Hum Hai Bangalorewale

by Shaanu on April 09, 2015, 04:25:15 AM
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This is a Hindi poem written by me about my city Bangalore, plz read it n say how it was.
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Hum gore hai hum kale
Humna kisiko dil se nikale
Har kisiko dil mein basale
Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
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Jaha har din aur raat masti hai.
Gham mehenge hai aur khushiya sasti hai.
Jaha traffic ki bahut maara maari hai
Jaha ke logo ki dosti sabse nyaari hai
Woh hai Bangalorewale. Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
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Jaha bhi kisine nazar dali hai.
Har taraf hariyali hi hariyali hai.
Khane mein roti, khushka ya biryani hai.
Lekin yaha ki janta bahut shaani hai.
Woh hai Bangalorewale. Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
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Waha ke Lalbagh mein rang-birange phool khile hai.
Kuch lal hai, kuch peele hai, toh kuch neele hai.
Idli-sambaar, masala dosa, bisibele bath waha ke pakwaan hai.
Waha kuch hindu hai, isaai hai, kuch musalmaan hai.
Woh hai Bangalorewale. Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
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Hum gore hai hum kale
Humna kisiko dil se nikale
Har kisiko dil mein basale.
Aare Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
Hum Hai Bangalorewale.
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waah kyaa shaan hai aapke banglore kee aur aapkee nazam kee, dheron daad.
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