Hogee peelee kabhee..fasal ye bhee.............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on April 02, 2011, 09:29:37 PM
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dard kee jab talak rawaanee hai
aaNkh me tab talak ye paanee hai

chuk hee jaayegee dheere dheere sahee
baaqee apnee jo zindagaanee hai

kar tu saahil pe aitbaar e wafaa
mouj kaa kyaa hai aanee jaanee hai

waqt koi pakad naa paayaa hai
waqt se sabko maat khaanee hai

hogee peelee kabhee fasal ye bhee
aaj jo dhaanee dhaanee hai


mamta bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2011, 09:41:04 PM »
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chuk hee jaayegee dheere dheere sahee
baaqee apnee jo zindagaanee hai

Bahut Khoooooooooob ..... Mamta Ji !

Saari ghazal ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage hume ... dil se daad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2011, 09:44:52 PM »
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Jee Ishq jee! aap kee pasand sar aankhoN par...itani raat gaye gazal paost karte hee aap kaa reply milnaa achchha lagaa...behad shukriyaa..
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2011, 10:00:43 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 02, 2011, 09:29:37 PM
dard kee jab talak rawaanee hai
aaNkh me tab talak ye paanee hai

chuk hee jaayegee dheere dheere sahee
baaqee apnee jo zindagaanee hai

kar tu saahil pe aitbaar e wafaa
mouj kaa kyaa hai aanee jaanee hai

waqt koi pakad naa paayaa hai
waqt se sabko maat khaanee hai

hogee peelee kabhee fasal ye bhee
aaj jo dhaanee dhaanee hai


mamta bajpai

Mamta Ji ... bahut umdaa fikR o khayaal likhe hai aapne .. har ashaar kuch kehta hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai .. qubuul farmaayeN ... aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2011, 03:16:16 AM »
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hmm…
ache khayal…
gahre ehsaas…

thanx
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bht khoobsurat peshkesh mamta ji....
last wala sher bht accha hai...
 
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2011, 09:08:27 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 02, 2011, 09:29:37 PM
dard kee jab talak rawaanee hai
aaNkh me tab talak ye paanee hai

chuk hee jaayegee dheere dheere sahee
baaqee apnee jo zindagaanee hai

kar tu saahil pe aitbaar e wafaa
mouj kaa kyaa hai aanee jaanee hai

waqt koi pakad naa paayaa hai
waqt se sabko maat khaanee hai

hogee peelee kabhee fasal ye bhee
aaj jo dhaanee dhaanee hai


mamta bajpai

Humesha Ki tarah Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamtaji..

Har Ek A'shaar Apne Hisse Ki Gehrai darsha Raha Hai..

Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2011, 10:03:18 AM »
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Shukriyaa Naresh jee!
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2011, 10:04:46 AM »
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Shukriyaa Priyaa jee!
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2011, 07:44:46 PM »
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Mamta jee Aadaab!

Bade dinoN baad aapki kisi kalaam se ruberu huye haiN.. Usual Smile
Aapki fikra O soch aur ahsaas o khayaal bus Masha Allah hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badh kar aik lage hume ... Dil se daad o mubarakbaad kabool kijiye ...

Aur yeH chunindaa ashaar waqai behad gehre aur bahut jyada umdaa hai in par hazaroN daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile         


Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 02, 2011, 09:29:37 PM



waqt koi pakad naa paayaa hai
waqt se sabko maat khaanee hai

hogee peelee kabhee fasal ye bhee
aaj jo dhaanee dhaanee hai


mamta bajpai

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khua Hafez.... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 06:34:26 AM »
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behad shukriyaa Khwaish jee!
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 06:38:23 AM »
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bahut khub mamtaji....

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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2011, 04:51:34 PM »
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shukriyaa Manju jee!
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