~*~ Hum hi seekhte nahin ~*~ by Rahim

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Ek ansoo hai jo thamte nahin,
Aur armaan hai kay marte nahin..

Bhoolna chahte hai guzre hue kal ko,
Aur yeh lamhe hai kay guzarte nahin..

Jana hai yehi kay ishq dard deta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Aur ek hum hai kay sudharte nahin..

Aj chupana hai hume apne ashkon ko duniya se,
Aur yeh badal hai kay baraste nahin..

Kayi baar samjhaya kay likhte hue bhatka na karo ‘Khamosh’,
Aur ek hum hi hai kay seekhte nahin..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2011, 03:17:04 PM »
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wah bhai wah.
aap kamaal karte ho.
aapko kuch lines aur likhne the isme sad5
lekin ye bahut badhiya hai as usual
khus rahen
sukriya
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2011, 03:41:45 PM »
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Rahim sahab aadaab!

janab kia baat hai kia kaheN......
Waah waah waah bead khub kalaam se nwaaza hai
bus dil se daad kaool kijiye...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe..... Janaab,,

Behad khoob Daad daad daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Aate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2011, 09:06:19 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on January 15, 2011, 03:17:04 PM
wah bhai wah.
aap kamaal karte ho.
aapko kuch lines aur likhne the isme sad5
lekin ye bahut badhiya hai as usual
khus rahen
sukriya
Teh dil se shukriya Killbill jee..
Hmm koshish karunga kuch aur lines likhoun..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2011, 09:11:40 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 15, 2011, 03:41:45 PM
Rahim sahab aadaab!

janab kia baat hai kia kaheN......
Waah waah waah bead khub kalaam se nwaaza hai
bus dil se daad kaool kijiye...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe..... Janaab,,

Behad khoob Daad daad daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Aate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

Ohh teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee.
Itni izzat bakshne kay liye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2011, 09:38:20 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on January 15, 2011, 03:17:04 PM
aapko kuch lines aur likhne the isme sad5
Mere yeh khaas dosti ki farmaish par, kuch chand lines aur..
Janta nahin kay flow barkarar rakh paya hoon ya nahin..

Yeh duniya wale malamal kar dete hai,
Ek hum hi hai kay beekhte nahin..

Ae husn walon na pilao apni nigahon se,
Janlo aise nashe kay baad hum sambhalte nahin..

Hum dil phenk ashiqon main se nahin hai yaaron,
Har raah chalte ko hum pakadte nahin..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2011, 04:49:14 AM »
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thannk u so much Dost.
aapne kuch aur line likh kr meri baat rakh li.
bahut khubsurat likhi hai baaki ke lines bhi.
bilkul sachha aur Seedha.
maza aa gaya.
sukriya
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2011, 07:28:52 AM »
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bht khoob rahim.....
sply 2nd one.....
outstanding....
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2011, 11:03:18 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on January 16, 2011, 04:49:14 AM
thannk u so much Dost.
aapne kuch aur line likh kr meri baat rakh li.
bahut khubsurat likhi hai baaki ke lines bhi.
bilkul sachha aur Seedha.
maza aa gaya.
sukriya
Shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2011, 11:03:48 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 16, 2011, 07:28:52 AM
bht khoob rahim.....
sply 2nd one.....
outstanding....
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2011, 01:44:27 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Rahime Ji Aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 16, 2011, 01:54:23 PM »
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Shukriya Rishi jee..!
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 01:58:27 PM »
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Rahim Mere Bhai.. Bahut Bahut khoooooob... Pahala hi Sher Dil Pe Asar Chod gaya... Har ek lafz Bahut Khubsoorati Se Sajaaya Hai aapne...!!! Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Barbaad Hua Khud Ki Wafa Pe Yaaron,
Bewafaai Ko Phir Uski Kya Ilzaam Deta.....!!!



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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2011, 02:02:07 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on January 16, 2011, 01:58:27 PM
Rahim Mere Bhai.. Bahut Bahut khoooooob... Pahala hi Sher Dil Pe Asar Chod gaya... Har ek lafz Bahut Khubsoorati Se Sajaaya Hai aapne...!!! Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Barbaad Hua Khud Ki Wafa Pe Yaaron,
Bewafaai Ko Phir Uski Kya Ilzaam Deta.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**

Vikas bhaijan..
Teh teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Kya shaer likha hai..
Wah wah wah..
Applause Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2011, 02:04:25 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 15, 2011, 03:04:43 PM
Ek ansoo hai jo thamte nahin,
Aur armaan hai kay marte nahin..

Bhoolna chahte hai guzre hue kal ko,
Aur yeh lamhe hai kay guzarte nahin..

Jana hai yehi kay ishq dard deta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Aur ek hum hai kay sudharte nahin..

Aj chupana hai hume apne ashkon ko duniya se,
Aur yeh badal hai kay baraste nahin..

Kayi baar samjhaya kay likhte hue bhatka na karo ‘Khamosh’,
Aur ek hum hi hai kay seekhte nahin..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Bahut Ache... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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