ITNEE JALDI (2- Liner)... "MohaN"

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ITNEE JALDI (2 versions of writing)

Bicharhne kee tujhe itnee jaldi bhi kyaa thee
Mujhe bhi kahan hameshaa hee rehnaa thaa

Bicharhne kaa tujhe iss qadar jald bhi kyaa thaa
Main ne bhi kahan sadaa sadaa hee rehnaa thaa


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ITNEE JALDI (2 versions of writing)

Bicharhne kee tujhe itnee jaldi bhi kyaa thee
Mujhe bhi kahan hameshaa hee rehnaa thaa

Bicharhne kaa tujhe iss qadar jald bhi kyaa thaa
Main ne bhi kahan sadaa sadaa hee rehnaa thaa


Surindar. N           "MohaN"



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