Hume tumse mohabbat hai........!!!!

by Talat on June 07, 2005, 06:15:58 AM
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Mohabbaton ka kabhi tumse sila nahin maangenge
Chahenge taumr par kabhi wafa nahin maangenge

Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge

Suna hai uske darbaar main bin maange milta hai
Us Khuda-e-bartar se hum bhala kya maangenge

Phoolon ki tamanna to sab hi kiya karte hain yahan
Sochte hain is bahaar main hum khizaan maangenge

Tera intezaar nahin hai hume, magar phir bhi ek baar
Kabhi tum ruburoo aa jaao mere ye dua maangenge !!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2005, 12:22:21 PM »
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Excellent Talat..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2005, 01:12:24 PM »
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Thanks a lot Friend !!! i hope you really liked it !!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2005, 03:51:12 PM »
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wah talat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! puri poem bohot hi khoobsurat hai par yeh lines

"Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge "

mujhe bohot hi achi lagi!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2005, 04:51:31 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Mohabbaton ka kabhi tumse sila nahin maangenge
Chahenge taumr par kabhi wafa nahin maangenge

Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge

Suna hai uske darbaar main bin maange milta hai
Us Khuda-e-bartar se hum bhala kya maangenge

Phoolon ki tamanna to sab hi kiya karte hain yahan
Sochte hain is bahaar main hum khizaan maangenge

Tera intezaar nahin hai hume, magar phir bhi ek baar
Kabhi tum ruburoo aa jaao mere ye dua maangenge !!!


bohat khoob Talat,each and every line is so beautiful.

Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge

Tera intezaar nahin hai hume, magar phir bhi ek baar
Kabhi tum ruburoo aa jaao mere ye dua maangenge !!!

these r soooo lovely lines,touched my heart deeply.Gr8 work.
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2005, 06:25:37 PM »
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wah talat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! puri poem bohot hi khoobsurat hai par yeh lines

"Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge "

mujhe bohot hi achi lagi!!!!!!!!!


Thanks a lot Meena.....really i am happy i got such a response !!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2005, 06:29:53 PM »
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Mohabbaton ka kabhi tumse sila nahin maangenge
Chahenge taumr par kabhi wafa nahin maangenge

Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge

Suna hai uske darbaar main bin maange milta hai
Us Khuda-e-bartar se hum bhala kya maangenge

Phoolon ki tamanna to sab hi kiya karte hain yahan
Sochte hain is bahaar main hum khizaan maangenge

Tera intezaar nahin hai hume, magar phir bhi ek baar
Kabhi tum ruburoo aa jaao mere ye dua maangenge !!!



wonderfull sis....very touching..............
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2005, 06:30:15 PM »
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bohat khoob Talat,each and every line is so beautiful.

Taqdeerain to ban jaati hain pehle se hi kahin par
Teri aarzu bohot hai par teri dua nahin maangenge

Tera intezaar nahin hai hume, magar phir bhi ek baar
Kabhi tum ruburoo aa jaao mere ye dua maangenge !!!

these r soooo lovely lines,touched my heart deeply.Gr8 work.


Thanks a lot Nidhi....jab maine ye shayari apne mann me sochi thi (i nvr write on paper..always write in my mind)  tab yeh nahin soch tha ki iska response aisa milega!! thanks yaar !!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2005, 06:32:28 PM »
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wonderfull sis....very touching..............


Thanks a lot Nikki........... i am feeling very happy for getting such appreciation !!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2005, 02:27:46 PM »
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Na jaane kyon bacha rakhen hain ansoo
Abhi shayad mujhe rona bohot hai!!
Ye ankain aur kya dekhen kisi ko
In ankhon ne tujhe dekha bohot hai!!
Na milne ki kasam kha ke bhi maine
Tujhe har raah main dhoonda bohot hai!!


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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2005, 02:34:18 PM »
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Ek lamha bhi aisa guzarta nahin
jis main tere bare main socha nahin
khyalon pe mere chaaye ho is tarah
chayee ho aasman pe kaali ghata
har pal bas tujhe yaad karta hai dil
milne ko tujh se tadapta hai dil !!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2005, 02:51:30 PM »
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bahut khoob sis..

dekho kissi ki yaadon mein khud ko na mita dena
yaadein to dil ka khazana hoti hain
sambhlna kahin isse na luta dena

woh ayenge ik roz, hai agar dil ko yaqin
to unhe dil mein basaye rakhna, aur aane ki dua dena..
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2005, 04:14:20 PM »
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Wah Talat ji..........ur creation is as sweet as ur....wonderful.........i have saved it as word doc....to keep with me as ur memory.....hope u dont mind.....

Kuch toh bat hai jo tumko hi hum bhul nahi pate,
Rahe hum tumse dur par kareeb hum tumhe pate,
Kya hai hamara rishta, Kya naam du isse main,
Jitna bhi sochte hai hum utna hi ulajhte jate.........:-(
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2005, 05:21:24 PM »
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Thanks Nikki....aur bohot achcha kaha hai.........

Thanks Amit !!!.... Its my pleasure that u liked it so much...mujhe nahin pata tha ki meri ye poetry mere friends ko itni pasand aayegi.... and very nice and touching !!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2005, 05:34:57 PM »
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Zindagi ki haqeeqaton ne tadpaa diya hai mujhe bohot
Kabhi neend main meri tum ek khwaab ban ke aa jana

Main chal rahi hoon ghumon se tapte hue sahra ke beech
Jo ho sake to kabhi saraab ban ke saamne aa jaana

Dunya ke is hujoom main, hai mera apna koi bhi nahin
Jis ka har lafz ho mere liye, wo kitaab ban ke tum aa jana

Mere in aansuon ne hi jala diya hai mujhe sanam
Sulag raha hai wujood mera, tum aab ban ke aa jana

Tumhari har baat mere man ko chu jaati hai
Kabhi mere saamne tum kharaab ban ke aa jana

Thak chali hoon main ab yeh ashk bahate bahate
Tumhe soch ke muskura doon aisi yaad ban kar aa jana!!!!
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