..~~Ik khayaal~~..

by HumTum is back on January 18, 2006, 02:59:14 PM
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shahar ki is bheer mein mitti ka ghar gir jayega
mujh ko lagta hai zameen par aasman gir jayega

khatm kar do saare rishte tor do wade wafa
warna ghurbat par ameeri ka qahar gir jayega

muflisi mein ho gaya hai ye hamare tan ka haal
meri soorat dekh kar bachcha mera dar jayega

usko marne se bachaya sab jise kahte hain saanp
kya khabar thi mujh ko woh mere gale par jayega.

woh jo aayen ghar ko mere dekhna 'HumTum' miyan
phool ki khushboo se us din ghar mera bhar jayega !!
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2006, 03:02:55 PM »
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Bahut he Khoobsoorat likha hai HumTum !

Yun hi likhte raho... :D
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2006, 05:47:51 PM »
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Lovely humtum,bohat ache.
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2006, 07:04:02 PM »
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nice nice!

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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2006, 10:17:11 PM »
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bahut khoob hum tum ji....

Pati pati gulab nahi huwa kartey
Moti moti pey aab nahi huwa kartey
Zindgi bey maza si lagti hai jab
Khayalon men aap nahi huwa kartey
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2006, 05:35:06 PM »
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shahar ki is bheer mein mitti ka ghar gir jayega
mujh ko lagta hai zameen par aasman gir jayega

khatm kar do saare rishte tor do wade wafa
warna ghurbat par ameeri ka qahar gir jayega

muflisi mein ho gaya hai ye hamare tan ka haal
[you]meri soorat dekh kar bachcha mera dar jayega[/you]

usko marne se bachaya sab jise kahte hain saanp
kya khabar thi mujh ko woh mere gale par jayega.

woh jo aayen ghar ko mere dekhna 'HumTum' miyan
phool ki khushboo se us din ghar mera bhar jayega !!


Very nice humtum, keep writing.
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2006, 02:43:46 AM »
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wowoowowwow kaya baat hai hamesha ki tarah lajawaab.com Humtum ji!!!
nice one sonu!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2006, 02:58:08 AM »
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thanks pooja ji...
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2011, 09:46:10 AM »
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shahar ki is bheer mein mitti ka ghar gir jayega
mujh ko lagta hai zameen par aasman gir jayega

khatm kar do saare rishte tor do wade wafa
warna ghurbat par ameeri ka qahar gir jayega

muflisi mein ho gaya hai ye hamare tan ka haal
meri soorat dekh kar bachcha mera dar jayega

usko marne se bachaya sab jise kahte hain saanp
kya khabar thi mujh ko woh mere gale par jayega.

woh jo aayen ghar ko mere dekhna 'HumTum' miyan
phool ki khushboo se us din ghar mera bhar jayega !!



very good
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