HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

by mamta bajpai on May 14, 2010, 05:35:24 PM

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mamta bajpai

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«Reply #15 on: May 16, 2010, 06:00:20 AM »

GUL.B.AR.GA JI ,MINHAJ.SAIF JI MAI AAP DONO KA BEHAD SE BHI ZYADA SHUKRIYA ADA KARNA CHAHOONGI JO AAP NE EAK-SHAYAR JAISE SHAKHA KI PAGALPAN KI TANQEED KO APNE BAYAN SE KHARIJ KAR DIYA. YO INDIA PARIWAR KI OR SE MAI AAP JAISE SAJAG QADRADANO KA SHUKRIYA ADA KARTI HOON.


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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #16 on: May 16, 2010, 02:21:06 PM »

Nice.........koshish kare ke aap apne har kalam ki islah Nazar saheb ya Qadeer saheb jaise shayro se kara le. Isse yeh baat zaroor hogi ke aapko is baat ka ilm ho jayega ke shayri me galti kaha hoti hai aur unka sudhaar kasie hota hai.

Open thread par apne kalam ki Islah har koi bardast nahi karta sabka apna apna nazriya hai......Aapke khayaal achche hai par abhi aapko bohat mehnat karni hai.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #17 on: May 16, 2010, 02:54:53 PM »

SAJID SAHEB AAPKI AHSANMAND HOON .HAMARE QALAAM KO AAINA DIKHANE KE LIYE OR HAMARI GAFLAT DOOR KARNE KE LIYE.ISLAH ABHI TAK KISI SE NAHI KARAI.ISKE LIYE MARGDARSHAN DENE KA KASHT KAREN MEHARBANI HOGI.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #18 on: May 16, 2010, 04:10:42 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 14, 2010, 05:35:24 PM

CHANDNI RAAT ME DHOOP KI CHADAR BICHA LETE HAIN
HUM LOG BIYABAAN ME BHI SAHARA KA MAZA LETE HAIN

KYON BEKAR BAHATI HO ASHKON KE PANEELE MOTI
YE SHABNAMI QATARE HUME ROZ KAHAN DIKHTE HAIN

HUM BANPHOOL HAIN VEERANO ME BHI KHIL JAYEN
SHAHAR KE PHOOL BADI SHAISTGI SE KHILTE HAIN

FIZAON ME BIKHAR JAYEN RANG-O-BOO KE NAZARE
AISE SUHANE MOUSAM HUME KAHAN SE MILTE HAIN

ZINDAGI JISKI THI USKO HI ATA KAR DI HAMNE
BAAD MUDDAT KE MUH DHAANP KE HUM SOTE HAIN

Wah Kya Baat Hai Mamta Ji
Bahut achchhi peshkash hai


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mamta bajpai

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #19 on: May 16, 2010, 04:42:55 PM »

DHANYAWAAD RAJESH JI!!!


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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #20 on: May 17, 2010, 05:02:25 AM »

ji bilkul... aur hum bhi chahenge ki aap hamari rachnaon pe kabhi kawar ek nazar daal le aur humein hamari kamiyon se awgat karayein...!!!

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 16, 2010, 05:42:22 AM

KLASKAR JI MAI BHI IS KSHATRA ME ABHI HI AAYEE HOON.ISKE PAHLE HINDI KAVITA ME KUCH PRAYAS KIYE THE.JO APRAKASHIT HAIN.AAPKI SATEEK SAMALOCHNA KI MAI PHIR BHI AKANKSHA KARTI RAHOONGI.


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«Reply #21 on: May 17, 2010, 08:13:51 AM »

buhat khoobsurat alfaaz k saath, buhat khoobsurat ghazal..


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mamta bajpai

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #22 on: May 17, 2010, 08:15:58 AM »

thanks VB ji,


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S.hashmi

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«Reply #23 on: May 17, 2010, 10:38:11 AM »


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riyaz106

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«Reply #24 on: May 20, 2010, 07:02:57 AM »

Bahot khoob Mamta ji. Keep writing.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #25 on: May 20, 2010, 07:17:49 AM »

THANKS RIYAZ BHAI !SIRF DAAD HI NAHI KHAMIYON KI OR BHI ISHARA KAREN.ILTIJA HAI.


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sidhu virji

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Re: HUM BANPHOOL HAIN

«Reply #26 on: May 20, 2010, 03:17:30 PM »

   apka andaze vian or apki tukbandi kable tarif hai
   aisa lagta hai muze ke tum dil se likhti hai
   kabhi rukna matt eh dost mere jaise apke or b mureed hai
   apki kalam ko khuda salamat rakhe
   panno ko ap se abi umeed bahut hi
   apka azeez dost
   sidhu patialvi hello2