ISS DAUR KA INSAAN ................................. HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: June 12, 2013, 10:03:20 PM »
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Bahut Khoob,Ek-Ek Alfaj Dilko chool Le Raha Hai.
BAHUT SHUKRIYA , RAVINDER JI.
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«Reply #16 on: June 12, 2013, 11:46:35 PM »
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shukriya , MB saheb

merely excelllllllentttt,sir accept one rau
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«Reply #17 on: June 13, 2013, 11:20:14 AM »
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Bahut bahut umda peshkash hai siddiqui jee..bahut pasand ayi..dheron daad hamari taraf se..happy9
Housla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya , nashwani ji.khush rahye.
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«Reply #18 on: June 13, 2013, 11:45:04 AM »
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Is laajawaab aur bemisaal qalaam par apko bahaut bahaut mubarakbaad Hassan sahab
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2013, 01:49:35 PM »
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HOUSLA AFZAI KE LIYE SHUKRIYA, SAINI SAHEB
waah waah behad khoobsoorat kalaam se nawaazaa hai bhai jaan mubarak ho
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«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2013, 02:09:36 PM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden


wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob!!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2013, 04:45:47 PM »
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Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha

waah waah bohut khoob hasan sahab.
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Bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzai ke lliye . Shaad o aabaad rahye.
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«Reply #22 on: June 13, 2013, 07:06:07 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Hasan Sir,
Kamaal kar diya aapne.Bilkul mukammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.Such me,dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye ghazal.Khass taur per ye sher bahut hi umdaa laga-
Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha

Meri dili mubaraqbaad kabool kijiyega.
AAP KO GHAZAL PASAND AAYI. BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA , SUDHIR JI . DUAAEIN.
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«Reply #23 on: June 14, 2013, 12:00:50 AM »
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Aadaab Sir

NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha

ye sher sabse accha laga..
aur padhte samay..kuch ek alfaz ne..aapki kuch purani ghazlon ki yaad bhi dila dee.



Mukesh ji, aapke khuloo ke liye tah e dil se mshkoor hoon. Khuda aaapko khush rakhe . Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #24 on: June 14, 2013, 02:14:29 AM »
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hasan ji aap jo bhi likhte hai use padhkar ek alag hi khushi hasil hoti hai. har baar ki tarah is baar bhi kai baar ise padhi hoon mai. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal. hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega.
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AQSH , AAP KE PURKHULOOS TABSIRE KE LIYE TAH E DIL SE MAMNOON HOON . KHUDA AAP KO KHUSH RAKHE.
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«Reply #25 on: June 14, 2013, 04:31:33 AM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha
haan qayaamat ke nazdeek, allah aur bhi bahut raaz khole ga
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Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha
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Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha
tumhara kya kisi ka bhi haath nahin pahuch sakta . haan main bus itna chahti hoon ki chhoti chhoti kushiya.n hi baanto jo mayyasar hai apne istadaad ke mutaabiq bus main khush rahoon gi chaan taaro.n ki tawaqqo nahin rakhti icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha
maarne waale se bachaane wala badha hota hai .
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NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha

waise bhi aaj kal ke doctors padhaai bhi ache tareeqe se nahin karte aur medical science mein to mohabbat ke mareez ka koi bhi ilaaj hi nahin nikla aaj tak
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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden


bahut khoob fazal sahab........!
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«Reply #26 on: June 14, 2013, 12:24:34 PM »
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«Reply #27 on: June 15, 2013, 12:00:57 AM »
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bohat bohat bohat achee ghazal hai hasan ji,...............bohat bohat bohat c daad,........
shukriya aur duaaein,laaiba sahiba
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«Reply #28 on: June 15, 2013, 12:14:26 AM »
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Iss   daur   ka  insaan   kahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha  ,
Bus  Asliyat - e - Kaun - o - MakaaN  tak  nahiN  pahuncha


Mahdood   mile   M'aani   hi   Alfaaz - e - Lughat   kay  ,
Khaaka   tere  Chehre  ka   BayaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Dena   to   tujhe    chaahta    thha    Chaand - Sitaare  ,
Kya  karta  ,  mera  haath   wahaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


Thee  Taaqat - e - Ghaibee  ki  hui  haathoN  meiN  Larzish  ,
Aur   teer  hi   Qaatil  ka   KamaaN   tak   nahiN   pahuncha


NabzeiN  to   TabeeboN  ne   bahut   dekheeN  ' Hasan '  kee  ,
Par   koi   tah - e - Dard - e - NihaaN  tak  nahiN   pahuncha




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Kaun o makaan = (virtually)Universe ; Mahdood = limited/insufficient ;
Alfaaz e Lughat = words of dictionary ; Bayaan=description ;
Taaqat e ghaibi = unknown power ; Larzish = vibration/kampan;
Kamaan=Bow ;Nabz=pulse ;Tabeeb=doctor; nihaan=hidden


waaaaaah 2nd sher aur maqta khoob rahe Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: June 18, 2013, 12:26:57 AM »
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waah waah waah Hasan saheb, kya khoob ghazal kahi hai, bahut umda. Akhiri donoN sher to kamaal ke rahe.
iftakhar sb , ashaar pasand karne aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut mamnoon hoon.
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