Jaag jaataa mein, kaash, tum ney jagaayaa hotaa!

by abdbundeli on June 08, 2009, 11:00:59 AM
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Saath parwaaz pai jaaney kaa gar patah hotaa:
Jaag jaataa mein, kaash, tum ney jagaayaa hotaa!
Jannatoun mein kayee uljhey huye dozakh jee kar;
Khwaab key syaah ujaaloun ko aur kyoon dhhotaa?

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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 11:20:07 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 08, 2009, 11:00:59 AM
Saath parwaaz pai jaaney kaa gar patah hotaa:
Jaag jaataa mein, kaash, tum ney jagaayaa hotaa!
Jannatoun mein kayee uljhey huye dozakh jee kar;
Khwaab key syaah ujaaloun ko aur kyoon dhhotaa?

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BOhat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 11:43:37 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 08, 2009, 11:20:07 AM
BOhat Achche,.
Thanks Azeem ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2009, 11:43:57 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 11:47:23 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 08, 2009, 11:43:57 AM
Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Lot many thanks Celmira bitia!
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2009, 11:56:16 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 08, 2009, 11:53:26 AM
Bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji,hamesha ki tarah paripakwata se labrez,awesome
Thanks a lot, @kaash ji!
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2009, 12:52:08 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 08, 2009, 11:00:59 AM
Saath parwaaz pai jaaney kaa gar patah hotaa:
Jaag jaataa mein, kaash, tum ney jagaayaa hotaa!
Jannatoun mein kayee uljhey huye dozakh jee kar;
Khwaab key syaah ujaaloun ko aur kyoon dhhotaa?

                                  - abd bundeli



BAHAUT ACHCHA...ABD
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2009, 01:39:37 PM »
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Bohut khoob Abd ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2009, 03:51:20 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 08, 2009, 12:52:08 PM

BAHAUT ACHCHA...ABD
Shukriyah khamosh_aawaaz ji!
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 03:52:27 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on June 08, 2009, 01:39:37 PM
Bohut khoob Abd ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2010, 03:29:04 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 08, 2009, 11:00:59 AM
Saath parwaaz pai jaaney kaa gar patah hotaa:
Jaag jaataa mein, kaash, tum ney jagaayaa hotaa!
Jannatoun mein kayee uljhey huye dozakh jee kar;
Khwaab key syaah ujaaloun ko aur kyoon dhhotaa?

                                  - abd bundeli


Very nice  Applause

Hamari baat pe gaur karo jee
Kuch aur manzile dund lo abd,
Nayi raahguzr talash lo,
Choot gaye gar purane saathi,
Tum naye doston ka aagaas kar lo

Bhool jao, Dil se hame nikal lo
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 03:29:49 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 29, 2010, 03:29:04 PM
Very nice  Applause

Hamari baat pe gaur karo jee
Kuch aur manzile dund lo abd,
Nayi raahguzr talash lo,
Choot gaye gar purane saathi,
Tum naye doston ka aagaas kar lo

Bhool jao, Dil se hame nikal lo


Thanks a lot, 'malli'!

Kahaan jaauungaa nikal kar,
Rawaan reig key saath?
Nazareyn tak majboor hain;
Lo haathoun mein haath!

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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2010, 04:16:36 PM »
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Thanks a lot, 'malli'!

Kahaan jaauungaa nikal kar,
Rawaan reig key saath?
Nazareyn tak majboor hain;
Lo haathoun mein haath!

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Tumhe dekhne se log mujhko jaan jaate hai

Mai voh koyi huyi ek cheez hu jiska pata tum ho  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2010, 01:32:49 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 04:16:36 PM
Dunia badi hai na Uncle ji  

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Main voh khoyi huyi ek cheez hun jiska pata tum ho  Usual Smile
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Ab kyaa aisaa bachaa hai,
Jo jaayegaa reet?

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