INTEZAAR BEKAAR NAHIN HOGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by qalb on October 18, 2013, 07:04:45 PM
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                               mere oosoolo.N  me.N  badlaao aataa hai.
                               rishto.N mein jab-jab  algaao aataa hai.


                               jataa hai surr sijde me.N mera usee waqt.
                               zindagee mein jab kabhee aabhaao aata hai.


                               qadr uss mohabbat kee duniya nahin kartee.
                               jo   hamesha   hee  be-bhaao  aataa   hai.


                               hai anaa  parastee  ka shikaar insaan aaj.
                               kee  isey  baat-baat  per  taao aataa hai.


                               intezaar mein uss sookee nadi ke paas hoon.
                               jaane  kab  uspe  QALB  bahaao  aataa  hai.
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 07:07:58 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 07:18:48 PM »
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vry nice..... aapki shayri ki taraf jhukaao aata hai....  Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 08:28:40 PM »
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bhut khub bhut umada
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 08:52:05 PM »
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Qalb Sahaab Aadaab....!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade khoobsurat khayaalaat ko achchhe ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....

HaaN apne dusre sher meiN "abhaao " kafiyaa istemaal kiya jiske mayne humari samjh meiN nahi aaye... "
Shayad abhaao ke mayne hote hai "kami" lekin aapne jis andaaz meiN istemaal kiya uske mayne meiN kuch badlaao lag raha hai hume...

Khair humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... 
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2013, 10:01:46 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob qalb ji...sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron hazaron daad qubool ho..
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2013, 10:16:04 PM »
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waah bohat khoob ,bohat khoob,..........bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 10:47:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Qalb ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2013, 12:53:43 AM »
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                               mere oosoolo.N  me.N  badlaao aataa hai.
                               rishto.N mein jab-jab  algaao aataa hai.


                               jaata hai surr tab-tab sijde  kee  taraf.
                               zindagee mein jab kabhee abhaao aata hai.


                               qadr uss mohabbat kee duniya nahin kartee.
                               jo   hamesha   hee  be-bhaao  aataa   hai.


                               hai anaa  parastee  ka shikaar insaan aaj.
                               kee  isey  baat-baat  per  taao aataa hai.


                               intezaar mein uss sookee nadi ke paas hoon.
                               jaane  kab  uspe  QALB  bahaao  aataa  hai.

bahut khoob..i loved it
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2013, 01:47:49 AM »
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hai anaa  parastee  ka shikaar insaan aaj.
kee  isey  baat-baat  per  taao aataa hai.
Bahut khoob Qalb jee
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2013, 03:41:57 AM »
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jaata hai surr tab-tab sijde  kee  taraf.
                               zindagee mein jab kabhee abhaao aata hai.


                               qadr uss mohabbat kee duniya nahin kartee.
                               jo   hamesha   hee  be-bhaao  aataa   hai.



Bahut Umda,,,,,,
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2013, 04:02:07 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2013, 09:20:21 AM »
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wah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2013, 01:37:28 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2013, 04:18:31 PM »
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WAAH ! gehree fiqr aur nek naseehat se bhare aashaar par dheron daad Qalb ji
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