Intezar hai mujhe us pal ka...

by brokenbyluv on August 28, 2010, 12:31:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2010, 12:41:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji n kamine ji...
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«Reply #16 on: August 30, 2010, 04:56:06 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 09:27:24 PM
wah ji... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

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thaam lo aake baahen meri,
ye baahen tumhe bulaati hain,
tasveer mere dil me basi hai,
mujhe tumhaare kareeb bataati hain,

saanson ka hi rishta hai tumse,
ye saanse tum bin ruk jaati hain,
dhadkano pe bhi naam hai tumhaara,
har dhadkan mujhse bataati hai,

tanha to tum aaj bhi nahi ho,
meri yaadein saath nibhaati hain,
suni raaton ke andheron me bhi wo,
tumhe meri hi yaad dilaati hain....

Bahut khoob kapil ji...



Ek baar phir se mil unhi sunsan rasto per aur,
de de phir se lamhe vo qaraar k vo pal hamare pyar k,

naa ji paungi hokar main b juda tujhse,
jine de mujhe ae zamane ab tou saay-e-yaar k,

saha nhi jata ye faaslo ka daur mujhse,
bata kab tak sahu main ye lamhe intezaar k,

kasam hai tujhe merri har us wafa ki,
naa todna merre khwab jo hai terre aetbaar k.........
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«Reply #17 on: August 30, 2010, 05:43:56 PM »
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Dil k jajbaaton ko bade sunder shabdo mai sajaaya hai Geet-di.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aa jaayega wo pal bhi meri sakhee
Aa k thaam lega wo tera haath ajnabi

Kar k solah-singaar tu ho ja taiyaar O- sakhee
Bas aa gayee hai nazdeek uske aane ki gadhee



Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 28, 2010, 12:31:21 PM


Jis din tu ayega mujhe sar-e-aam apnane,
us din main khamoshi k dayre ko tod dungi,

faaslo pe rehkar bhi humare jazbaat jude hai mazbut dhage se,
jab hum honge sath tou main apni sanso ki ladiya bhi tujhse jod dungi,

yu tou aaj bhi merre rukh saare terri hi taraf mudte hai,
per tujhe paa k main apni zindgi bhi terri taraf mod dungi,

intezaar hai mujhe us pal ka merre ajnabi..
jab thaam k terra hath main tanhai ka daaman hamesha k liye chhod dungi.........
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«Reply #18 on: August 30, 2010, 05:46:52 PM »
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thnx sweetu..



Kaash sach ye terri baat ho jaye,
usse mulaqat bhari ek raat ho jaye.........
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«Reply #19 on: August 31, 2010, 06:55:30 AM »
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no words geet di....

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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2010, 07:19:18 AM »
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bahuyt baut khoob likha he apne ~~~~~
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2010, 07:37:56 AM »
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Geet-di aksar chhoto ki duaa kabool ho jaati hai....
Meine tou duaa kari hai Saat janm ki...aap ek raat ki baat karte ho....kyu ji
Trial logi kya.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle


Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 30, 2010, 05:46:52 PM
thnx sweetu..



Kaash sach ye terri baat ho jaye,
usse mulaqat bhari ek raat ho jaye.........
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2010, 11:10:48 AM »
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thnx alot dev n abhi ji...
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«Reply #23 on: August 31, 2010, 11:12:07 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 07:37:56 AM
Geet-di aksar chhoto ki duaa kabool ho jaati hai....
Meine tou duaa kari hai Saat janm ki...aap ek raat ki baat karte ho....kyu ji
Trial logi kya.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle



he he he nhi sweety trial nhi lena ek raat kya kisi khaas k sath dobara ek pal hi mil jaye vo hi bahut hai...n thnx alot for ur prayers god bless u....
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«Reply #24 on: September 02, 2010, 02:32:53 AM »
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shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai...
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tere wafaaon ki khaatir hi to ji rahe hain hum,
warna is jism me dard hai jyaada aur saanse hain kum...

aao apne bich ki dooriyon ko mita den hum,
do kadam tum chalo aur do kadam chalen hum,

mile un galiyon me jahaan khai thi kasme,
un saari kasmon ko aao poora karein hum,

aao aaj tod de saari bandishein is zamaane ki,
bhulaake sab ek duje ki panaaho me rahein hum,

sahi nahi jaati ab ye dard-e-judai humse, aa jao,
ek duje me samaake ek duje ko poora karein hum...


Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 30, 2010, 04:56:06 PM
Bahut khoob kapil ji...



Ek baar phir se mil unhi sunsan rasto per aur,
de de phir se lamhe vo qaraar k vo pal hamare pyar k,

naa ji paungi hokar main b juda tujhse,
jine de mujhe ae zamane ab tou saay-e-yaar k,

saha nhi jata ye faaslo ka daur mujhse,
bata kab tak sahu main ye lamhe intezaar k,

kasam hai tujhe merri har us wafa ki,
naa todna merre khwab jo hai terre aetbaar k.........
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«Reply #25 on: September 03, 2010, 10:52:42 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 02, 2010, 02:32:53 AM
shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai...
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tere wafaaon ki khaatir hi to ji rahe hain hum,
warna is jism me dard hai jyaada aur saanse hain kum...

aao apne bich ki dooriyon ko mita den hum,
do kadam tum chalo aur do kadam chalen hum,

mile un galiyon me jahaan khai thi kasme,
un saari kasmon ko aao poora karein hum,

aao aaj tod de saari bandishein is zamaane ki,
bhulaake sab ek duje ki panaaho me rahein hum,

sahi nahi jaati ab ye dard-e-judai humse, aa jao,
ek duje me samaake ek duje ko poora karein hum...


bahut khoob ji...aur shukriya...


Ek din aesa hoga jab hamara jahan hoga,
na koi bandhish hogi bus pyar wahan hoga,

har su bus mhbt hi mhbt nazar ayegi,
hamari nigaho k siwa aesa nazara aur kahan hoga,

jab dekhenge hum neel gagan mein mahtab ko,
tou deparba hogi hamari har hasrat bhi,

na koi darr hoga judai ka dilo mein,
khuda ki rehmat mein hamari qurbat hogi,

ban jayenge hum bhi ek duje k sada k liye,
hamare khwaisho ka nagar na phir viraan hoga,

ek din aesa zarur ayega merre ajnabi..
jab hamari mhbt ka gawah ye asmaan hoga.........
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«Reply #26 on: September 03, 2010, 01:26:35 PM »
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u r welcome Geet ji... aur bahut hi pyaara jawaab likha hai aapne... bahut pyaara...!!!


aaj bhi wo chaaand jab tumko dekhta hoga,
apne aas paas ke sitaaron se kehta hoga,

"dekh ek chaand us zameen par bhi hai",
wo bhi tumhe paane ki hasrat rakhta hoga,

dekh ke wo tumhe yahaan sajte sanwarte,
tumhaari mohabbat ke liye tadasta hoga,

baahon me bharke pyaar karne ke liye,
wahaan uska bhi dil dhadakta hoga,

jaane kitne deewaane aaj bhi marte honge,
jab tumhare kandhe se dupatta sarakta hoga,

dur nahi wo din jab hum kareeb honge, shayad
us din ke liye tumhara bhi dil tadapta hoga....
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«Reply #27 on: September 07, 2010, 05:55:43 PM »
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shurkiya ji..aur bahut khoob jawab diya hai...


Merri jo bhi adaye hai sab terre hi liye hai,
inhi adao k sadke tune kayi waade mujhse kiye hai,

pehle koi aks naa milta tha merre wajud ka,
per terri ik nazar ne mujhe naam kayi diye hai,

jeeti aayi hu humsafar k rehte bhi tanha zindgi ko,
terre haasil se pehle khud hi maine bahut se zakham siye hai,

kisi cheez ki ab tou koi khabar nhi mujhe..malum hai tou bus itna..
ki jab se terri ankho mein hu maine zindgi k bahut se lamhe jiye hai.........
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«Reply #28 on: September 08, 2010, 12:51:03 PM »
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aapki ye waali post bahut bahut pyaari hai... ek dum touching touching type ka... bahut achcha laga ... shayad is thread ki best.. bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... bahut achcha laga padhke...

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dekho ek nazar meri aankhon me chahat paoge tum,
dunga itna pyaar ki har dard ko bhool jaoge tum,

bhulaake ateet ko jab meri baahon me aaoge tum,
mere mohabbat ki bhini mehek se mehek jaoge tum,

kab tak apne dil ko kuch is tarha samjhaaoge tum,
mujh jaisa paagal aashiq is jahaan me na paoge tum,

paake meri mohabbat ek baar fir se khil jaoge tum,
mujhse juda hoke tab ek pal bhi na reh paoge tum,

aajao yun kab tak is deewaane ko aur tadpaoge tum,
aankhen bichaaye baitha hoon jaane kab aaoge tum...
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«Reply #29 on: September 08, 2010, 12:57:42 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 07, 2010, 05:55:43 PM
shurkiya ji..aur bahut khoob jawab diya hai...


Merri jo bhi adaye hai sab terre hi liye hai,
inhi adao k sadke tune kayi waade mujhse kiye hai,

pehle koi aks naa milta tha merre wajud ka,
per terri ik nazar ne mujhe naam kayi diye hai,

jeeti aayi hu humsafar k rehte bhi tanha zindgi ko,
terre haasil se pehle khud hi maine bahut se zakham siye hai,

kisi cheez ki ab tou koi khabar nhi mujhe..malum hai tou bus itna..
ki jab se terri ankho mein hu maine zindgi k bahut se lamhe jiye hai.........




laaajawab geet ji...sahi ka kapil bht hi behtareen likha hai ye geet ji ne
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