Intzaar!!!!!

by Pooja on June 15, 2006, 08:20:54 PM
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javedarshad
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«Reply #45 on: December 19, 2006, 04:09:11 AM »
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Hi Puja

Aap ki kavita padhi achchi lagi

pahla sher achcha thaa phir waise hi quin nahin likha, aap achcha likhti hain zara mehnat aur sahi
AAP KE SHER LIKhAIN HAIN AGAR AISE PADHAIN TO KAISA  LAGE GA THEEM AAP KI HAI WIASE HI KIA

ASHK APNOON KE SAMNE HI BAHAI JATE HAIN
ASHK AAP KE BUS HAMAIN TADPAYE JATE HAIN(hamko rulaye)
                           
AANSOO JIS PAL TERI AANKHOON MAIN AATE HAIN
BUS QAHER HI QAHER MUJH PE DHAYE JATE HAIN

GIREGA TERA AANSOO PER ANKH NAM MERI HOGI
TERI SISKI TERI AAH MERA DIL DUBOYE JATEHAIN

Agar achcha lage too phir sweekar karain
warna is na cheez ki khata ko maaf karain
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Pooja
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«Reply #46 on: December 21, 2006, 07:30:51 AM »
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bahoot khoob Javed ji...
Thanks ! aggy se koshish hogi ki aor achi tarah se likh saku,....
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Tosha
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«Reply #47 on: December 21, 2006, 09:50:24 AM »
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wah bahut khoob likha hai sabhi ne
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Pooja
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«Reply #48 on: December 22, 2006, 05:12:57 AM »
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thanks Tosha..

Intzar-e-raah mai,
umeend na ab koi rahi
kon si hai baat, tu hi bata
jo maine tere payaar mai nahi sahi
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #49 on: March 21, 2007, 06:16:27 AM »
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Intezar ki raah mein umeed-e-chirag ho tum
meri zindagi ke safar ki har nayi raah ho tum
teri muskaan se milti hai iss dil ko ab dhadkan
na bhool paun jisse,ban gaye woh khawab ho tum....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #50 on: March 21, 2007, 11:26:59 AM »
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Superb Pooja Di...
Well done by every body
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Pooja
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«Reply #51 on: March 22, 2007, 05:12:23 PM »
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shukariya Divya
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: March 28, 2007, 01:17:52 PM »
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Quote from: "(((JEET)))"
Intezar ki raah mein umeed-e-chirag ho tum
meri zindagi ke safar ki har nayi raah ho tum
teri muskaan se milti hai iss dil ko ab dhadkan
na bhool paun jisse,ban gaye woh khawab ho tum....



Kar intzaar, her ek khawab poora hoga
Dhadkano main mil jayegi muskaan
Tere –mere ek hi Humsafar, rasta hoga
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Talat
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«Reply #53 on: March 28, 2007, 01:57:31 PM »
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Kya baat hai Pooja Ji and Jeet...bohot khoobsurat samaan baandha hai...full of feelings Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: April 01, 2007, 09:56:24 PM »
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Shukaria Talat ji
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #55 on: April 02, 2007, 05:11:50 AM »
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Thanks Divya n Talat ... !!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #56 on: April 02, 2007, 05:12:26 AM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "(((JEET)))"
Intezar ki raah mein umeed-e-chirag ho tum
meri zindagi ke safar ki har nayi raah ho tum
teri muskaan se milti hai iss dil ko ab dhadkan
na bhool paun jisse,ban gaye woh khawab ho tum....



Kar intzaar, her ek khawab poora hoga
Dhadkano main mil jayegi muskaan
Tere –mere ek hi Humsafar, rasta hoga


un pag-daandioN ke raaste kuch kharab hain
chalte rehna sath sath,tabhi sab kuch asan hai
kabhi na kabhi judai ki Raat ke baad ,milan ka savera hoga
uss pal ke liye hi,mere dilbar, iss dhadkan mein aagaaz hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #57 on: April 25, 2007, 01:20:09 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob naya_daur ji!!
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-Sagar-
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«Reply #58 on: May 31, 2007, 03:08:55 AM »
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Intezar karwana unki adat rahi hai
Intezar hi humari taqdeer bani hai
khuda jane kya hoga iss dastaan ka
pehle zindagi,abb maut bhi Intezar bani hai...!!!
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