~*~ Insaan hoon main ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 02, 2012, 02:22:45 PM
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Jo bhi mile hai hume log woh abad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane kis gunaah ki aisi ajeeb saza hoon main..

Tujse milne kay lamhe iss qadar mukhtasir hai kay,
Mano bas tujhe choo kar nikalti fiza hoon main..

Mujhe mangti hai tu mager mujh tak kadam nahin badati,
Kitni meethi mager bahaut hi adhuri dua hoon main..

Kabhi uski bewaffai ko kosna aur kabhi mohobat ki kashish,
Shayad apne hi ehsaason se bahaut anjan hoon main..

Dil wah wah karne laga mere ek ansoo ki baat sunkar,
‘aj kay daur main ‘Khamosh’..sachi mohobat ka anjaam hoon main..’

Tujse dhoor hua toh mushkilein ayi aur yeh jana maine,
Ae Khuda, teri iss duniya main, bas ek maloomi insaan hoon main..

Jo bane humari zindagi ka hissa, abaad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane ki gunaah ki aisi ajeeb si saza hoon main..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 03:37:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Bhaai

aapka andaaj e bayaan sabse judaan hai..dil ko choo jaati hai aapki peshkash..

Dil wah wah karne laga mere ek ansoo ki baat sunkar,
‘aj kay daur main ‘Khamosh’..sachi mohobat ka anjaam hoon main..’ Applause ApplauseApplause Applause

Tujse dhoor hua toh mushkilein ayi aur yeh jana maine,
Ae Khuda, teri iss duniya main, bas ek maloomi insaan hoon main.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jo bane humari zindagi ka hissa, abaad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane ki gunaah ki aisi ajeeb si saza hoon main.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2012, 05:36:42 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 02, 2012, 02:22:45 PM
Jo bhi mile hai hume log woh abad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane kis gunaah ki aisi ajeeb saza hoon main..

Tujse milne kay lamhe iss qadar mukhtasir hai kay,
Mano bas tujhe choo kar nikalti fiza hoon main..

Mujhe mangti hai tu mager mujh tak kadam nahin badati,
Kitni meethi mager bahaut hi adhuri dua hoon main..

Kabhi uski bewaffai ko kosna aur kabhi mohobat ki kashish,
Shayad apne hi ehsaason se bahaut anjan hoon main..

Dil wah wah karne laga mere ek ansoo ki baat sunkar,
‘aj kay daur main ‘Khamosh’..sachi mohobat ka anjaam hoon main..’

Tujse dhoor hua toh mushkilein ayi aur yeh jana maine,
Ae Khuda, teri iss duniya main, bas ek maloomi insaan hoon main..

Jo bane humari zindagi ka hissa, abaad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane ki gunaah ki aisi ajeeb si saza hoon main..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
waaahhhhhhh
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2012, 06:49:07 PM »
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Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2012, 07:00:58 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2012, 07:08:00 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah Rahim bhai.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut din baad aapko padha aur bahut hi achcha laga ... !!!
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Quote from: mkv on April 02, 2012, 03:37:32 PM
Bahut khoob Rahim Bhaai

aapka andaaj e bayaan sabse judaan hai..dil ko choo jaati hai aapki peshkash..

Dil wah wah karne laga mere ek ansoo ki baat sunkar,
‘aj kay daur main ‘Khamosh’..sachi mohobat ka anjaam hoon main..’ Applause ApplauseApplause Applause

Tujse dhoor hua toh mushkilein ayi aur yeh jana maine,
Ae Khuda, teri iss duniya main, bas ek maloomi insaan hoon main.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jo bane humari zindagi ka hissa, abaad hogaye, hum barbaad,
Najane ki gunaah ki aisi ajeeb si saza hoon main.. Applause Applause
Ager mere alfaaz kisi kay dil tak ponchte hai, toh yeh mere liye bahaut zada, khushi ki baat hai..
Apka tahe tahe dil se shukriya MKV jee..
Bas sada, apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: sarfira on April 02, 2012, 05:36:42 PM
waaahhhhhhh
Bahaut shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on April 02, 2012, 06:49:07 PM
Applause Applause
Shukriya shukriya Aatish jee..
Khush rahiye.!
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Shukriya Shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 02, 2012, 07:08:00 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause wah Rahim bhai.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut din baad aapko padha aur bahut hi achcha laga ... !!!
Apka reply dekh, mujhe aur bhi acha laga..
Tahe tahe dil se shukriya Kapil dost..
Sada saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2012, 03:44:10 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2012, 05:56:58 AM »
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awesome.....bahut hi badiya
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bahut khoob
Shukriya Shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2012, 10:40:07 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost Rahim

Khoobsurat Khayalaat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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