~~~Ittefaq~~~

by Vikk on July 13, 2009, 07:06:39 PM
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Ittefaq mein zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se bhi zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se hi zindagi milti hai,
Ittefaq ki ek ghadi zindagi badal jati hai.


Kagaz ke ek panne par giri syahi,
Jaise taqdeer ke har panne par chaap chod  jaati hai,
par ittefaq se us par likha phir bhi kuch reh jata hai,
jo syahi me doobe har panne par apni baat likhta jata hai.


kehne ko chaaron mausam ek baras ke hote hain,
par badalte waqt sab duje par vaar karte hain,
par samjho ise bhi ek ittefaq hi,
ki patjhad me girta har patta basant ki chaap chod jaata hai.


Anhoni kuch ho jaaye agar to ittefaq hi samjho use,
diya jo bujh jaaye agar, beeti raat hi samjho use,
jo choot jaaye kuch haathon se, beeti raat hi samjho use,
Ittefaq hi to tha aakhir, jo haathon me na tha,
pakad kar kyon rona use, pakad kar kyo rona use.

-Vikas Lalwani (Vikk)
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 07:17:14 PM »
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wow once again.. dil ki bhawnaao ko bakhubi apne shabdo main utara hai...

mai un liogo mai se hu jo yah manti hai ki her baat ka koi na koi reason hota hai.. magar phir bhi apke sath likhne ki koshish main kuch likhne ja rahi hu:

Itefaq se mile magar Jeene ka sahara ban gaye
kuch log musafir hote hue bhi gumo ka kinara ban gaya!!

hum,mm baat nahi ban rahi so do line mai chor rahi hu... mere liye likhana mushkil ho jaata hai agar main khud he baat per yakin na kar saku..
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2009, 07:35:02 PM »
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bahut acha likha h aapne vikk ji.

nice lines from u pooja ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2009, 12:58:19 AM »
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Wah Vikk ji kamaal ka likha aapne,excellent,wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Pooja ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2009, 03:56:18 AM »
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Thanks Khushi ji and Madhu ji... likhna to chaha tha magar baat nahi bani sad5
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2009, 05:19:47 AM »
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Are Pooja Ji, yu nirash na ho aap
Chaliye aapki do line ko hum chaar kiye dete hain

Itefaq se mile magar Jeene ka sahara ban gaye
kuch log musafir hote hue bhi gumo ka kinara ban gaye
par dekho sikke ke do pehlu, ek duje se peeth kar khade hain
par zameen pe girte girte humsafar ka ishara ban gaye.


And thank u very much khushi ji, madhu ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2009, 05:41:39 AM »
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bahoot khoob Vikk ji, bahoot acha likha hai apne.... mere liye kalpna ho ya suchaai.. mehsoos karna jaroori hota hai... warna likhte likhte shabd goom ho jaate hai...

magar apne bakhoobi do line ko char bana kar, char chand laga diye... Good work.
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2009, 11:18:25 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooob Vikk Bhai.. Lajawab Likha hai Mere Dost.. aap Bahut Accha Likhte hain.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause

Aur Pooja Ji aapne Bhi Accha Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2009, 11:34:15 AM »
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Quote from: Vikk on July 13, 2009, 07:06:39 PM
Ittefaq mein zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se bhi zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se hi zindagi milti hai,
Ittefaq ki ek ghadi zindagi badal jati hai.


Kagaz ke ek panne par giri syahi,
Jaise taqdeer ke har panne par chaap chod  jaati hai,
par ittefaq se us par likha phir bhi kuch reh jata hai,
jo syahi me doobe har panne par apni baat likhta jata hai.


kehne ko chaaron mausam ek baras ke hote hain,
par badalte waqt sab duje par vaar karte hain,
par samjho ise bhi ek ittefaq hi,
ki patjhad me girta har patta basant ki chaap chod jaata hai.


Anhoni kuch ho jaaye agar to ittefaq hi samjho use,
diya jo bujh jaaye agar, beeti raat hi samjho use,
jo choot jaaye kuch haathon se, beeti raat hi samjho use,
Ittefaq hi to tha aakhir, jo haathon me na tha,
pakad kar kyon rona use, pakad kar kyo rona use.

-Vikas Lalwani (Vikk)

wah vikas ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2009, 12:23:44 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mann ji, Jas ji
Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2009, 09:20:06 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 14, 2009, 11:18:25 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooob Vikk Bhai.. Lajawab Likha hai Mere Dost.. aap Bahut Accha Likhte hain.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause

Aur Pooja Ji aapne Bhi Accha Likha hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks mann ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2009, 01:47:56 PM »
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Quote from: Vikk on July 13, 2009, 07:06:39 PM
Ittefaq mein zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se bhi zindagiya guzar jati hain,
Ittefaq se hi zindagi milti hai,
Ittefaq ki ek ghadi zindagi badal jati hai.


Kagaz ke ek panne par giri syahi,
Jaise taqdeer ke har panne par chaap chod  jaati hai,
par ittefaq se us par likha phir bhi kuch reh jata hai,
jo syahi me doobe har panne par apni baat likhta jata hai.


kehne ko chaaron mausam ek baras ke hote hain,
par badalte waqt sab duje par vaar karte hain,
par samjho ise bhi ek ittefaq hi,
ki patjhad me girta har patta basant ki chaap chod jaata hai.


Anhoni kuch ho jaaye agar to ittefaq hi samjho use,
diya jo bujh jaaye agar, beeti raat hi samjho use,
jo choot jaaye kuch haathon se, beeti raat hi samjho use,
Ittefaq hi to tha aakhir, jo haathon me na tha,
pakad kar kyon rona use, pakad kar kyo rona use.

-Vikas Lalwani (Vikk)

Vikk Ji

Bohot Khoob

Welcome to Yoindia
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2009, 04:00:05 PM »
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Kya baat hai, wah wah
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