imteehan hazar milte hai

by Pooja on December 29, 2008, 04:14:26 AM
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her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai

kabhi jhunjhlaau apne he app main, khud se khafa hokar
kabhi apno ke roop, patjhar smaan milte hai

chal rahi hai zindagi, gumo ke jhulo main jhulati
dekhein agge kaya kaya aor jeevan tamam milte hai

her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2008, 05:44:38 AM »
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bahut hi khoob likha hain poojaji....

ji ne dukh ka deedar kiya,
samjo  sukh ka imteehan diya.
jo dukh aur sukh dono apnaye,
zindagi usne hai jeeya.
   
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2008, 08:37:01 AM »
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Bohat Khoob POOJA JEE AAPNE KAMAL KA LIKHA HAIN.... Clapping Smiley

Baat itni si hain yaad rakhna ghayel
Hasrat jaisi ho tumhari waise yaha bazaar milte hain
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2008, 10:29:37 AM »
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Poojaji, Bahut khoob lika hai aapne...tajurba-ay-jindagi...

Pareshan hu jindagi jo her pal leti hai oon imteehano se
Jinka hai koi javab nahi, roj roj k ayse sawalon se
Kyon lete hai jindagi, priksha hum jaise nadano ki
Abhi khola hi nahi hamne jindagi ki kitab k panno ko
Anaam
her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai

kabhi jhunjhlaau apne he app main, khud se khafa hokar
kabhi apno ke roop, patjhar smaan milte hai

chal rahi hai zindagi, gumo ke jhulo main jhulati
dekhein agge kaya kaya aor jeevan tamam milte hai

her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai

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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 11:19:51 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Jawaaab Nahi aapka.. Dil ko Chhoo gaye aapke yeh Chand Dard bhare Alfaaz.. bahut Khoooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2008, 05:55:41 PM »
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her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai

kabhi jhunjhlaau apne he app main, khud se khafa hokar
kabhi apno ke roop, patjhar smaan milte hai

chal rahi hai zindagi, gumo ke jhulo main jhulati
dekhein agge kaya kaya aor jeevan tamam milte hai

her ek kadam per imteehan hazar milte hai
na jaane kyun, jidhar bhi jao, dukho ke deedar milte hai

Wah! kamaal ka likha hai Pooja Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2008, 06:08:32 PM »
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bahut hi khoob likha hain poojaji....

ji ne dukh ka deedar kiya,
samjo  sukh ka imteehan diya.
jo dukh aur sukh dono apnaye,
zindagi usne hai jeeya.
   

bahoot bahoot shukaria Cara ji..

bahoot achilines likhi hai apne..

Dukho ke deedar se nahi ghabraya man
magar kabhi to kahin bahar mile
adat se ho gai hai ab to Pooja ko
magar kabhi to koi khushi bhi intzar main mile
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 06:09:26 PM »
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Bohat Khoob POOJA JEE AAPNE KAMAL KA LIKHA HAIN.... Clapping Smiley

Baat itni si hain yaad rakhna ghayel
Hasrat jaisi ho tumhari waise yaha bazaar milte hain


shukaria and very well said SG
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 06:09:56 PM »
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Poojaji, Bahut khoob lika hai aapne...tajurba-ay-jindagi...

Pareshan hu jindagi jo her pal leti hai oon imteehano se
Jinka hai koi javab nahi, roj roj k ayse sawalon se
Kyon lete hai jindagi, priksha hum jaise nadano ki
Abhi khola hi nahi hamne jindagi ki kitab k panno ko
Anaam

SHUKARIA anaam ji,

bahoot he achi lines likhi hai apne~
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2008, 06:10:30 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Jawaaab Nahi aapka.. Dil ko Chhoo gaye aapke yeh Chand Dard bhare Alfaaz.. bahut Khoooooob.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**

bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2008, 06:10:47 PM »
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Wah! kamaal ka likha hai Pooja Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 06:27:39 AM »
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Applause

Bohat khoob Pooja...
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 04:45:00 PM »
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thanks Honey!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 05:02:38 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
Bahoot Gehari Soch hai aapki
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 05:04:45 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Pank ji!!
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