Intezar hai mujhe us pal ka...

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«Reply #30 on: September 08, 2010, 12:58:53 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 02, 2010, 02:32:53 AM
shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai...
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tere wafaaon ki khaatir hi to ji rahe hain hum,
warna is jism me dard hai jyaada aur saanse hain kum...

aao apne bich ki dooriyon ko mita den hum,
do kadam tum chalo aur do kadam chalen hum,

mile un galiyon me jahaan khai thi kasme,
un saari kasmon ko aao poora karein hum,

aao aaj tod de saari bandishein is zamaane ki,
bhulaake sab ek duje ki panaaho me rahein hum,

sahi nahi jaati ab ye dard-e-judai humse, aa jao,
ek duje me samaake ek duje ko poora karein hum...



excellent reply from u kapil ji......
bht hi umda peshakash rahi ye aapki...
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«Reply #31 on: September 08, 2010, 01:05:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 08, 2010, 12:58:53 PM
excellent reply from u kapil ji......
bht hi umda peshakash rahi ye aapki...
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«Reply #32 on: September 09, 2010, 07:49:19 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 08, 2010, 12:57:42 PM
laaajawab geet ji...sahi ka kapil bht hi behtareen likha hai ye geet ji ne

bahut bahut shurkiya kasak ji.......
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«Reply #33 on: September 09, 2010, 08:00:45 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 08, 2010, 12:51:03 PM
aapki ye waali post bahut bahut pyaari hai... ek dum touching touching type ka... bahut achcha laga ... shayad is thread ki best.. bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... bahut achcha laga padhke...

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dekho ek nazar meri aankhon me chahat paoge tum,
dunga itna pyaar ki har dard ko bhool jaoge tum,

bhulaake ateet ko jab meri baahon me aaoge tum,
mere mohabbat ki bhini mehek se mehek jaoge tum,

kab tak apne dil ko kuch is tarha samjhaaoge tum,
mujh jaisa paagal aashiq is jahaan me na paoge tum,

paake meri mohabbat ek baar fir se khil jaoge tum,
mujhse juda hoke tab ek pal bhi na reh paoge tum,

aajao yun kab tak is deewaane ko aur tadpaoge tum,
aankhen bichaaye baitha hoon jaane kab aaoge tum...

Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji mujhe behad khushi hai ki apko merri kavita pasand aayi aapne bhi behetareen tarike se jawab diya hai...


Do jism ek jaan ban gye hai hum,
ek duje ka anjaam ban gye hai hum,

kabhi tumhare tou kabhi merre hotho se nikla,
mhbt ka paigham ban gye hai hum,

pehle katrate the ek duje ko apnane se,
ab tou humsafar sar-e-aam ban gye hai hum,

jo ehsas hamein jode rakhta hai har ghadi,
usi ehsas ka haseen sa naam ban gye hai hum,

yu tou sukoon nhi rehta pal bhar ko bhi,
kuch is kadar nigaho ka araam ban gye hai hum,

Do jism ek jaan ban gye hai hum,
ek duje ka anjaam ban gye hai hum.........
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«Reply #34 on: September 12, 2010, 07:22:38 PM »
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U are welcome Geet ji.. aur aapne is thread ko apni ek aur khoobsurat kavita se saja diya hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... maafi chahunga deri se jawaab dene k liye... darasal kuch uljha rehta hoon kaam me to dhang se waqt pe jawaab nahi de paataa....

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tumhe yaadon me basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,
kuch is tarha pyaar karne ki hamaari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khikhilaate the,
ab tumhe yaad kar muskuraane ki aadat si ho gai hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,
ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,
ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhaari chahat meri ibadat si ho gayi hai,
ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #35 on: September 14, 2010, 08:09:37 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 12, 2010, 07:22:38 PM
U are welcome Geet ji.. aur aapne is thread ko apni ek aur khoobsurat kavita se saja diya hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... maafi chahunga deri se jawaab dene k liye... darasal kuch uljha rehta hoon kaam me to dhang se waqt pe jawaab nahi de paataa....

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tumhe yaadon me basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,
kuch is tarha pyaar karne ki hamaari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khikhilaate the,
ab tumhe yaad kar muskuraane ki aadat si ho gai hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,
ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,
ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhaari chahat meri ibadat si ho gayi hai,
ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...

Waah ji waah bahut khoob likha hai ji...aur shukriya merri peshakash pasand karne k liye...


Ishq ka aesa sailaab maine pehle na dekha tha,
kisi ki baate mein pyar behisab pehle na dekha tha,

jo kar de ik hi nazar mein diwana,
chaht ka aesa aftab pehle na dekha tha,

sawan mein bhi jo jagmata rehta hai,
jazbaato ka aesa maahtab pehle na dekha tha,

mhbto ka sheher mein yu tou chain kisi ko nhi milta..per..
kisiki arzu mein merra har pal betaab pehle na dekha tha.........
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«Reply #36 on: September 15, 2010, 02:59:55 PM »
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bohat khoob mehfil sajaayi hai aapne Geet ji aur Kapil ji
equally well written by both of u...
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«Reply #37 on: September 16, 2010, 03:42:49 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kashish ji....
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«Reply #38 on: September 18, 2010, 09:28:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kashish ji jo aapne hamari rachnaon ko padha aur pasand kiya... main tahe dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon...!!!

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bohat khoob mehfil sajaayi hai aapne Geet ji aur Kapil ji
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«Reply #39 on: September 18, 2010, 09:30:23 PM »
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aapka to har jawaab ji lajawaab hota hai Geet ji.... bahut khoob....!!!  Applause Applause Applause


jo na dekha kabhi har wo cheez ab tum dekhoge,
deewano se badh ke mera pyaar ab tum dekhoge,

khudko mere liye karte sringaar ab tum dekhoge,
tanhaai me muskuraate khudko har baar ab tum dekhoge,

meri har baat pe khudko karte  iqraar ab tum dekhoge,
baagon me ab firse bahaar ab tum dekhoge,

har aetbaar se badhke mera aetbaar ab tum dekhoge,
paagalpan meri aankhon me har baar ab tum dekhoge,

jo na dekha kabhi tumne aisi har baat ab tum dekhoge,
tumhaare liye mera hai pyaar beshumaar ab tum dekhoge....



Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 14, 2010, 08:09:37 PM
Waah ji waah bahut khoob likha hai ji...aur shukriya merri peshakash pasand karne k liye...


Ishq ka aesa sailaab maine pehle na dekha tha,
kisi ki baate mein pyar behisab pehle na dekha tha,

jo kar de ik hi nazar mein diwana,
chaht ka aesa aftab pehle na dekha tha,

sawan mein bhi jo jagmata rehta hai,
jazbaato ka aesa maahtab pehle na dekha tha,

mhbto ka sheher mein yu tou chain kisi ko nhi milta..per..
kisiki arzu mein merra har pal betaab pehle na dekha tha.........
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«Reply #40 on: September 21, 2010, 05:55:28 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 18, 2010, 09:30:23 PM
aapka to har jawaab ji lajawaab hota hai Geet ji.... bahut khoob....!!!  Applause Applause Applause


jo na dekha kabhi har wo cheez ab tum dekhoge,
deewano se badh ke mera pyaar ab tum dekhoge,

khudko mere liye karte sringaar ab tum dekhoge,
tanhaai me muskuraate khudko har baar ab tum dekhoge,

meri har baat pe khudko karte  iqraar ab tum dekhoge,
baagon me ab firse bahaar ab tum dekhoge,

har aetbaar se badhke mera aetbaar ab tum dekhoge,
paagalpan meri aankhon me har baar ab tum dekhoge,

jo na dekha kabhi tumne aisi har baat ab tum dekhoge,
tumhaare liye mera hai pyaar beshumaar ab tum dekhoge....





Shukriya kapil ji aur bahut khoob reply kia hai ji...


Dekhna chahti hu terre ishq ki hadh ko,
dekhna chahti hu terri chahto ki sarhadh ko,

yu tou tu keh jata hai bahut si baate mujhse,
kya keh payega yahi baate tu sabse,

mhbt mein kiye wade yu hi nhi hote hai,
wade nibhane k liye ashiq apna sab kuch khote hai,

is rishte k bahar aur koi jahan nhi hota,
merre dost ye rishta nibhana asan nhi hota,

soch le tu ik baar is aag mein jalne se pehle..
dekh le tu seh sakega har zakham ko kanto per chalne se pehle.........
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«Reply #41 on: September 22, 2010, 10:09:38 PM »
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shukriya Geet ji.. aur aapne bhi mast jawaab diya hai warning dete huye... chalo ji warning se nahi darte... khatre accepted...

tujhe chaahne se pehle kuch socha nahi tha maine,
mohabbat karne se pehle kuch samjha nahi tha maine,

ab jab kar hi chuke hain waadaa kaanton pe chalne ka,
hadd se guzar jaane ki dil me thaan li hai maine,

ye na sochna kabhi tu ki ye waade mere khokhle hain,
waqt aane pe jaan tak dene ki kasam khai hai maine,

tune aashiq dekhe honge jo waade karte hain dil rakhne k liye,
par main waisa nahi, khud se jyaada tujhe chaaha hai maine,

ab kya kaanta, kya aag, kya hai sholon pe chalna,
teri mohabbat me ab kuch bhi kar jaane ki thaan li hai maine...
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«Reply #42 on: September 22, 2010, 11:38:53 PM »
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Wow bahut khoob Geet ji and Kapil ji.very touching and great creation.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #43 on: September 23, 2010, 12:50:02 AM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Madhu ji... bahut bahut shukriya....!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 22, 2010, 11:38:53 PM
Wow bahut khoob Geet ji and Kapil ji.very touching and great creation.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #44 on: September 28, 2010, 09:14:13 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Geet ji and Kapil ji.very touching and great creation.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya madhu ji...
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