idhar-udhar.....................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on June 01, 2015, 04:31:01 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1305 times)
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
Reply with quote


                             rahii   ujaaley   kii   nazar  din  bhar!
                             aayaa   kaun   merey   ghar   din  bhar!!

                             shaam    kii    talaash    mein    subah!
                             kartii    rahii     safar    din    bhar!

                             bujhh  kar  bhii  thaa  raushan  chiraag!
                             rahaa  baaqii  raat  kaa  asar din  bhar!

                             kahtaa   hai   khud   ko    suraj    per!
                             nahin  miltii  uskii  khabar  din   bhar!

                             soya  thaa   saaye   mein    bashar   ek!
                             aur  jaltaa  rahaa  ek  shajar  din bhar!

                             baat  bigaad   hii   dii  aakhir   usney!
                             kar ke lafzo.n ko idhar-udhar  din  bhar!

                             khushboo baad-e-sabaa kii bhhinii-bhhinii!
                             mehkti  rahi  khamosh  magar  din   bhar!!

                             

                             
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2015, 05:27:39 PM »
Reply with quote
very nice ek rau
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2015, 07:34:03 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 01, 2015, 04:31:01 PM


                             rahii   ujaaley   kii   nazar  din  bhar!
                             aayaa   kaun   merey   ghar   din  bhar!!

                             shaam    kii    talaash    mein    subah!
                             kartii    rahii     safar    din    bhar!

                             bujhh  kar  bhii  thaa  raushan  chiraag!
                             rahaa  baaqii  raat  kaa  asar din  bhar!

                             kahtaa   hai   khud   ko    suraj    per!
                             nahin  miltii  uskii  khabar  din   bhar!

                             soya  thaa   saaye   mein    bashar   ek!
                             aur  jaltaa  rahaa  ek  shajar  din bhar!

                             baat  bigaad   hii   dii  aakhir   usney!
                             kar ke lafzo.n ko idhar-udhar  din  bhar!

                             khushboo baad-e-sabaa kii bhhinii-bhhinii!
                             mehkti  rahi  khamosh  magar  din   bhar!!

                             

                             
bahut hee umdah Khamosh Sahib, dheroooN dheroooooooooN daaadddddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
                            Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
                                                 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
vinery
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 17
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
3 days, 17 hours and 17 minutes.
Posts: 1157
Member Since: May 2015


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2015, 03:17:52 AM »
Reply with quote
Nice.
Logged
sarfira
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2015, 06:43:21 AM »
Reply with quote
kya khne sahab
nwhad umdaah

ek rau to bnta h

daad daad daad

be happy ji
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2015, 07:01:13 AM »
Reply with quote
वाह.....वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....

ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2015, 06:30:05 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khub khamoshji....
Logged
deepraghav
Shayari Qadrdaan
***

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
2 days, 19 hours and 53 minutes.
Posts: 257
Member Since: Feb 2014


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2015, 07:14:44 AM »
Reply with quote
Nice poetry.....
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2015, 03:59:37 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2015, 03:33:28 AM »
Reply with quote
Be had umda waaaahhhhhh daaaaaaaaddddd
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2015, 04:14:25 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sksaini4 on June 01, 2015, 05:27:39 PM
very nice ek rau

thanx-SKS
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2015, 04:15:15 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: surindarn on June 01, 2015, 07:34:03 PM
bahut hee umdah Khamosh Sahib, dheroooN dheroooooooooN daaadddddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
                            Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
                                                 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2015, 04:15:58 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: vinery on June 02, 2015, 03:17:52 AM
Nice.

thanx
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2015, 04:16:43 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sarfira on June 02, 2015, 06:43:21 AM
kya khne sahab
nwhad umdaah

ek rau to bnta h

daad daad daad

be happy ji


thanx
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2015, 04:17:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on June 02, 2015, 07:01:13 AM
वाह.....वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....

ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....




thanx
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: idhar-udhar.....................(K_A)
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 24, 2024, 04:16:37 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.111 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer