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Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on January 04, 2011, 08:23:25 AM

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mamta bajpai

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Baad muddat ke meri aaNkhoN se paanee nikale
dil ko tad.paye koi yaad purani nikale

reNgate rote yuN hee khak basar hotee rahee
kaisee mazloom o majboor jawaanee nikale

koi to baat kabhee khaas zehan me aaye
yuN to aawaaraa khayaaloN kee rawaanee nikale

ghumshudaa hai jo koi uskaa pataa detee hai
khwaab me yaad koi uskee suhaanee nikale

har balaa husn kee deti naheeN anjaam e wafaa
jaa b jaa Heer see koi hee diwaanee nikale

Mamta Bajpai


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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2011, 08:59:01 AM »

wow mamta ji
Too good ...:.....
Specialy 1 and last one....
Simply superb.....
Hats off.......


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2011, 09:03:08 AM »

Bahut Khub Mamta Ji


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riyaz106

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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2011, 09:52:51 AM »

Behad khoobsurat ghazal hai Mamta ji. Daad hazir hai.


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2011, 09:59:52 AM »

ahaaa ahaaaa...kya baat hai mamta dii..

"kaise majloom-o-majoor ye jawaani nikale" kya khoob kaha

jawaan dilon ki to jaan niakal di apne..

abhi kisi or junoo me hun par koshish karta hun kuchh apnni taraf se..

har eham-o-wafa pe meri usi ka zikra hota hai
samandar se gehri ho dil se koi to eisi kahaani nikale~


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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2011, 10:40:18 AM »

Achha kalaam hai Mamta-di..... Applause

Sahne ko tou ab unki judaayi seh leti hu
Par jab yaad sataaye tou sakhee jaan nikle

Harr basar hota nahi Mahiwaal ya Raanjha
Jaa be jaa tujhse ess raha par bahut nikle

Quote from: mamta bajpai on January 04, 2011, 08:23:25 AM


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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2011, 03:02:56 PM »

Mamta ji ab kya kahen aapke iss kalaam par. sabke comnts dekh kar ab kuch bachta hi nahi kahne ko.
itni gahrai hai isme aur feel uff subhan allah.
aapki peshkash pr bas dil haarta hun main.
behtareen..
khus rahiye ji dil se .
***
apni mohabbat ke bhi parwaan chade
kar aisa kamaal aye khuda
ke unki hatheli par hi meri bhi ab kismat nikle
***
sukriya


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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2011, 11:40:11 PM »

shukriyaa Rishi jee!


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Re: Jaa b jaa Heer see .........Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2011, 12:33:31 AM »

Bohat achche Mamta Ji,.
Har baar ki taraah, ye ghazal bhi Dil ko lagi,.


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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2011, 03:43:13 AM »

wah... mamtaji .. kya baat hai..

sach main dil ki baat hai ek dam asali... kya kahun daad kubul karen...


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mamta bajpai

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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2011, 05:25:34 PM »

Manzil e ishq jee bahut bahtu shukriyaa....yuN hee housla afzai karte rahiye....


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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2011, 05:30:24 PM »

wah maza aa gaya...keep it up


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mamta bajpai

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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2011, 06:16:37 AM »

Guddu jee aap ke aanand me hee humaare kalaam kee kaamyaabee hai.......gazal pasand karne kaa behad shukriyaa.....


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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2011, 06:20:57 AM »

Shukriyaa Manjum jee!talkhiyoN kee teekhee talwaar jab jigar par chaltee hai lafz khud b khud qataraa qataraa tapkne lagte haiN....yaa yuN kahiye dil cheer kar baahar aa jaate haiN...aap kee gazal pasandagee kaa behad shukriyaa.....