Ishq ek aag ka dariya........soudagar

by soudagar on July 28, 2012, 01:54:19 PM
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Ishq jisko ek dariya aag kaa  maana gayaa
phir usi dehkati dagar par ek deewanaa gayaa

shama ko akeli jalti dekh nahi raha bass mein
akeli kyun jale shama sang jalne parwanaa gayaa

 deewano ki badi bheed lagi thi maikhane mein
teri bewafai se nikla ek aur deewana pehchana gayaa

teri bewafai ke charche ab to aam ho gaye hain
bewafai ki murat ke roop mein tujhe jaana gaya

husn makhmali hai dil pathar ka hai teraa
tujhse kabhi kisii ka dard kab jaana  gayaa

dosti ya dushmani mujhse nibhi jo nibh gayii
tujhse rishto ka magar kab fark pehchana gayaa
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 02:15:11 PM »
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Bahoot khoobsurat kalaam hai.
Aapne jis khoobsoortee se apne jajabat pesh kiye hai wo kabil ae tareef hai.
Es kalaam par mubarakbaad kabool keejeeye.
Or ha main batana bhool gaya.
Second last line main aapne mujhse kee jagah mujhw sayad aesa kuch likhaa huaa use theek kar le.
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 03:54:24 PM »
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2nd sher bahut umda..
vaah vaah saudagar jee..
khoob likhte hai aap..Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 04:11:27 PM »
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Saudagar Tum dil ko achhe lagte ho,
Mann ke bhole aur zuba ke sachhe lagte ho,
Jo bhi likha hai dil se likha hai...
Aap apne wadon ke pakke lagte ho.
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 04:36:28 PM »
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waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 07:07:44 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 28, 2012, 01:54:19 PM
Ishq jisko ek dariya aag kaa  maana gayaa
phir usi dehkati dagar par ek deewanaa gayaa

shama ko akeli jalti dekh nahi raha bass mein
akeli kyun jale shama sang jalne parwanaa gayaa

 deewano ki badi bheed lagi thi maikhane mein
teri bewafai se nikla ek aur deewana pehchana gayaa

teri bewafai ke charche ab to aam ho gaye hain
bewafai ki murat ke roop mein tujhe jaana gaya

husn makhmali hai dil pathar ka hai teraa
tujhse kabhi kisii ka dard kab jaana  gayaa

dosti ya dushmani mujhse nibhi jo nibh gayii
tujhse rishto ka magar kab fark pehchana gayaa

gud
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 02:53:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya masoom sehzada ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 09:43:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2012, 11:10:10 AM »
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Bahut khoob saudagarji
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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2012, 12:46:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya savan ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 08:56:24 AM »
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bahut bhut shukriya sain iji
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2012, 05:03:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khamosh aawaz ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2012, 01:52:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2012, 02:17:24 AM »
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Good Soudagar Ji
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bahut bahut shukriya sir
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