Hum naseeboN kee chot khaaye haiN.........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 20, 2010, 02:35:05 PM
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Phool chun ke waheeN se laaye haiN
usne kaaNte jahaaN bichhaaye haiN

kiskee palkeN mere liye nam haiN
kiske hisse meree wafaayeN haiN

jaagtee aaNkh khwaab kyaa dekhe
haiN bahut sakht ye sazaayeN haiN

khushiyaaN bikatee haiN mere kooche me
wo ye paigaam le ke aaye haiN

mere gham se unheN kyaa lenaa hai
wo raqeeboN me khilkhilaaye haiN

aaj de kar koi nayee uljhan
phir sawaaloN me ghir ke aaye haiN

mout humko jagaa ke lout gayee
hum naseeboN kee chot khaaye haiN

mere sur saaz gazal haiN unke
khud ko aahoN me dubaa laaye haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2010, 03:36:56 PM »
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mamta ji--bahut khub.
aapka yahi andaaz pasand aata hai hume.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2010, 05:55:05 PM »
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dher saari daad mamtaji kabool kare
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 04:58:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Subhash jee!
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Yasmeen jee! nazr e inaayat ke liye dher sa shukriyaa....
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2010, 05:39:56 AM »
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mamta jee
aap mujhe sikhate ku nhi ghazal likhna!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2010, 06:22:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2010, 06:50:48 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanywaad Rajesh jee!
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2010, 06:52:31 AM »
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Subhaash jee ! mai khud abhee seekh hee rahee hooN...or ek taalib e ilm kisi ko kyaa sikhaayegaa...
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2010, 07:04:15 AM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta JI Nice Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 07:07:29 AM »
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dekha mene sikh liya ek word aapse Talib e Ilm...Usual SmileWinking
jiyo subbu jiyo.
lekin aapko bhi mera naam pta nai kaise yaad rahta hai!!!!
Mamta ji aap khus raho..
always..Usual SmileWinking
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2010, 07:12:46 AM »
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shukriyaa Rishi!
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Subhash jee aap ki duaaoN ke phool hum ne sahej liye haiN ....bahut bahut dhanyvaad...seekhne kee chaah rakhne waale isi tarah seekhte haiN...
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 07:53:11 AM »
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Duawon ke phool
     samet lo apne daaman me
khus hi rahna aye di tu hamesha
     chahe ab kaante hi khile aangan me
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2010, 08:31:42 AM »
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Mamta Ji Aze-had khubsurat aur dil ko chhoo lene wali ye aapki ghazal hazaron daad-o-taseen ki haqdaar hai...tahe-dil se daad pesh karta hun qubool farnayen...

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2010, 02:35:05 PM
Phool chun ke waheeN se laaye haiN
usne kaaNte jahaaN bichhaaye haiN

kiskee palkeN mere liye nam haiN
kiske hisse meree wafaayeN haiN

jaagtee aaNkh khwaab kyaa dekhe
haiN bahut sakht ye sazaayeN haiN

khushiyaaN bikatee haiN mere kooche me
wo ye paigaam le ke aaye haiN

mere gham se unheN kyaa lenaa hai
wo raqeeboN me khilkhilaaye haiN

aaj de kar koi nayee uljhan
phir sawaaloN me ghir ke aaye haiN

mout humko jagaa ke lout gayee
hum naseeboN kee chot khaaye haiN

mere sur saaz gazal haiN unke
khud ko aahoN me dubaa laaye haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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