is shor o gul ke piche,,,,,,jeet jainam

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«Reply #15 on: March 08, 2014, 11:40:14 PM »
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thanku akash bro
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«Reply #16 on: March 08, 2014, 11:45:45 PM »
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shukriya aqsh ji
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«Reply #17 on: March 08, 2014, 11:46:34 PM »
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shukriya zaif sir ji
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«Reply #18 on: March 08, 2014, 11:48:26 PM »
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shukriya suresh sir ji
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shukriya nandbahu sir ji
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«Reply #20 on: March 08, 2014, 11:50:28 PM »
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bhai aapse pehli dafaa mukhatib hun to muafi chaahuNga...

ehsashaat purzor hain par bayaangi aur kasi hui ho sakti hai meri darkhwast hai ki aage se aap kosish karen ki saari panktiyaaN ek kaavish ki lagbhag samaan ho, isse flow milega... baaNki aapke paas ehsaash to purzor hain hiN, aur ek baat iska naam "Is shor-o-gul ke peeche" hoga... shayad galti se shor-e-gul ho gaya hai... Agar meri koi baat galata lage to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga, naadaaN samaj ke muaaf kar dijiyegaa... Aur yuNhi mashq zaari rakheN umeed hai aage aapki kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko mileNge...
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«Reply #21 on: March 08, 2014, 11:59:24 PM »
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सबसे पहले तो आपने जो मुझे इज्ज़त बक्शी है उसके लिये बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया.....

आपने बहुत खूब कहा है..... और जैसा की आपने गुज़ारिश की है तो मैं भी कुछ जोड़ रहा हूँ...गौर तलब हूँ....



apne se bado ka maan seer mathe rakhta hu,,,,,ap sab ka aashirwaad raha to may hi ap sab ki tareh apne mukaam tak pahuch jaunga,,,,

कभी कोई शर्त वैसे तो होती नहीं प्यार में
एहसास उनको भी इसका   करा दीजियेगा

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पहली फुरसत में ही उनको जला दीजियेगा

bohut bohut shukriya apka sir ji,,may bhi kuch arz karu sir ji

paau eysa mukaam,
jaha ho jeet ka naam,
eysa aashirwaad dijiyega,
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«Reply #22 on: March 09, 2014, 12:07:40 AM »
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wlcm Taish sir ji apki baat seraankho par ,,,asal main main urdu nhi janta isliye galti ho jati hai,,,,,,dhire dhire sikh raha hu urdu or puri tareh mehsoos bhi kar raha hu,,,,jal hi ap sab ki nazaro main khara utrunga  Usual Smile shukriya ap hamari post par aaye,,,vase may qalb sir ji ko bohut manta hu woh bhi mughe samghe hai kayi baar ager main galti karu to,,unki baat par amal bhi karta hu aage se apki baato ka khasa dhiyan rakhunga
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