Hum to karwa.n the

by CHARVI_BOHARA on January 06, 2009, 03:48:32 PM

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CHARVI_BOHARA

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ummid karti hu ki aap sab ka sath milega.....

Kuchh anjane se Cheharo me,
apno Si aawaz khojne lage,
Hum to karwa.n the Magr phir bhi,
kadmo.n Ke nisha.n khojne lage

Udane se wakif the Magr phir bhi,
parindo ke Paro par thamne ki Koshish karne lage
Hum to hawa the magar phir bhi,
Daman me kaid rahne Ki nakam koshish Karne lage

Chamak hum me bhi thi Magar sitaro.n se,
roshani Ki fariyad karne lage
Hum to aaftaab the magar phir bhi,
Dusaro ko jalane ki lou Se bewazah fariyad karne lage

Charvi bohara


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 04:31:05 PM »

Bohat bohat khoob Charvi jee behtareen kalam pesh kiya hain aapne


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 04:39:44 PM »

bahoot khoob Charvi, apka yoindia main sawagat hai!!

yah kavita samjh na ayye to last two lines araam se padna... asha hai jis arth main likhi hai wo arth samjh aa jayega!!

Mere karwa.n main the ek tum
tere jaane ke baad tanha hum rah gaye

Gujre bahoot karwa.n tere baad
per hum wahin kharre rah gaye

dekha tera karwa.n aor muskura diye
kuch ansoo the thume se, jo mere ander he rah gaye


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Rajbir

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 04:43:23 PM »

@Charvi
Very NIce Applause

Welcome to yoindia !

@Pooja
Marvellous ! Excellent Applause


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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 05:05:53 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Charvi ji..bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apane..

pooja, aapka kya kehna...bahut khoob

Hum to Karvaan the magar phir bhi,
Kadmo ke nishaan khojne lage,
In Raahon par Chalte-Chalte,
kahin tujhse Phir Rubaroo na ho jaau,
apne Hi jazbaaton ko dil mein Dabochne lage...

Tu salaamat rahe,yehi Dua hai meri,
teri khushi ke liye,
khud ko Dard ke samundar mein Duubone Lage...

Anjaam ishq ka isse bura aur kya hoga "KHWAISH"
nas-nas mein Mere Tu hai shaamil,
aur tere paas aane se,
Khud ko hi Hum aaj rokne lage....


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 05:13:04 PM »

bahoot khoob Khwaish ji and shukaria!!


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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 05:28:55 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 06, 2009, 05:13:04 PM

bahoot khoob Khwaish ji and shukaria!!

Thanks a lot Pooja...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 06:19:18 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 06, 2009, 04:39:44 PM

Tu mere nahi TERE karwa.n me hum the
Zimmedari teri thi q juda hum ho gaye

-SG-


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 06:22:21 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 06, 2009, 06:19:18 PM

Tu mere nahi TERE karwa.n me hum the
Zimmedari teri thi q juda hum ho gaye

-SG-

Na ayya samjh pooja ke, yah ghayal ji kaya kah gaye
aor kuch hua na hua, samjhne ki jimmedaari de gaye


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 06:25:40 PM »

Ghayel ka alif bhi agar samaj me aa jaye
Mera dawa hain tu ek behtareen shayra ban jaye


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 06:30:28 PM »

Ghayal ke alif samjhne ko ghayal ki zindagi kaise samjh jaau
na ayye samjh maine apne he alif, ghayal ke kaise samjh jaau
Tukbandio main he khushh Pooja, shayra kaise ban jaau
Ghayal ki shayri samjh sake jo, aisa hunar kaise pa jaau


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2009, 06:36:08 PM »

Shayra na ban sach_chi qadardaan to ban
Ek achche shauk ki pehcahn to ban
Main bada banu yeh mera maqsad nahi nadaan
Tu apne aap me khud ek pehchan to ban

-SG-


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2009, 06:41:33 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob SG ji...

Na pehchan chahiye, na naam chahiye
Pooja ko to bas wo nain (Ankhein) chahiye
Dekhein mujhe aor bas dekhte he rahe
Jis ke sath ho khatam karwa.n, wo chain chahiye


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2009, 06:52:53 PM »

Q pagli tu ghayel ko aazmati hain
Main aag hu q muje hath lagati hain
Jo kehne lagu main apni tu bezubaan ho jayegi
Chod rehne de maine mana tuje shayri aati hain

-SG-


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Pooja

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Re: Hum to karwa.n the

«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2009, 06:57:37 PM »

Pagli hu, pagli ki aazmasih kaya
agg main sona hua kundan, warna garmasih kaya
kahe kuch tu waha, sunu kuch main yaha
dil per na de jo dastak, us kalam ki syahi kaya