is shor o gul ke piche,,,,,,jeet jainam

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amit sir ji kuch aage bhadaye shayri ko,

khushi milti hai ager tughko mughe barbaad karke,
to beshak hamara gher jala dijiyega,

is shor o gul ke piche jo sannaata hai,
woh is nadaan e dil main basa dijiyega,

jab kabhi khuwabo ka phool murghaye,
bedhadak apne dil ke zajbaat keh dijiyega,

khub lutf uthaya hai tumne mohhobat ka,
usko bhi jeene ki koi wajaah dijiyega,

kar to diya hai barbaad tumne zalim,
in aankho se thoda paimana chalka dijiyega,

karke madhosh usko is kader,
apni baanho ke haar pehna dijiyega,

karlena wadde pyaar ke sare,
bewaffai ki usko gunjaish na dijiyega,





                             jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2014, 02:20:51 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on March 08, 2014, 01:50:32 AM
amit sir ji kuch aage bhadaye shayri ko,

khushi milti hai ager tughko mughe barbaad karke,
to beshak hamara gher jala dijiyega,

is shor e gul ke piche jo sannaata hai,
woh is nadaan e dil main basa dijiyega,

jab kabhi khuwabo ka phool murghaye,
bedhadak apne dil ke zajbaat keh dijiyega,

khub lutf uthaya hai tumne mohhobat ka,
usko bhi jeene ki koi wajaah dijiyega,

kar to diya hai barbaad tumne zalim,
in aankho se thoda paimana chalka dijiyega,

karke madhosh usko is kader,
apni baanho ke haar pehna dijiyega,

karlena wadde paar ke sare,
bewaffai ki usko gunjaish na dijiyega,





                              jj saini
So nice Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2014, 05:20:49 AM »
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Wah Wah Jeet Sahib, Bahut Khoob.

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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2014, 07:44:32 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2014, 12:34:26 PM »
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Waah Jeet bhai Usual Smile
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Waaaaaaaah jeet ji... behad khooooooob... dheron dheron daaaaaaaad...
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Waah !
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bahut khoob jeet ji
likhte rahiye ......
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2014, 04:57:31 PM »
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bahut khoob
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सबसे पहले तो आपने जो मुझे इज्ज़त बक्शी है उसके लिये बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया.....

आपने बहुत खूब कहा है..... और जैसा की आपने गुज़ारिश की है तो मैं भी कुछ जोड़ रहा हूँ...गौर तलब हूँ....

कभी कोई शर्त वैसे तो होती नहीं प्यार में
एहसास उनको भी इसका   करा दीजियेगा

जो लिखे थे ख़त कभी न बन जायें सनद
पहली फुरसत में ही उनको जला दीजियेगा

....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"
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