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Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

by vb on November 25, 2013, 07:00:35 PM

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Hum, roze tumharay aangan say
Ik phool chura kar laatay heN
Ash’aar ki soorat likhtay heN
Aur geet banaa kar gaatay heN

Har roze mehektay geetoN ka
Bazaar men mela lagta hay
Koi raahi in ko takta hay
Koi gaahak khushboo leta hay

Tum aa kar in ko dekho ge
Har roze ye hasrat rehti kay
Hum kis aangan ki matti heN?
Har phool ki khushbu kehti hay

Hum roze inheN samjhatay heN
Ik roze tumheN yaaN aana hay
Har khushboo tum ne leni hay
Har phool labon tak laana hay

Is say pehlay, ye murjhaaiN
Gar ho paayay, tum aa jaao
Hum bikhreN, koi baat nahi
Phoolon ka bharam gar rakh paao...

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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2013, 07:42:33 PM »


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2013, 07:43:53 PM »

Hum, roze tumharay aangan say
Ik phool chura kar laatay heN
Ash’aar ki soorat likhtay heN
Aur geet banaa kar gaatay heN

yeah surely wwe will apprecaiate and critize aswell,
if there is any thing went wrong ,,

but till now it good keep writing
Applause


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2013, 09:01:18 PM »

Nazuk ehsaasaat raqam karti hui is khubsurat
nazm ke liye tah e dil se daad.


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2013, 09:37:47 PM »

Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 25, 2013, 07:42:33 PM

thanx...


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2013, 09:38:28 PM »

Quote from: sahal on November 25, 2013, 07:43:53 PM

sahal jee.. shukriya aap ka.. hum aisi he tavaqu rakhtay hen..


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2013, 09:39:27 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 25, 2013, 09:01:18 PM

Nazuk ehsaasaat raqam karti hui is khubsurat
nazm ke liye tah e dil se daad.

F.H.SIDDIQUI jee! aap say daad paai, hamaari qismat..
buhat shukriya aap ka...


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2013, 10:44:24 PM »

waah waah dheron daad aur dili mubarak baad aur haan kam se kam main to aapko hameshaa saraahataa hoon


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Re: Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2013, 02:12:53 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on November 25, 2013, 10:44:24 PM

waah waah dheron daad aur dili mubarak baad aur haan kam se kam main to aapko hameshaa saraahataa hoon

sksaini4 jee! aap ki nawazish hay... kehna sirf ye tha k agar kuchh theek na laga karay tu bhe bata diya kejay...

is namzm ko pasand kiya aap ne... shukriya aap ka...