ISS DAUR KA INSAAN ................................. HASAN

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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2013, 05:21:13 PM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden


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Bahut bahut Khooooob Saheb..Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2013, 05:29:33 PM »
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Bahut Khoob,Ek-Ek Alfaj Dilko chool Le Raha Hai.
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 06:04:19 PM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden


merely excelllllllentttt,sir accept one rau
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Bahut bahut umda peshkash hai siddiqui jee..bahut pasand ayi..dheron daad hamari taraf se..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 06:10:09 PM »
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waah waah behad khoobsoorat kalaam se nawaazaa hai bhai jaan mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2013, 06:12:18 PM »
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Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha

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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 06:36:30 PM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden

Wah,Wah,Wah Hasan Sir,
Kamaal kar diya aapne.Bilkul mukammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.Such me,dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye ghazal.Khass taur per ye sher bahut hi umdaa laga-
Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha

Meri dili mubaraqbaad kabool kijiyega.
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 06:43:01 PM »
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Aadaab Sir

NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha

ye sher sabse accha laga..
aur padhte samay..kuch ek alfaz ne..aapki kuch purani ghazlon ki yaad bhi dila dee.


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hasan ji aap jo bhi likhte hai use padhkar ek alag hi khushi hasil hoti hai. har baar ki tarah is baar bhi kai baar ise padhi hoon mai. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal. hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega.
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2013, 12:18:15 AM »
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bohat bohat bohat achee ghazal hai hasan ji,...............bohat bohat bohat c daad,........
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waah waah waah Hasan saheb, kya khoob ghazal kahi hai, bahut umda. Akhiri donoN sher to kamaal ke rahe.
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2013, 02:43:48 PM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khoooooooob.....
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2013, 05:50:14 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khooooob Saheb..Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab
Khwahish ji, bahut shukrguzar hoon
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