<>*Iss safar me*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 22, 2010, 09:22:04 AM
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<>*Iss safar me*<>


Iss safar me chalte hume log hazaar mile
Kuch jaane pehchane to kuch anjaan mile

Dekhkar muskura diye kabhi wo hume
Kabhi nazrein churate wo saahibaan mile

Kehne ko to sab apne hain yhan is mehfil me
Kahan hume yahan koi aapse kadardaan mile

Jo samjh paaye na hamare ehsaas aat kabhi
Hume aise hi log aksar gaate apne gungaan mile

Zaroori to nahin k kasak ki har khwaish puri ho jaye
Bas itni dua karo k uski parwaz ko khula aasmaan mile...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 09:29:17 AM »
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luved d 2nd one kasak ji....
bahut bahut khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2010, 09:30:40 AM »
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Wah! Just Wonderful!
Aur kya kahe ANU
Aap ki bhasha mein ..
Mastam Ji Mastam
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 09:45:31 AM »
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thnx priya for lking it.....

sir ji aap bhi rang gaye hamare rang me....badhiya hai ji.....thnx ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 09:49:54 AM »
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wah ji wah ..

aji ham to khud ko hi na samajh paye..

aap dusro ko samajhane ki bat kar rah ho..hahaha


yun rang badalti duniya me kuchh mera bhi rang hota,
jyada nahi chah tha bas apna kehene ko koi to apna hota~

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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2010, 09:54:16 AM »
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mujhe to samjh me hi nhi aya..sad5
wo mile means hindi wala ki english wala!!!
lekin bahut sundar hai ye Usual SmileWinking
"" mai kuch farmata hu iske jawaab me zara Nirala style me--btaiyega kaisa hai ok.
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thanx K Madam--bahut achhi kavita
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2010, 10:00:30 AM »
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nirala ji aapka jawab invisible ink se likha hua h kya?Huh?
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 10:01:38 AM »
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wah ji wah ..

aji ham to khud ko hi na samajh paye..

aap dusro ko samajhane ki bat kar rah ho..hahaha


yun rang badalti duniya me kuchh mera bhi rang hota,
jyada nahi chah tha bas apna kehene ko koi to apna hota~



abhi tumhari 2 lines aagai post pe to mehnat safal hui meri.....jsk ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2010, 10:06:10 AM »
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haan ji meri lines invisible ho gai shayd ---
aisi khata wo kr nahi paye ki apke kavita ka jawab ban sake.
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musafir sa hai ye sitamgar jamaana
              koi jaana koi pehchaana sitam to har kisi ko hai kar jaana ""
thanx K mam
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2010, 10:46:56 AM »
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Ek aur achhi poem aapki Anu-di.... icon_king icon_queen Clapping Smiley


Yo ke iss safar mai mujhse mile aap,aapse mili mein
Sambandh ayse ban gaye ki na aap na mein ab hum ho gaye....
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2010, 10:55:34 AM »
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Ek aur achhi poem aapki Anu-di.... icon_king icon_queen Clapping Smiley


Yo ke iss safar mai mujhse mile aap,aapse mili mein
Sambandh ayse ban gaye ki na aap na mein ab hum ho gaye....

tumhara ye reply dil ko chhu gaya betu.....mmuuaahhhh..

aur ye raja rani aur tu mast lag rahe hain...
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2010, 10:58:59 AM »
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<>*Iss safar me*<>


Iss safar me chalte hume log hazaar mile
Kuch jaane pehchane to kuch anjaan mile

Dekhkar muskura diye kabhi wo hume
Kabhi nazrein churate wo saahibaan mile

Kehne ko to sab apne hain yhan is mehfil me
Kahan hume yahan koi aapse kadardaan mile

Jo samjh paaye na hamare ehsaas aat kabhi
Hume aise hi log aksar gaate apne gungaan mile

Zaroori to nahin k kasak ki har khwaish puri ho jaye
Bas itni dua karo k uski parwaz ko khula aasmaan mile...!!!
 
nice lines anu ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2010, 11:01:23 AM »
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nice lines anu ji

ye kya saahil ji ...sirf nice lines...baki post pe to bade shayrana replies hote hain aapke ...yahan kyun nahin... sad5
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2010, 11:02:16 AM »
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haan ji meri lines invisible ho gai shayd ---
aisi khata wo kr nahi paye ki apke kavita ka jawab ban sake.
""
musafir sa hai ye sitamgar jamaana
              koi jaana koi pehchaana sitam to har kisi ko hai kar jaana ""
thanx K mam

bht hi khub hain aapke 2 lines nirala ji ...mast hain
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2010, 11:12:06 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK....DIL KI JI.....

MANZIL MILE N MILE ZINDAGI KE ISS SAFAR ME
BAS IK HAMSAFAR KA SATH MILE "ISS SAFAR ME"...
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