-----/// Hunar woh meraa thaa ///----- Hriday

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jo  neelaam  huwaa baazaaron mein, ghar woh meraa thaa
jo barbaad huwaa  toofaan mein, shahar  woh  meraa thaa

kissaa  jo   sunaayaa  mehfil  mein,  dil  ke  toot  jaane  kaa
waah  waah  to khoob mili, kissaa magar  woh  meraa thaa

tamaashaa to  bahut dekhaa  hogaa, logo ne duniyaa mein
khud kaa tamaashaa  banaane  kaa, hunar woh meraa thaa

shikwaa   kyaa   karun  gairon   se,  apno  ne  hi  lootaa  hai
jisne  kiyaa  fareb  sangh  mere, humsafar woh meraa thaa

humko  koi  dard  kahaan,  hum duniyaa se yeh kehte hain
takiyaa  jiskaa  geelaa  rahaa,  raat  bhar  woh  meraa  thaa






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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2015, 12:40:49 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2015, 01:35:08 AM »
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Just Awesome. Gotta give u a Rau!
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2015, 01:48:32 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Badhiya !!
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2015, 05:11:25 AM »
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Bahut umda. daad kabul karen. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2015, 06:03:53 AM »
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hriday ji.. bohot khub.. mazaa aagaya..

Mazaa aagaya aapki kavitayen padh ke
Dil Khush ho gaya aapke alfaazon ko sun ke
kya khub likhte hain aap
agar jaan maang lete aap
hum jaaan dedete apki inn pakhnthion ko dil mein bassane ke liye.
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2015, 02:12:07 PM »
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Excellent creation bhaiya ji... Rau qabool farmaaye
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 27, 2015, 09:36:02 PM




jo  neelaam  huwaa baazaaron mein, ghar woh meraa thaa
jo barbaad huwaa  toofaan mein, shahar  woh  meraa thaa

kissaa  jo   sunaayaa  mehfil  mein,  dil  ke  toot  jaane  kaa
waah  waah  to khoob mili, kissaa magar  woh  meraa thaa

tamaashaa to  bahut dekhaa  hogaa, logo ne duniyaa mein
khud kaa tamaashaa  banaane  kaa, hunar woh meraa thaa

shikwaa   kyaa   karun  gairon   se,  apno  ne  hi  lootaa  hai
jisne  kiyaa  fareb  sangh  mere, humsafar woh meraa thaa

humko  koi  dard  kahaan,  hum duniyaa se yeh kehte hain
takiyaa  jiskaa  geelaa  rahaa,  raat  bhar  woh  meraa  thaa



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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2015, 05:23:36 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
lajawaab peshkash hriday ji jitni tarif ki jaye kam apke iss behtreen kalaam ki dherooooooooooooo daaaaaaaddddd or rau due
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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Thank u sooo much Pooja ji...!!!

Quote from: vinery on May 28, 2015, 01:35:08 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Ruhaanii ji....!!!


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bahut bahut shukriyaa Raji ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajigujral on May 28, 2015, 05:11:25 AM
Bahut umda. daad kabul karen. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ankush ji....!!!

Quote from: ankushtayal95 on May 28, 2015, 06:03:53 AM
hriday ji.. bohot khub.. mazaa aagaya..

Mazaa aagaya aapki kavitayen padh ke
Dil Khush ho gaya aapke alfaazon ko sun ke
kya khub likhte hain aap
agar jaan maang lete aap
hum jaaan dedete apki inn pakhnthion ko dil mein bassane ke liye.
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