IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

by salil2002 on November 26, 2006, 06:13:10 PM

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salil2002

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ghame jindgi ne di hai jeene ki hasrat mujhe


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2006, 06:16:06 PM »

pata nahi :D


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salil2002

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try u can after all u r a senior member

«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 06:20:36 PM »

mehfilo main bhi chahiye tanhaiyan mujhe

try u can


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2006, 06:24:19 PM »

muskan mein bhi dekhe hain ansu mujhe
chahatoon ke raste bhi khat jayein yuhn haste haste


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2006, 06:25:59 PM »

now find the last line........
i dont know the resttt :D


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salil2002

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nice try

«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2006, 06:28:10 PM »

khat main likhi thi aansuon ki ibarat
woh apni aankhon se pada gaya mujhe

ur turn


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2006, 06:30:25 PM »

inh ankhoin mein dekha gaya naye sapne mujhe
jab se dekha hai ussi ki ibaadat ki hai maine, abbh dekhta nahi koyi aur mujhe :D


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salil2002

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2006, 06:34:19 PM »

sapno main bhi dikha ek aadhoorapan
woh shayad dooriyon ka ehsaas kara gaya mujhe


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2006, 06:36:38 PM »

wow....ur lines r very beautiful,,,,appko humari kya zaroorat!! :D:D:D

apna banake chor gaya beech raha mein mujhe
apni bewafai ka nishan degegya mujhe :D


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salil2002

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khud nahi kar sakta.......................

«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2006, 06:49:53 PM »

maine koshish toh ki oose bhulaane ki
par yaad karne ki ek wajah de gaya mujhe
dard main to hum ji lete e dost.
tohfe main hansi woh de gaya mujhe


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anjani_si

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2006, 06:51:49 PM »

toooo good!!!!!!!!!!!

iska jawab nahi hai humare paas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://www.yoindia.com/forums/1-vt21201.html?start=0


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angel4u

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IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2006, 06:52:47 PM »

Apna kehke begana kiya usne mujhe,
jiska naam hamari pehchan thi, wo mehfil mein keh gaya anjaan mujhe...


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Talat

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Re: IS KO POORA KARIYE YE LINE BAHUT PYAARI HAI

«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2006, 07:04:48 PM »

Quote from: "salil2002"

ghame jindgi ne di hai jeene ki hasrat mujhe

This first line is very beautiful indeed......

Ghum-e-zindagi ne di hai jeene ki hasrat mujhe
Andhere main zindagi ke roz suraj doobta hai, ugta hai !!

I am moving it to the Section of Miscellaneous section !!