ik bar tum bhee aaoo to

by anokhiladli on June 04, 2010, 08:25:42 AM
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aj baichani c kaisi hy kuch iska sabab batlao to
tum chara ger ho aa k mairy zakhmon ko sehlaoo to

hum morkh hain hum papi hain hum jo bhee hain yae man lea
achon say to sub hee kertay hain tum hum say ker dikhlao to

main tanha kub tuk bolon ge tum to bus suntay rehtay ho
kuch mun ki dharas aasa bundhay koi aisi bat  batoo to

khoabon k sahray he hum nay yae furqat ka zamana kata hay
sapnay to dikhatay rehtay ho taabeer bhe ab diklaoo to

achay hain buray hain jo bhee hain jaisay hain tumhatay apnay hain
kuch laj hamari rakh lo  ab  tum nay hee keia  haiy  chunaoo to
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2010, 08:34:29 AM »
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Buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay... parh kar really buhat he accha laga.. ake real shaair ki misaal...
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2010, 08:36:59 AM »
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sorry again.. 'ik baar tum bhe aao tu' wala sher nahi shamil kiya aap ne...
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2010, 08:42:15 AM »
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hmm bus yon hee,kuch shair sirf apnay leeay hotay hain
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2010, 08:43:07 AM »
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g... achhi baat...
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2010, 11:13:25 AM »
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Nice creation Anokhi ji. Keep it up.
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2010, 12:41:13 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anokhiladli ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2010, 03:27:30 PM »
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very very nice anokhiladli ji ......

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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2010, 02:45:23 PM »
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thanks Riyaz,Klaskar and Jusbi for liking this
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