee...kuch gham aise haiN jinheN aap akele naheeN mil kar bhogte haiN or kisee bhee tarah ek doosare kaa dukh bhee kam naheeN kar sakte ...ek doosare ko apnee jaan de kar bhee us gham se nikaal naheeN sakte...
ummeed hai shair kee wazaahat aap samjhne me kaamyaab ho gaye hoNge........
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2010, 02:03:31 PM » |
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Suresh jee thanks a lot ...
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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2010, 02:04:31 PM » |
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Housla afzai ke liye behad shukriya Rajesh jee...
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