HUNAR

by bekarar on June 10, 2009, 01:49:00 PM
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kis yaar me raqeeb chupa hai, tujhe khabar kya hai,
falak pe jaa ke yun bhi, jami ka aata najar kya hai,

ya jindgi de ke samjhoge ya doulat kho ke janoge
aakhir insaan pah-chanane ka hunar kya hai,

badlega waqt to tujhpe kai sawal uthenge
har shaam poochegi ke bata ye sahar kya hai

halaq se aah na nikle, yahi soch ke chup hun
mujhe maloom hai, meri aahon ka asar kya hai

kuch der se samjha, mai tere hunar ki baariki,
mere maalik tera imtihaan kya aur mera sabar kya hai

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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 01:59:16 PM »
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Mujhe maloom hain meri aahon ka asar kya hain.......Arey mere dost kya likh dala kaleja cheer ke rakh diya yaar. Maza aa gaya Ustaad kuch hame bhi seekha do yaar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khabardar kare hain mujhse bekhabar rehnewale

Inse koi pooche to sahi tumhe Ghayel ki khabar kya hain

-SG-

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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 02:19:23 PM »
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Kafi time ke baad nazar aaye Bekarar Ji
Lekin ek badi khubsurat rachna ke saath
Badi yaad aa rahi thi aapki
Milte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 02:27:20 PM »
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Sanjeev Bhai.. Kafi Dino Baad aaj aapko Padha.. Usual Smile Behad Lajawab Alfaaz Pesh kiye Hain Dost.. Padh Kar Bahut accha Laga.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 04:16:50 PM »
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Waah Sanjeev Bhai KYa KLhoob LIkha Hai, Har Ashar Mashallah Kabeel-e-Tareef Hai,.
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 04:51:58 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob sanjeev Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Humari Shikayat Aapne Abhi Door naa Ki,Yaar Aate Raha Karo Yoindia par!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 09:00:47 PM »
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kis yaar me raqeeb chupa hai, tujhe khabar kya hai,
falak pe jaa ke yun bhi, jami ka aata najar kya hai,

ya jindgi de ke samjhoge ya doulat kho ke janoge
aakhir insaan pah-chanane ka hunar kya hai,

badlega waqt to tujhpe kai sawal uthenge
har shaam poochegi ke bata ye sahar kya hai

halaq se aah na nikle, yahi soch ke chup hun
mujhe maloom hai, meri aahon ka asar kya hai

kuch der se samjha, mai tere hunar ki baariki,
mere maalik tera imtihaan kya aur mera sabar kya hai



Waah..Bohot Khoob Sanjeev Ji....Chaliye, itne din ki absence iss khobsurat shayari ki wajah se ma'af kar dete hain !  Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob !
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 10:19:33 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Sanjeev bhaijan...Bahaut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 05:21:07 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji,very nice and beautiful creation,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut din baad.
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 05:32:43 AM »
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kis yaar me raqeeb chupa hai, tujhe khabar kya hai,
falak pe jaa ke yun bhi, jami ka aata najar kya hai,

ya jindgi de ke samjhoge ya doulat kho ke janoge
aakhir insaan pah-chanane ka hunar kya hai,

badlega waqt to tujhpe kai sawal uthenge
har shaam poochegi ke bata ye sahar kya hai

halaq se aah na nikle, yahi soch ke chup hun
mujhe maloom hai, meri aahon ka asar kya hai

kuch der se samjha, mai tere hunar ki baariki,
mere maalik tera imtihaan kya aur mera sabar kya hai




WAAAH WAAAH KYAA KHOOB LIKHAA HAI BEKARAR SB AAPNEY
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 09:51:40 AM »
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har jaam ke saath bhadkti rahi aag, mere dil ki
kahte hain ise gar raht-e-paimana, to fir zahar kya hai,

uthe najar inki aur rahe hosh kayam bhi,
maikash tab bhi rahe payasa to wo nazar kya hai



bahoot shukriya sajid itne dino baad kuch likha aur wo bhi bas instant khichdi ki tarah fir bhi us par fouran tumhaara jawab dil ko sakun de gaya.

SARVESH JI bahoot shukriya janab aapne samay diya is rachna ko aur dil khol ke saraha

VICKI BRO achcha laga ki aapke comment padh kar aap logon ka pyaar hai ki kahin bhi rahen yoindia par aana hi padta hai.....

AZEEM
shukriya bhai achcha laga jaan ke ki jo likha aapko pasand aaya

KHWAHISH BRO
sukriya aapne padha aur saraha ...aapki shikayat jayaj hai insha-allah jald hi regular ho jaunga

TALAT
meri koi rachna tumhaari najron ke samne se nikal bhar jaaye to mujhe sukun aa jata hai..aur agar us par tumhaare koi comment aa jaaye to mano likhna poora hua
shukriya talat

RAHIM
shukriya bhai aapne samay diya is rachna ko aur saraha.

Madhuvesh
bahoot shukriya madhu. aapne padha aur samjha

Khamosh awaz
aapki is khoobsurat si wah ke liye bahoot shukriya janab



bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2009, 11:08:11 AM »
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har jaam ke saath bhadkti rahi aag, mere dil ki
kahte hain ise gar raht-e-paimana, to fir zahar kya hai,

uthe najar inki aur rahe hosh kayam bhi,
maikash tab bhi rahe payasa to wo nazar kya hai





Wah wah meri jaan tumhari instant khichdi aisi hoti hain to biryani ka kya alam hoga.....majboor kar dete ho likhne ke liye. Yaar yeh do sher to ghazab dha rahe hain lagta hain tumse dosti khatam karke tumhara shagird banna padega.

Rahi ta umr bekarari intazaar raha baki

Aur woh kehte hain Ghayel tera dard-e-mukhtasar kya hain..

-SG-
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2009, 11:29:47 AM »
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WAAH WAAH KYA QALAM HAI AAPKA'BEKARAR JI',
MAINE KUCH DINO PEHLE HI PRAVESH KIYA.WELCOME BACK
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2010, 11:14:35 AM »
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shukriya sajid & shaheen
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2010, 11:29:11 AM »
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kis yaar me raqeeb chupa hai, tujhe khabar kya hai,
falak pe jaa ke yun bhi, jami ka aata najar kya hai,

ya jindgi de ke samjhoge ya doulat kho ke janoge
aakhir insaan pah-chanane ka hunar kya hai,

badlega waqt to tujhpe kai sawal uthenge
har shaam poochegi ke bata ye sahar kya hai

halaq se aah na nikle, yahi soch ke chup hun
mujhe maloom hai, meri aahon ka asar kya hai

kuch der se samjha, mai tere hunar ki baariki,
mere maalik tera imtihaan kya aur mera sabar kya hai



har jaam ke saath bhadkti rahi aag, mere dil ki
kahte hain ise gar raht-e-paimana, to fir zahar kya hai,

uthe najar inki aur rahe hosh kayam bhi,
maikash tab bhi rahe payasa to wo nazar kya hai



Wah wah Wah!!! Sanjeev Bro,Aaj Phir isse Padha,Aur Yahan Bina Kuch Likhen Raha na Gaya..

Bahut bahut Khoob mere Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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