Hum naseeboN kee chot khaaye haiN.........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 20, 2010, 02:35:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 21, 2010, 10:05:03 AM »
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bahut khoob mamta ji .......aapki soch mere dilko chhu gayi

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«Reply #16 on: December 21, 2010, 10:35:50 PM »
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Soch kee humraah ban-ne ke liye behad shukriyaa Tamanna jee!
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«Reply #17 on: December 22, 2010, 05:59:41 AM »
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mamta ji........muje sirf ek baat bataiye nahi sorry 2 baat ka jawab dijiye........ek to aap ye itni sweet sweet dil ko dhadka dene wale theme kaha se lati he and 2nd itni powerful words apko kese jahan me atee he........as usal it is marvelous ji.....superb excellent.....bht bht bht aacha....
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«Reply #18 on: December 22, 2010, 06:27:02 AM »
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Kyaa baat kah di Subhash jee! badee shayranaa tabeeyat rakhte haiN.....
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«Reply #19 on: December 22, 2010, 06:30:27 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Dr saheb!aap jaise sukhanvar kee himmat afzai humari kalam ke sabaat deti hai...
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«Reply #20 on: December 22, 2010, 06:38:55 AM »
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seene me uthte toofaan ko koi kya rok payega
      kaante hi khilte ho jis bagiya me koi phool wahan se kya payega
badal le zara sa nzren andaaz apna
      naseebon ke kaanto me tu 'nirala' bas phool hi phool payega
(" phool = fool ")
Bahut hi Badhiya hai Mamta madam-- achha lagta hai isko padhna.
thanx
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«Reply #21 on: December 22, 2010, 06:39:49 AM »
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Matrix jee!aap jaise qadradaan humaare housaloN ko sirf paNkh hee naheen dete balkeh aasmaan par baitha bhee dete haiN...jahaan tak lafz o khayaal kee baat hai to ahsas kee kirachen jab zehan me chubhne lagtee hain to tees lafzon ke zariye shairi ban kar bahane lagtee hai...........
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«Reply #22 on: December 22, 2010, 06:52:44 AM »
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Nirala jee ! bahut khoob andaaz hai aap kaa ........hume pasand aayaa....bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #23 on: December 22, 2010, 07:21:38 AM »
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Dil  cheer k chhalni kar gaye ehsass unke
Kuch  iss andaaz me wo unhe saja k laaye hain

Dard ki aankhon se bhi ashk beh nikle hain aaj
Kuch iss tarah wo unhe sabse chhupake laye hain.....

to b continued........

mamata ji ye kuch lines aapke liye hain...hope aap pasand karengi...

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«Reply #24 on: December 22, 2010, 11:10:16 AM »
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As usual you are superb.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Kya kahu...aapsa kuchh bhi tou nahi aata mujhe....phir bhi ek koshish....

Unkee aankhon se aansoo chura kar laaye hain
Apni muskaan unke hothon pe saja k aaye hain

Hum tou kismat se haare dekh unhe laut aaye hain
Apni saari khushiyein saugaat me deke aayee hain



Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2010, 02:35:05 PM
Phool chun ke waheeN se laaye haiN
usne kaaNte jahaaN bichhaaye haiN

kiskee palkeN mere liye nam haiN
kiske hisse meree wafaayeN haiN

jaagtee aaNkh khwaab kyaa dekhe
haiN bahut sakht ye sazaayeN haiN

khushiyaaN bikatee haiN mere kooche me
wo ye paigaam le ke aaye haiN

mere gham se unheN kyaa lenaa hai
wo raqeeboN me khilkhilaaye haiN

aaj de kar koi nayee uljhan
phir sawaaloN me ghir ke aaye haiN

mout humko jagaa ke lout gayee
hum naseeboN kee chot khaaye haiN

mere sur saaz gazal haiN unke
khud ko aahoN me dubaa laaye haiN

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«Reply #25 on: December 22, 2010, 02:07:01 PM »
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Shukriyaa Kasak jee!waaqai dil ko chhoo lene wale jazbaat haiN aap kee shayari me.....bahut khoob !
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«Reply #26 on: December 22, 2010, 02:12:20 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achchha likha hai Koyal!tumhaaree bhaawnaoN kee mai dil se qadra kartee hooN.....
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