INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA--GHANSHAMDAS AHUJA

by ahujagd on May 01, 2013, 01:28:29 PM
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( Bahut dinon se active nahi rah paaya uske liye kshama chahta hoon aajkal jo samaaj mein ho raha hai us paristithi mein vishubdh man se yeh likh raha hoon.)

INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA ....

MANVATA KO KARTA SHARMSAAR BAAR BAAR
CHHOTI-CHHOTI BACCHIYON SE BALAATKAAR 
INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA…

KYAA HO GAYAA HAI USKI MAANSIKATA KO
VAASNA KA KITNA GULAAM HO GAYAA VO
KSHARN BHAR KI USKI YEH KAALI KARTOOT
US BECHAARI KA SAB KUCHH LETI HAI LOOT
IS NEECHTA KE KITNE UDAHARAN PESH KAREGA...INSAAN…

KOKH SE JISKI USNE JANM LIYAA HAI
USEE ABLAA KA KYA HASHRA KIYA HAI
KAAM KI BHOOKH AISEE  BHI KYA RE
BAHIN-BETI KA JO BHED BHULAA DE.
SAMAAJ  IS BARBARTA KO KAB TAK SAHEGA…INSAAN….

CHARON OR DESH KA NAAM HO RAHA HAI BADNAAM
BHARAT MEIN AKSAR HOTA HAI IS TARAH KA KAAM
KYAA SWATANTRA HONE KE YAHI MAAYNE HAIN
SOCH LO AB TO AAP KHUD KITNE SAYAANE HAIN.
BADLO IS GHRANIT SOCH KO JAMAANA KYA KAHEGA…INSAAN…

AB BHI VAQT HAI AAPNE AAP KO SAMBHAALO,
APNE SACHHE DIL KO ACHHI TARAH KHANGAALO,
MANAVATAA KA AB BAS YAHI HAI TAKAAZA
CHHOD BURAI ACHHAYI KE DAMAN MEIN SAMA JA.
GALAT VICHARON VALA DARINDA TO BEMAUT MAREGA..INSAAN…

SAMAAJ KO SUNDAR HUMEN HI TO BANAANA HAI
ACHHAIYON KO APNE JEEVAN MEIN SAJAANA HAI
DOOSHIT VICHRON KO KABHI MAN MEIN NA AANE DO
JEEO AUR JEENE DO KI PARAMPARA SABKO APNANE DO.
AISE VEEBHATSA ACHARAN PAR SAMAAJ AB CHUP NA RAHEGA

INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA
INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA
INSAAN AAKHIR KAHAAN TAK GIREGA....






GHANSHAMDAS AHUJA
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 05:58:40 PM »
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Namaste Ahauha Sir
Aapki ye rachna aapke sundar vicharoN ka aaina hai..
Mai to us sukhad paridaam ki asha karta hun..jiske paripechya me ye aapne likha hai..
ek sundar samaaj ka nirmaan.

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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 07:27:56 PM »
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Badi Khoobsurat Aur Kaam Ki Post Hai Yeh...

Bahut Bahut Khub Ahuja Ji.

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2013, 07:52:56 PM »
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bahut accha kalam likha hai aapne ahuja jee
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2013, 08:52:15 PM »
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nyc & impressive thoughts,........
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2013, 09:30:34 PM »
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Namaste Ahauha Sir
Aapki ye rachna aapke sundar vicharoN ka aaina hai..
Mai to us sukhad paridaam ki asha karta hun..jiske paripechya me ye aapne likha hai..
ek sundar samaaj ka nirmaan.



dhanyavaad mukesh ji,
aapko rachna achhi lagee, jaan ke khushi hui,hausala afjayee ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
ghanshamdas ahuja

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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 01:31:59 AM »
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Badi Khoobsurat Aur Kaam Ki Post Hai Yeh...

Bahut Bahut Khub Ahuja Ji.

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
shukriya hausal afzaayee ka
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2013, 02:13:31 AM »
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Waah waah bahut khoob, kaafi achhe vichaar wayaqt kiye haiN aapne Ghanshyam jee.
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 11:17:15 AM »
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bahut accha kalam likha hai aapne ahuja jee
suman ji,
bahut bahut dhanyavaad aap jaisee achhi shaira se prashansha milee main dhanya ho gaya, hausala-a afjayee ke liye shukriya
ghansham
 
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nyc & impressive thoughts,........
Thanks Laaiba Ji,
Aapne samay nikal kar apna comment diya,
aapko rachna pasand aayee jaan ke khushi hui.
ghanshamdas ahuja
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2013, 10:25:44 PM »
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ati sunder ati sunder badhaai ho
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2013, 02:32:15 PM »
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Waah waah bahut khoob, kaafi achhe vichaar wayaqt kiye haiN aapne Ghanshyam jee.
Dear Iftakhar bhai,

aapne rachna pad ke apna samay diya uske liye bahut bahut dhanyavaad, tareef ke liye bhi shukriya,
shubhkaamnaon ke saath
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ati sunder ati sunder badhaai ho

Saini Sahab,
Bahut bahut Dhanyavaad,
Response mein deri ke liye kchama chahta hoon par samajh mein nahi aata aakhir kab hamare samaaj mein sudhaar aayega? 
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