Hum hi hai jo desh banate hai

by soudagar on June 13, 2012, 05:01:31 AM
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Dosto kal apne friends ke sath baitha to ek ne mujhe kha ki jo pas wala petrol pump h usse main petrol free me dalwa leta hun kyunki maine use tel chori krte pakda tha.. To dusre ne kha yeh galt h yar isse dusro ko to nuksan ho raha hai na..... Tabhi mere mann mein is rachna ka khyal aaya... Likhne ko to bht kuch tha par kuch btein share kr raha hoon aa sabse




hum hi hain jo khud ko lachar desh ko bhrast banate hai
khud ki galtiyon ko chhupa dusro mein dosh batate hain

hum hi hain jo aise neta banate hain, jo desh ko kha jate hain
chand paiso ke liye hum apna anmol matdan bech khate hain

hum hi hain jo apne kaam ke liye rishwat dekar aate hain
hum hi hain jo sarkari karmchari k mann mein rishwat ki bhukh jagate hain

hum hi hain jo tax chori kar desh ka rajsav ghatate hain
phir hum hi hain jo mehngai ki maar se marte jate hain

hum hi hain jo aakho ke samne jurm hote dekh aage se nikal jate hain
jab apne par zulm hone lage to madad ki guhar lagate hain

hum hi hain jo nari k samman ko samaj k saath roundte jate hai
aur jab apni bahin beti pr ban aaye to samaj ko path padhate hai

humhi hain jo dusro k bure waqt mein insaniyat bhul jate hain
khud par jab ban aaye to sabko insaniyat yaad dilate hain

hum hi hain jo kanya ki janm se pehle hi hatya karwate hain
baat chale samaj mein to knya bhurn hatya ko apradh batate hain.....


Humein pehle khud ko badlana hoga,samaj apne aap badlega
humein pehle khud ko sahi raste chalana hoga,desh apne aap aage badhega
humein pehle khud ko nirogi krna hoga,phir desh apne aap swasth hoga
humein pehle apne andr ki gandgi saf karni hogi, desh apne aap khubsurt banega

humse hi samaj banta hai , hum hi desh banate hain
dunia k nakshe mein jitna sundar dikhta hai, aao usse bhi jyada sundar hum apne desh ko banate hain
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 05:05:17 AM »
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soudagar ji aapkee is beshqeemtee peshkash ko mere dheron salaam aapne ismen talkh sachaaiyaaN bayaan kee hai.dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 12:25:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 01:08:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 
bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji.. jitni tarif ki jaaye aapke is rachna ki kam hai.. sach ko bahut khoobsurti se aapne pesh kiya hai... aajkal yahi haal hain har taraf... pehli koshish hamaari taraf se hi honi chahiye agar samaj ko aur desh ko khoobsurat karna hai to... ek baar fir se kehna chaahunga .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 05:09:34 PM »
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hriday ji aapka bahut baht bahut shukriya... notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 06:30:00 PM »
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Saudagar Jee Aadaab!

janab, aapke khayaal behad gehre aur sachche hai... aaj ki
haqeekhat ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... aur aapne jo swawlambitaa
ka bakhan kiya hai kabil e tareef hai... Usual Smile

Waise toH kalaam behad khoob rahi... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
HaaN aik baat kaheNge jaise aapne har misra( line ) meiN rhyming
word's use kiye haiN ... waise na kariye... har sher ke dusri line
meiN hi rhyming word use kijiye... jisse sher meiN gehrai aati haiN..
Aur khayaal aazaad sa lagta hai...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2012, 01:56:17 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaz ji....... main puri koshish karunga aapki baton ko amal mein lane ki.......aapka bahut b ahut dhanywad.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2012, 04:13:29 AM »
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bahut hi shandar peshkash soudagar ji dhero daad
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2012, 05:21:41 AM »
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A truth,
but....
anyway you deserve Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2012, 04:12:43 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sky star ji....
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2012, 11:10:53 AM »
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dhanywad armanje.......
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 05:36:19 PM »
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bahut bahut dhaywnad rishab ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 01:48:53 AM »
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bahut sahi likha hia sooudagar ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2013, 11:39:57 AM »
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 kya aap mujhe matdaan se sambandhit koi poem de sakte hai
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