Itna hi bahut hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 02, 2011, 02:41:54 PM
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Shayad abhi tum kuch nasamjh se ho,
per merra har jazbaat ko smjhte ho..itna hi bahut hai,

bhale hi tum padhna likhna kam jante ho,
per merri ankho ko padhte ho..itna hi bahut hai,

zamane k taur tariko se tum wakif nhi ho,
per merre liye chahto ka jahan sajate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

ankho mein apne ansuo ka samander rakhte ho,
per har dafa hasna mujhe sikhate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

dikhane ko merre liye ache humsafar ki dua karte ho,
per apne dil mein tum mujhe chhupate ho,itna hi bahut hai,

namaz padhne ki wajah mujhe batate ho,
aur khuda k aage merre liye sir jhukate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

dooriya bhi rakhte ho aur shikayate bhi karte ho,
kareeb jab aati hu mujhe palko pe bithate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

kal agar juda ho jaye uske liye maafi bhi mangte ho,
per sang rehne k mithe mithe khwab bhi dikhate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

bade masum ho tum aur bade hi nadan ho,
zakhm deke bade pyar se marham bhi lagate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

kal ko hum na ho sake ek tou na sahi,
khush hu main ki tum sache dil se sirrf mujhe hi chahte ho..merre liye bus itna hi bahut hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 03:17:23 PM »
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Excellent Poetry With Sooooo True Feelings...

Geeetji, iss Kavita De Kayi bol Dil Ne Jhinjod Jaande ne, Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Just Loveddddddddddd It icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 03:32:28 PM »
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Aksar loka nu merri kavita vich kuch naya nhi disda per main hamesha pyar te likhdi hai hor koshish kardi hai ki pyar de har ehsas nu alag alag lafza naal pesh karaan,merri chhoti jayi koshish nu pasand karan layi bahut shukriya ji...
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 03:36:59 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 02, 2011, 03:32:28 PM
Aksar loka nu merri kavita vich kuch naya nhi disda per main hamesha pyar te likhdi hai hor koshish kardi hai ki pyar de har ehsas nu alag alag lafza naal pesh karaan,merri chhoti jayi koshish nu pasand karan layi bahut shukriya ji...

Geetji, banda Ohi Likhda Hai Jo Oh Mehsoos Karda Hai, hun Koi Mohabbat Vich Doobeya Hai Te Koi Usnu Kahe ke Desh Di mahaanta Baare Likho, Ki Oh Likh Paayega...Lokan Di Gallan Chado,oh Likho Jo Dilon Mehsoos Karde Ho..
Aur Tussi Jo vi Likhdo ho Oh Humesha Dilon Hi Rehnda Hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 03:40:28 PM »
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Dil se nikle jazbaat hi shayari banate hai..Yeh maine Khwaish dost se seekha hai..
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat Geet di..
Dil se nikla har shabd maloom hua..
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Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2011, 03:36:59 PM
Geetji, banda Ohi Likhda Hai Jo Oh Mehsoos Karda Hai, hun Koi Mohabbat Vich Doobeya Hai Te Koi Usnu Kahe ke Desh Di mahaanta Baare Likho, Ki Oh Likh Paayega...Lokan Di Gallan Chado,oh Likho Jo Dilon Mehsoos Karde Ho..
Aur Tussi Jo vi Likhdo ho Oh Humesha Dilon Hi Rehnda Hai.. icon_flower

Ji sahi keya tusi...thnx for understanding..Usual Smile
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 03:40:28 PM
Dil se nikle jazbaat hi shayari banate hai..Yeh maine Khwaish dost se seekha hai..
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat Geet di..
Dil se nikla har shabd maloom hua..
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Khush rahiye..!

Tumne sahi kaha rahim shayar/shayara wahi likhte hai jo vo dil se mehsus karte hai..phir chahe unke jazbaat mhbt se jude ho ya social issues se...sath dene k liye shukriya..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 05:10:31 PM »
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geet ji kamaal ka likha hai marvellous.
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 05:13:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya suresh ji...
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 06:18:29 PM »
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Shayad abhi tum kuch nasamjh se ho,
per merra har jazbaat ko smjhte ho..itna hi bahut hai,

bhale hi tum padhna likhna kam jante ho,
per merri ankho ko padhte ho..itna hi bahut hai,

zamane k taur tariko se tum wakif nhi ho,
per merre liye chahto ka jahan sajate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

ankho mein apne ansuo ka samander rakhte ho,
per har dafa hasna mujhe sikhate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

dikhane ko merre liye ache humsafar ki dua karte ho,
per apne dil mein tum mujhe chhupate ho,itna hi bahut hai,

namaz padhne ki wajah mujhe batate ho,
aur khuda k aage merre liye sir jhukate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

dooriya bhi rakhte ho aur shikayate bhi karte ho,
kareeb jab aati hu mujhe palko pe bithate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

kal agar juda ho jaye uske liye maafi bhi mangte ho,
per sang rehne k mithe mithe khwab bhi dikhate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

bade masum ho tum aur bade hi nadan ho,
zakhm deke bade pyar se marham bhi lagate ho..itna hi bahut hai,

kal ko hum na ho sake ek tou na sahi,
khush hu main ki tum sache dil se sirrf mujhe hi chahte ho..merre liye bus itna hi bahut hai.........

Very Touching ... broken ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 07:03:07 PM »
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Bohat Barhiya Brokenbyluv Ji
Kya Khoobsurti Se Dil K Ehsaasaat Ko
Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein Pesh Kiya Hai
Bohat Kam Logon Ko Aise Chahne Wale Milte Hain
Jo Is Qadar Muhabbat Ko Mahsoos Kar Saken.Khair
Bohat Khoob Ji. Humesha Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 01:22:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji n hum dum ji...
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2011, 12:09:58 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI Applause
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Bahut shukriya rishi ji n shihab ji..
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Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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