ISPAT HUN ISPAT HUN MAIN JAAN LO ISPAT HUN - SARVESH RASTOGI

by SARVESH RASTOGI on May 04, 2009, 01:20:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 12:02:11 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 04, 2009, 01:20:51 AM
Dosto Steel (ISPAT) ek basic material hai jiske bina sabhyata nahin panap sakti.   Loha taqat ka ek roop hai.  Loha lena, lohe ke chane chabana aadi muhabare bhi chalan me hain.  Isi Lohe aur Ispat per main apni ye khubsurat kavita pesh kar raha hun.  Is kavita ki lambai ko dekhte hue ise do part me post karunga.  Is kavita me ISPAT apne source, condition, process, history, use/misuse, science aur mythology ke adhaar per apna parichay khud de raha hai.  Dosto, aapke comments ka intazar rahega:


PART-I

MAIN SABHYATA KA CHINH HUN MAIN PRAGATI KA AADHAR HUN
MAIN SHANTI KI AWAZ HUN MAIN KRANTI KA HATHIYAR HUN
SAUHARD ME MAIN MITRA HUN VAISHAMYA ME UTPAAT HUN
ISPAT HUN ISPAT HUN MAIN JAAN LO ISPAT HUN

BHUGARBH MERA SHROT MERA AADI LAUH AYASK HAI
MANAV YUGON SE AAJ TAK MERE KHANAN ME VYAST HAI
KAISE AYASK SWAROOP SE YEH ROOP HAI MUJHKO MILA
HAI ATI KATHIN NIRMAN SHODH VIKAS KA YEH SILSILA
IS KARYA ME HAI GARV MUJHKO AGRANI BHARAT RAHA
DELHI KA LAUH STAMBH HAI ISKI GAWAHI DE RAHA

SANYANTRA ME LA PRATHAM LAUH AYASK KO KOOTA GAYA
PHIR KOYALE KE SAATH BHATTI ME USE THOOSA GAYA
BHISHAN TAPISH KE BAAD PHIR DRAV ROOP ME MAIN BAH CHALA
UNNAT BAHUT HAI AAJ MUJHKO SHUDDHA KARNE KI KALA
TAP AGNI ME SONA CHAMAKATA YEH PURANI BAAT HAI
JO AAG ME JAL KAR NIKHARTA AAJ WHO ISPAT HAI


                              to be continued in Part-II
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 04:16:18 PM »
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Shukriya Salma Ji
Poetry ke achchhe jaankaar aur kadradan jab tarif karen to bada satisfaction hota hai, encouragement milta hai.  Thanks for your kadradani. 
Is poem ka part-2 bhi post kar chuka hun jo aapko isase bhi jyada pasand aayega.  Kindly post your comments.
All the Best
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2009, 04:18:50 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2009, 04:23:04 PM »
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Excellent poetry  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2009, 04:26:43 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... kavita likhne ka najaria hi ajj apne to mera change kar diya... wow too good... kis tarah se steel ko asal roop main apne kavita main ubhatra hai... kabil-e-tareef hai!!! bahoot khoob SARVESH RASTOGI ji!!
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2009, 05:31:23 PM »
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ISPAT HUN - PART-2 per bhi krapaya tavajjo den, Part-2 aapko aur bhi jyada pasand aayega.
Thank you very much
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2009, 05:48:37 PM »
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jitani tareef ki jaaye utani kam hai... wah kay abaat hai.. bahoot khoob.. shabdo ka jaadu isse kahte hai... kamaal ka likha hai apne Rastogi ji..
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2009, 10:13:24 AM »
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too good Sarvesh ji
soch rahi thi ki pehle part ko accha kahoon ya phir doosre ko...
lekin yakeen maaniye mujhe dono hi bahut pasand aaye...
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2009, 10:55:52 AM »
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«Reply #24 on: May 07, 2009, 11:53:06 AM »
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Shukriya Pooja Ji
Aapne jitni dil se tarif ki, mera bhi man gadgad ho gaya
Thank you sooooooo much
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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2009, 01:44:27 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 06, 2009, 10:13:24 AM
too good Sarvesh ji
soch rahi thi ki pehle part ko accha kahoon ya phir doosre ko...
lekin yakeen maaniye mujhe dono hi bahut pasand aaye...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Diya Ji
Bahut bahut Meharbani
Aapki taalian mere liye booster dose hai, inam hai, khurak hai.
So kind of you
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2009, 04:23:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji
Aapne tarif ki, shayar ko khurak mil gai, mehnat safal ho gai
Itni saari tarif ka kaise shukriya ata karun
THANK YOU SO NICE POOJA JI
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«Reply #27 on: May 10, 2009, 02:53:07 PM »
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Dear Friends
Is poem ke dono part merge karke ab poori poem Page-1 per post kar di hai. 
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«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2010, 01:49:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya dosto
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«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2010, 01:57:30 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi khooob sarvesh ji .... aap ki sab poems lajawaab hoti hai ... yeh bhi ek unmey sey hi hai .... tooo good sir .....


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