ik shahar maine basaayaa hai....................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on January 05, 2012, 10:09:08 AM
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ik shahar maine basaayaa hai khayaaloN kaa kaheeN
but banaa baithaa hai tu usme sawaaloN kaa kaheeN

dar b dar firtaa rahaa apni hee fariyaad liye
hogaa kayaa faisalaa sulge hue masloN kaa kaheeN

ye safar meraa musalsal hai naheeN koi ghilaa
kyaa madaavaa koi hai mere aabloN kaa kaheeN

shor aaloodah jahaaN hai koi suntaa hee naheeN
phir bhee ik raNg e nawaaN hai bulbuloN kaa kaheeN

pairhan kaaghzee chhupatee naheeN haaye moorat
majmuaa dekhaa hai kyaa tumne misaaloN kaa kaheeN

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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 10:27:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 02:24:17 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai Mamta ji.. bahoot Khoob !


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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 05:02:54 PM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 07:01:27 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Achche ahsaas O khayaal kaheN hai .. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

HaaN jo kafiyoN ki galtiyaaN huyi hai usse hume yeH nahi lagta
ke aapne yeH kalaam likhne ke dil se likhi ho.. Huh?

Khair par aaiNdaa aapse achchi aur achchi hi kalaam padhne mile
yehi ummid raheNgi.. Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2012, 08:02:04 AM »
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baht baht achi post Mamta ji--
daad daad
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2012, 06:20:05 AM »
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Shukriyaa SF jee!
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 05:03:57 PM »
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Wah Mamta ji kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne jo qabil-e-tareef hai. Meri taraf se daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #8 on: January 28, 2012, 08:21:13 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaaz jee! hameshaa kee tarah aap kee housla afzai mere kalam ko aur aur houslaa deti hai.....behad shukriyaa...
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2012, 03:54:24 PM »
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bahut sunder peshkash mamta ji.
hum to vaise aapki har peshkash ke fan hain.
likhte rahiye.
humen anand mai karte rahiye.
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2012, 12:37:52 AM »
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houslaa afzaai or izzat afzaai kaa behad shukriyaa
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